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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 pounds, use 200 pounds, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200 pounds.
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[[Category:Categories]]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 40 gallons, use 40 gallons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 40 gallons.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 micrometres, use 10 micrometres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 micrometres.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2008 NL, use 2008 NL, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2008 NL.
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*There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 180 gram, use 180 gram, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 180 gram.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1332 meter, use 1332 meter, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1332 meter.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 miles , use 5 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 miles .
[?]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20 gallons, use 20 gallons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20 gallons.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
[?]
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 425 miles, use 425 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 425 miles . [1]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 9 inches, use 9 inches, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 9 inches.
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*Per
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[?]
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
[?]
*The script has spotted the following contractions: aren't, Can't, don't, aren't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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*There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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[[Category:Categories]]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 30 pounds, use 30 pounds, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 30 pounds.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 13 km, use 13 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 13 km.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 280 mm, use 280 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 280 mm.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 miles , use 10 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 miles .
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 600 mg, use 600 mg, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 600 mg.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2 miles , use 2 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2 miles .
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 km, use 8 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 8 km.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate
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Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
[?]
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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[[Category:Categories]]
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*There are a few occurrences of
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 miles , use 5 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 miles .
[?]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20 gallons, use 20 gallons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20 gallons.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
[?]
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 425 miles, use 425 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 425 miles . [1]
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*Per
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[?]
*Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
[?]
*The script has spotted the following contractions: aren't, Can't, don't, aren't, wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
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*There are a few occurrences of
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WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
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[[Category:Categories]]
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 30 pounds, use 30 pounds, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 30 pounds.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 13 km, use 13 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 13 km.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 280 mm, use 280 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 280 mm.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 miles , use 10 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 miles .
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 600 mg, use 600 mg, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 600 mg.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2 miles , use 2 miles , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2 miles .
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 km, use 8 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 8 km.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1895cl, use 1895 cl, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1895 cl.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 100 nm, use 100 nm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 100 nm.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 meters, use 5 meters, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 meters.
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{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
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*You may wish to consider adding an appropriate
infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article.
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*Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.
[?]
**Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 21 Grams, use 21 Grams, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 21 Grams.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 105 mm, use 105 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 105 mm.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 60 kilograms, use 60 kilograms, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 60 kilograms.
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 198 kilograms, use 198 kilograms, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 198 kilograms.
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