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I have built this article little by little by using the best available sources. Any advice how to further improve it? The target is Featured Article status.
As English is not my native language the text may contain typos and obscure sentences which you are more than welcome to fix.
Cheers, Gwafton ( talk) 21:11, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Bot review Bot review comments copied from this page. My comments below in Italic. -- Gwafton ( talk) 18:48, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 35 mm, use 35 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 35 mm.
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I have built this article little by little by using the best available sources. Any advice how to further improve it? The target is Featured Article status.
As English is not my native language the text may contain typos and obscure sentences which you are more than welcome to fix.
Cheers, Gwafton ( talk) 21:11, 13 May 2014 (UTC)
Bot review Bot review comments copied from this page. My comments below in Italic. -- Gwafton ( talk) 18:48, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
Suggestions generated by an automatic JavaScript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 35 mm, use 35 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 35 mm.
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