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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 16 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
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t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 15 cm, use 15 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 15 cm.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9] Specifically, an example is 15 cm.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- allege
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), fiber (A) (British: fibre), analyze (A) (British: analyse), any more (B) (American: anymore).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 17cm, use 17 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 17 cm.
[8]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently and soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under the
Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the
Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9] Specifically, an example is in..
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 4 cm, use 4 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 4 cm.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9] Specifically, an example is 12.8 in..
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: organise (B) (American: organize), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), anymore (A) (British: any more), any more (B) (American: anymore), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: charasmatic (charismatic),recieved (received).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:34, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 90 cm, use 90 cm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 90 cm.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9] Specifically, an example is 90 cm .
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 metric ton, use 8 metric ton, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 8 metric ton.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), recognise (B) (American: recognize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: philosphy (philosophy).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20inch, use 20 inch, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20 inch.
[8]
Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- I find it a little unclear how much longer the lead should ideally be. I think I zapped all the weasel words and unnecessarily-linked dates; I'd like to know if you spot any specific instances of word redundancy. Thank you
BotleySmith 06:42, 3 December 2006 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 4 inch, use 4 inch, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 4 inch.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: disapointing (disappointing).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: nowe (now).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2535 lb, use 2535 lb, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2535 lb.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9] Specifically, an example is 1150 kg .
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: inbetween (between),inlcuding (including).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 23:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- allege
- many people believe
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 17 miles, use 17 miles, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 17 miles.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 20 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:24, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: Gameboy (Game Boy),predecesors (predecessors),seperate (separate),weaponary (weaponry).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:24, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 117 gram, use 117 gram, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 117 gram.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), recognize (A) (British: recognise), colonize (A) (British: colonise), ization (A) (British: isation), aging (A) (British: ageing), cosy (B) (American: cozy), gray (A) (British: grey), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: auther (author).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 19 additive terms, a bit too much.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: conciousness (consciousness),decribing (describing).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: publically (publicly).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 000 tons , use 000 tons , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 000 tons .
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: flavor (A) (British: flavour), flavour (B) (American: flavor), honour (B) (American: honor), behavior (A) (British: behaviour), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), organize (A) (British: organise), aging (A) (British: ageing).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: prominant (prominent).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 19 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 17 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:24, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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t 22:24, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 18 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:24, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 km, use 200 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200 km.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), realise (B) (American: realize), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing), cheque (B) (American: check), grey (B) (American: gray), mould (B) (American: mold), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 01:35, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 10 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 16 feet, use 16 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 16 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), please do not
link words in headings.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: noteably (notably).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 17 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behavior (A) (British: behaviour), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), diarrhoea (B) (American: diarrhea), modelling (B) (American: modeling), grey (B) (American: gray), mold (A) (British: mould), sulfur (A) (British: sulphur).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:26, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: assasination (assassination),focussed (focused).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 35 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last year might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 38 miles, use 38 miles, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 38 miles.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: prominately (prominently, predominately).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: focussed (focused),ressurect (resurrect).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 10 Yards, use 10 Yards, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 10 Yards.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1 lb, use 1 lb, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1 lb.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 20 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- many people have
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 31 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:32, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 22 feet, use 22 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 22 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- “In
the year [of] 1990”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, previous [day/week/month/year] might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 40 mile, use 40 mile, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 40 mile.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, previous [day/week/month/year] might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 000 feet, use 000 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 000 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 feet, use 5 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), ization (A) (British: isation), any more (B) (American: anymore).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 11 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 19:10, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- As per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
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WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:What is a featured article?,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: severeal (several).
- Watch for
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- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 14 additive terms, a bit too much.
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All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
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[2]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
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- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honour (B) (American: honor), armour (B) (American: armor), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), metre (B) (American: meter), ization (A) (British: isation), travelled (B) (American: traveled), enrolment (B) (American: enrollment), sulfur (A) (British: sulphur), sulphur (B) (American: sulfur).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: provicial (provincial).
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t 00:49, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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- I don't seen any months or days of the week linked in the article. Virtually all years in the article are linked, but that's because they provide context for the discussion of the cave's place in human history.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 135 feet, use 135 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 135 feet.
[8]
- Is that what the
stuff means? I'd seen it in other articles before and had no idea what it was or what function it served. I've gone through the article and inserted that between the numbers and the units.
- I don't see any full dates or months with dates in the article.
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: visable (visible).
- I fixed visible (thanks for pointing it out!) and copied the rest of the article into Word and ran the spell checker on it. The only things it caught were Celsius and Fahrenheit; it didn't like that they wern't capitalized.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- I fixed the one or two that wern't like that.
