Looking for a review!
Romkeh ( talk) 00:05, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I have recently merged Hamedori and Gonzo pornography into Point of view pornography, per the discussion. I was wondering if my merger is clean enough. See the diffs here. Warning, the article has a picture. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:29, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:29, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Relisted from 2011 April 16.
Previous discussion
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I've been working on this article for a little bit, and I have been doing lots of Google searches to find information about it. I'm worried though, that if I move this to mainspace that it might get CSD'd/PROD'd/AFD'd for lack of notability because of a (possible) lack of reliable sources. Are the sources I have provided so far reliable enough? I believe the song is notable, since it is being played on many different radio stations, and is not an "independent record label". Granted, the label company is brand-new, but I am also working on creating that article as well. Please feel free to take a look at that one here). I also plan to make an article for the singer as well. I do know I need to work on the {{ cite web}} references more. – Ajl talk 23:48, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
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Can I get some answers please? – AJL talk 01:31, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article and I am seeking feedback. Thank you.
Dennisjohara ( talk) 04:47, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for the feedback! I'm just getting started with Wikipedia, and I read all of the guidelines for posting articles before I posted this one. I searched for articles on other professional poker players, and some have not yet achieved the level of success as this young man yet their articles have been up for a long period of time. That is why I thought that he would pass the notability test. Also, can you go into more detail as to why the sources I've cited are not verifiable or reliable? Rereading the guidlines, the sources seem to pass both tests. I'm not trying to challenge your feedback; I'm just trying to understand so that I can make the article acceptable and avoid these errors in the future. Thank you!
There are many on Wikipedia, here is a partial list: Doug Lee, Andre Boyer, Robert Turner, David Warba, David Baxter, David Bach, Andrew Black, Ralph Perry. Some of these gentlemen have won more money or more tournaments than Taylor von Kriegenbergh, but none have done nor will do what he has done. It is extremely rare for someone to win more than $1 million in his or her very first World Poker Tour tournament, in fact I do not believe that it has been done before. I have not verified that with a reliable source, so that is why it is not yet included in the article. Please let me know your thoughts after you browse some of these players' articles, and thank you for all of your help!
Hello, I'm trying to improve the page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cass_Business_School in response to constructive feedback we've had. I'm a total novice and I'm finding it quite challenging. I've posted a possible revision on the dicussion section of the page (which will obviously need citations added) and would love feedback!
Bensawtell ( talk) 13:40, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I've moved this page from my userspace to live. This is my first brand new article, if anyone has suggestions or feedback I'd love to hear it. If someone could review it and remove the "new unreviewed article" status (assuming it's up to snuff) I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
76.175.169.127 ( talk) 14:38, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I have expanded an existing article, Computer Icons. Would like some editing help and guidance in adding it to the topic. This is my first article submitted to wikipedia, so I am unfamiliar with your process.
thank you
Smithriedel (
talk) 17:00, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I would appreciate feedback on this article and, if someone feels it has the right style and references, perhaps they would remove the "New Unreviewed Article" box. Thanks
Skrbishop ( talk) 17:14, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi. I would very much appreciate it if anyone could please take the time to review my 'new unreviewed article'. It should contain reliable sources.
Thank you in advance!
Emba7 EilertE ( talk) 17:18, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I created this article first as a userspace draft, so if anyone has any thoughts about how this article can be improved, I would appreciate it! Thanks!
Gaebler ( talk) 20:49, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Please refer to all the links provided to check all the validity of the article provided.
Da24mk (
talk) 22:02, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Please can you give me feedback to the article I have linked? I am new to Wikipedia and am still in the process of learning how it all works!
Thanks in advance :)
Darkwingduck123 (
talk) 22:35, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi there - I've submitted this article and would like feedback to get it ready to go live. Thank you.
Amadavida (
talk) 23:55, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Looking for a review!
Romkeh ( talk) 00:05, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I have recently merged Hamedori and Gonzo pornography into Point of view pornography, per the discussion. I was wondering if my merger is clean enough. See the diffs here. Warning, the article has a picture. Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:29, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Crisco 1492 ( talk) 01:29, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Relisted from 2011 April 16.
Previous discussion
|
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I've been working on this article for a little bit, and I have been doing lots of Google searches to find information about it. I'm worried though, that if I move this to mainspace that it might get CSD'd/PROD'd/AFD'd for lack of notability because of a (possible) lack of reliable sources. Are the sources I have provided so far reliable enough? I believe the song is notable, since it is being played on many different radio stations, and is not an "independent record label". Granted, the label company is brand-new, but I am also working on creating that article as well. Please feel free to take a look at that one here). I also plan to make an article for the singer as well. I do know I need to work on the {{ cite web}} references more. – Ajl talk 23:48, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
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Can I get some answers please? – AJL talk 01:31, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
This is my first article and I am seeking feedback. Thank you.
Dennisjohara ( talk) 04:47, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for the feedback! I'm just getting started with Wikipedia, and I read all of the guidelines for posting articles before I posted this one. I searched for articles on other professional poker players, and some have not yet achieved the level of success as this young man yet their articles have been up for a long period of time. That is why I thought that he would pass the notability test. Also, can you go into more detail as to why the sources I've cited are not verifiable or reliable? Rereading the guidlines, the sources seem to pass both tests. I'm not trying to challenge your feedback; I'm just trying to understand so that I can make the article acceptable and avoid these errors in the future. Thank you!
There are many on Wikipedia, here is a partial list: Doug Lee, Andre Boyer, Robert Turner, David Warba, David Baxter, David Bach, Andrew Black, Ralph Perry. Some of these gentlemen have won more money or more tournaments than Taylor von Kriegenbergh, but none have done nor will do what he has done. It is extremely rare for someone to win more than $1 million in his or her very first World Poker Tour tournament, in fact I do not believe that it has been done before. I have not verified that with a reliable source, so that is why it is not yet included in the article. Please let me know your thoughts after you browse some of these players' articles, and thank you for all of your help!
Hello, I'm trying to improve the page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cass_Business_School in response to constructive feedback we've had. I'm a total novice and I'm finding it quite challenging. I've posted a possible revision on the dicussion section of the page (which will obviously need citations added) and would love feedback!
Bensawtell ( talk) 13:40, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I've moved this page from my userspace to live. This is my first brand new article, if anyone has suggestions or feedback I'd love to hear it. If someone could review it and remove the "new unreviewed article" status (assuming it's up to snuff) I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
76.175.169.127 ( talk) 14:38, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I have expanded an existing article, Computer Icons. Would like some editing help and guidance in adding it to the topic. This is my first article submitted to wikipedia, so I am unfamiliar with your process.
thank you
Smithriedel (
talk) 17:00, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I would appreciate feedback on this article and, if someone feels it has the right style and references, perhaps they would remove the "New Unreviewed Article" box. Thanks
Skrbishop ( talk) 17:14, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi. I would very much appreciate it if anyone could please take the time to review my 'new unreviewed article'. It should contain reliable sources.
Thank you in advance!
Emba7 EilertE ( talk) 17:18, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
I created this article first as a userspace draft, so if anyone has any thoughts about how this article can be improved, I would appreciate it! Thanks!
Gaebler ( talk) 20:49, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Please refer to all the links provided to check all the validity of the article provided.
Da24mk (
talk) 22:02, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Please can you give me feedback to the article I have linked? I am new to Wikipedia and am still in the process of learning how it all works!
Thanks in advance :)
Darkwingduck123 (
talk) 22:35, 6 May 2011 (UTC)
Hi there - I've submitted this article and would like feedback to get it ready to go live. Thank you.
Amadavida (
talk) 23:55, 6 May 2011 (UTC)