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Sentence: At the direction of Michael, his man destroyed the house of Terry, who driven his car without permission, and loot Terry's cash, hacked Terry's email.
How to phrase this sentence grammatical? I tried my best but annoyed due to placement of "and" word Rizosome ( talk) 14:15, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
Do reader can understand money and email belong to Terry from your sentence?: Terry drove Michael's car without permission, and Michael ordered someone to destroy Terry's house, loot his cash, and hack his email. Rizosome ( talk) 14:49, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
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Sentence: At the direction of Michael, his man destroyed the house of Terry, who driven his car without permission, and loot Terry's cash, hacked Terry's email.
How to phrase this sentence grammatical? I tried my best but annoyed due to placement of "and" word Rizosome ( talk) 14:15, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
Do reader can understand money and email belong to Terry from your sentence?: Terry drove Michael's car without permission, and Michael ordered someone to destroy Terry's house, loot his cash, and hack his email. Rizosome ( talk) 14:49, 6 August 2021 (UTC)