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- Thank you for the suggestions. It's hard to copyedit something you've written yourself, and even when two or three people have copyedited it there are often still errors. I welcome any copyediting help anyone can provide. ~
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- Changed "The title family" section to "Primary characters". --
Maitch 11:53, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Changed "The Simpsons Movie" to "Movie". --
Maitch 11:53, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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- This is incorrect. --
Maitch 11:25, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Lots of subpages. --
Maitch 11:25, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
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[17]
- One instance of "arguably", which is now removed. --
Maitch 11:57, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: favorite (A) (British: favourite), realize (A) (British: realise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), installment (A) (British: instalment), ageing (B) (American: aging), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- The article uses American English. I found none the British examples in the text, but I did find one in a piped link, which must be what the bot have caught. --
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- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 36 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
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- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- There may be an applicable
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Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 5 inch, use 5 inch, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 5 inch.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
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Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 20 feet, use 20 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 20 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
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[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1000 km, use 1000 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1000 km.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), realise (B) (American: realize), categorize (A) (British: categorise), ization (A) (British: isation), equalling (B) (American: equaling), modeling (A) (British: modelling).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: metalic (metallic).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under the
Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the
Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- many people have
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), organize (A) (British: organise), organise (B) (American: organize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), counselor (A) (British: counsellor), counsellor (B) (American: counselor), skillful (A) (British: skilful).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 00:49, 21 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1200 feet, use 1200 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1200 feet.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Build the web, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), meter (A) (British: metre), criticize (A) (British: criticise), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), analyze (A) (British: analyse), traveled (A) (British: travelled), check (A) (British: cheque), grey (B) (American: gray), program (A) (British: programme).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under the
Wikipedia:Image use policy and fit under one of the
Wikipedia:Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- There may be an applicable
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Template:Infobox City.
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- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
Wikipedia:Guide to layout.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
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strike this comment).
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- Watch for
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 65nm, use 65 nm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 65 nm.
[8]
- Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and
Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
Wikipedia:Context and
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 12 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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t 18:25, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Images with
fair use tags need
fair use rationales - please see
WP:FUC. Specifically,
Image:somethingwickedthiswaycomes1.jpg need(s) proper fair use rationales.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: comparision (comparison).
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 17:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last year might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 34 Foot, use 34 Foot, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 34 Foot.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: flavour (B) (American: flavor), honour (B) (American: honor), harbour (B) (American: harbor), metre (B) (American: meter), defence (B) (American: defense), organise (B) (American: organize), recognize (A) (British: recognise), recognise (B) (American: recognize), aging (A) (British: ageing), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 17:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 204FT, use 204 FT, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 204 FT.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: aluminum (A) (British: aluminium), aluminium (B) (American: aluminum), fiber (A) (British: fibre), mould (B) (American: mold).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 17:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Images with
fair use tags need
fair use rationales - please see
WP:FUC. Specifically,
Image:Ph2-062705.jpg and
Image:Ph1-022406.jpg need(s) proper fair use rationales.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 1YD, use 1 YD, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 1 YD.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 17:15, 18 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 01:53, 17 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), honor (A) (British: honour), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), defense (A) (British: defence), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), paralyse (B) (American: paralyze).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).
[17]
Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: behaviour (B) (American: behavior), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), criticise (B) (American: criticize), anymore (A) (British: any more), cheque (B) (American: check).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), honor (A) (British: honour), recognise (B) (American: recognize), criticize (A) (British: criticise), categorize (A) (British: categorise).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it is claimed
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), harbour (B) (American: harbor), metre (B) (American: meter), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), organise (B) (American: organize), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing), jewellery (B) (American: jewelry), programme (B) (American: program ).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), aluminium (B) (American: aluminum), meter (A) (British: metre), center (A) (British: centre), fiber (A) (British: fibre), defense (A) (British: defence), organize (A) (British: organise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), ization (A) (British: isation), skillful (A) (British: skilful), skilful (B) (American: skillful), aging (A) (British: ageing), ageing (B) (American: aging), jewelry (A) (British: jewellery), mold (A) (British: mould), program (A) (British: programme).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), center (A) (British: centre), ization (A) (British: isation), travelled (B) (American: traveled), grey (B) (American: gray).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 000 pound, use 000 pound, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 000 pound.
[8]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), mustache (A) (British: moustache), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: surprizing (surprising).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under
WP:IUP and
WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 2004 foot, use 2004 foot, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 2004 foot.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
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t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
*Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
allege
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).
[17]
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, previous [day/week/month/year] might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), recognise (B) (American: recognize), ization (A) (British: isation).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 22:51, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 02:15, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Images need proper
image
copyright tags and source information. Specifically,
Image:Cristo Velázquez lou2.jpg need(s) proper image copyright tags.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), center (A) (British: centre), defense (A) (British: defence), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), travelled (B) (American: traveled), fulfillment (A) (British: fulfilment), check (A) (British: cheque), skeptic (A) (British: sceptic).
