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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a brand new article, my first, and needs a good working over. My lousy referencing has already had a good overhaul (thanks Hohum), but I think that phraseology, especially NPoV, would benefit from outside eyes and it needs a different/additional map. Plus anything else I have missed.
Thanks, Gog the Mild ( talk) 22:46, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
To start, here's a few hand-selected comments from the automatic tool. Ping me if I forget to personally comment later.
My personal comments to come on the morrow. Eddie891 Talk Work 23:38, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
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Comments from AustralianRupert: G'day, Gog, interesting article. Good luck with developing it further: AustralianRupert ( talk) 07:53, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a brand new article, my first, and needs a good working over. My lousy referencing has already had a good overhaul (thanks Hohum), but I think that phraseology, especially NPoV, would benefit from outside eyes and it needs a different/additional map. Plus anything else I have missed.
Thanks, Gog the Mild ( talk) 22:46, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
To start, here's a few hand-selected comments from the automatic tool. Ping me if I forget to personally comment later.
My personal comments to come on the morrow. Eddie891 Talk Work 23:38, 3 February 2018 (UTC)
Comments
Comments from AustralianRupert: G'day, Gog, interesting article. Good luck with developing it further: AustralianRupert ( talk) 07:53, 17 February 2018 (UTC)