- Please check through the article for possible misspellings (see
WP:SPELL). Examples of possible misspellings include: geneology (genealogy).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 20:55, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), colour (B) (American: color), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), center (A) (British: centre), ization (A) (British: isation), anemia (A) (British: anaemia), diarrhea (A) (British: diarrhoea), esophagus (A) (British: oesophagus), aging (A) (British: ageing), check (A) (British: cheque).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 31 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 20:55, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), honour (B) (American: honor), behavior (A) (British: behaviour), behaviour (B) (American: behavior), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), recognize (A) (British: recognise), categorize (A) (British: categorise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), anymore (A) (British: any more).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 20:55, 14 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last week might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), center (A) (British: centre), defense (A) (British: defence), recognize (A) (British: recognise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), fulfilment (B) (American: fulfillment), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
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- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: colour (B) (American: color), defense (A) (British: defence), offense (A) (British: offence), offence (B) (American: offense), recognize (A) (British: recognise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), criticise (B) (American: criticize), check (A) (British: cheque).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 35 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), center (A) (British: centre), organize (A) (British: organise), recognize (A) (British: recognise), criticize (A) (British: criticise), criticise (B) (American: criticize), ization (A) (British: isation), aging (A) (British: ageing), check (A) (British: cheque), grey (B) (American: gray), curb (A) (British: kerb), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), metre (B) (American: meter), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), defence (B) (American: defense).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article. Done
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14] Done
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8] Done
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day. Done
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==. Done
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), colour (B) (American: color), honor (A) (British: honour), armour (B) (American: armor), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), defense (A) (British: defence), defence (B) (American: defense), isation (B) (American: ization), grey (B) (American: gray).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), center (A) (British: centre), defense (A) (British: defence), ization (A) (British: isation), installment (A) (British: instalment), anymore (A) (British: any more), grey (B) (American: gray), program (A) (British: programme).
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last week might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honor (A) (British: honour), neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), meter (A) (British: metre), center (A) (British: centre), centre (B) (American: center), recognize (A) (British: recognise), enrollment (A) (British: enrolment).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 16 additive terms, a bit too much.
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 20:01, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Images with
fair use tags need
fair use rationales - please see
WP:FUC. Specifically,
Image:Hanso-web.jpg,
Image:Hansoexposed-web.png,
Image:Sublymonal.jpg,
Image:Compass guide you.jpg, and
Image:Retrievers_of_truth.png need(s) proper fair use rationales.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 20:01, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- This article does not have any
categories. Please categorize it with relevant
[[Category:Categories]]
.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
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t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- arguably
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: recognize (A) (British: recognise), realize (A) (British: realise), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), aging (A) (British: ageing), program (A) (British: programme), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: center (A) (British: centre), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), program (A) (British: programme), skeptic (A) (British: sceptic).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: color (A) (British: colour), honor (A) (British: honour), mustache (A) (British: moustache), moustache (B) (American: mustache), meter (A) (British: metre), aging (A) (British: ageing), programme (B) (American: program ).
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 40 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
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t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either
American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: centre (B) (American: center), traveled (A) (British: travelled), aging (A) (British: ageing), programme (B) (American: program ), sceptic (B) (American: skeptic).
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 18:02, 12 November 2006 (UTC)
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
*Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word 'The'. For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- You may wish to convert your form of references to the cite.php footnote system that
WP:WIAFA 2(c) highly recommends.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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t 15:34, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
- I've expanded the lead section, but am trying to walk a fine line between having a comprehensive lead section and making an article that ends up being too repetitive in places. See what you think of it now.
Neil916 (
Talk) 20:19, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Found one instance, but no others. Fixed.
Neil916 (
Talk) 02:52, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
Didn't find any instances where this was missed.
Neil916 (
Talk) 02:52, 19 November 2006 (UTC) Aha, found the sneaky buggers and fixed them.
Neil916 (
Talk) 05:57, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
- Another one that could be hiding from me, the only instances that I could find with full dates were in references, and the {{
IUCN}} template didn't automatically wikify the accessdate, all other templates automatically wikify them. Some templates used, like {{
cite paper}} don't even show the accessdate.
Neil916 (
Talk) 22:33, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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AZ
t 03:34, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 00:20, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under
WP:IUP and
WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 00:20, 11 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 15:03, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 15:03, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently and previous [day/week/month/year] might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
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AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last year and soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under
WP:IUP and
WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- The article will need references. See
WP:CITE and
WP:V for more information.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, soon might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
If this article is about a person, please add {{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
*Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
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t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
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Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
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strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
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[16]
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Done. I combined intor to 2 paras. Length is same.
Glenn4pr 16:58, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Done.
Glenn4pr 15:27, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Done.
Glenn4pr 16:26, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- I read the guideline, and it suggested linking to (in this case) YEAR in science, which I have done. Also removed some where they were incidental to the science, such as years associated to family events or government service rather than science. Hmmm... this is truly subjective.
Glenn4pr 16:26, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- Done.
Glenn4pr 16:30, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Done. Where more than one fn in a sentence is used to reference seperate clauses, I left the fn in midsentence. I think this enhances clarity. This occurs in two places. Elsewhere, references were changed to conform to this guideline.
Glenn4pr 16:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 15 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
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t 14:42, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2] Done
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article. Done
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7] Done
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14] Done
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8] Done
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day. Done
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings. Done
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==. Done
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article. Done
- You may wish to convert your form of references to the cite.php footnote system that
WP:WIAFA 2(c) highly recommends.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16] Done
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t 01:04, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, yesterday, soon, and last week might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (ex. change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- allege
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
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AZ
t 01:04, 9 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:14, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
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t 17:14, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:14, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under
WP:IUP and
WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 17:14, 8 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 10 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 18:54, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently and last year might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 47 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 18:16, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 32 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am
now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- allege
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- correctly
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 13 additive terms, a bit too much.
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Consider removing links that add little to the article or that have been repeated in close proximity to other links to the same article, as per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:CONTEXT.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- This article has no
images. Please see if there are any
free use images that fall under
WP:IUP and
WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to
Special:Upload; to upload non-
fair use images on the
Wikimedia Commons, go to
commons:special:upload.
[12]
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- This article needs
footnotes, preferably in the
cite.php format recommended by
WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with
WP:CITE or
WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add
<div class="references-small"><references/></div>
.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 01:28, 7 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 10 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 02:12, 5 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 9 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOSDATE, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using
January 30th was a great day, use
January 30 was a great day.
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 22 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Consider adding more
links to the article; per
WP:MOS-L and
WP:BTW, create links to relevant articles.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- are considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 27 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- See if possible if there is a
free use image that can go on the top right corner of this article.
[13]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
- When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (change kms to km and lbs to lb).
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- correctly
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 33 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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AZ
t 21:21, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
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- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 21:21, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at
WP:GTL.
- Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
- This article may need to undergo
summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is
United States, than an appropriate subpage would be
History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- allege
- many people believe
- it is claimed
- correctly
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am
now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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t 00:30, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).
[17]
- done
Team6and7 01:39, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 00:30, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, last year might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- While additive terms like “also”, “in addition”, “additionally”, “moreover”, and “furthermore” may sometimes be useful, overusing them when they aren't necessary can instead detract from the brilliancy of the article. This article has 11 additive terms, a bit too much.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
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User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 00:30, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per
WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.
[3]
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently and previous [day/week/month/year] might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
Per
WP:MOSNUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.
Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
WP:SS.
[15]
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 00:30, 3 November 2006 (UTC)
reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
[2]
- Per
WP:WIAFA,
Images should have concise captions.
[14]
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:BTW, years with full dates should be linked; for example, link
January 15,
2006, but do not link January 2006.
[5]
- As per
WP:MOS, please do not
link words in headings.
- This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as
WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- There may be an applicable
infobox for this article. For example, see
Template:Infobox Biography,
Template:Infobox School, or
Template:Infobox City.
[4] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
- If this article is about a person, please add
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 21:03, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Per
WP:MOS#Headings, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example, ==The Biography== would be changed to ==Biography==.
- Generally, trivia sections are looked down upon; please either remove the trivia section or incorporate any important facts into the rest of the article.
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 21:03, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- Per
WP:CONTEXT and
WP:MOSDATE, months and days of the week generally should not be linked. Years, decades, and centuries can be linked if they provide
context for the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[8]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- Please alphabetize the
interlanguage links.
[10]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- is considered
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Please provide citations for all of the
{{fact}}
s.
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 21:03, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
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The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at
WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.
- Per
WP:MOS, avoid using words/phrases that indicate time periods relative to the current day. For example, recently might be terms that should be replaced with specific dates/times.
[7]
- Per
WP:MOSNUM, please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, "the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.
[9]
- There are a few occurrences of
weasel words in this article- please observe
WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view. For example,
- it has been
- apparently
- might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please
strike this comment).
[17]
- Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
- Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am
now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
- As done in
WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the
CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space inbetween. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
Wikipedia's best work. See also
User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.
[16]
You may wish to browse through
User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks,
AZ
t 00:45, 1 November 2006 (UTC)
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You can use the script yourself. Add {{subst:js|User:AndyZ/peerreviewer.js}}
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