76th Infantry Division (United Kingdom)

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I've listed this article for peer review as it has been overhauled from a stub and i am looking to take it through a GA review in the near future. Regards EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 03:55, 1 June 2015 (UTC) reply

Comments. As always, feel free to revert my copyediting ... sporadic, in this case. These are my edits. - Dank ( push to talk) 02:28, 2 June 2015 (UTC) reply

Thanks very much Dank, much appreciated as always. EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 15:57, 2 June 2015 (UTC) reply

Comments

• Use a consistent variety of English - you've got "re-organisation" in the lead but then "reorganization" later in the article

Thats what you get when you get an English guy living in the US using a US-ENG word processor :) fixed! EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 17:28, 8 June 2015 (UTC) reply

• Be careful about overusing passive voice

Not my strong suit, examples would need to be highlighted, sorry. EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 17:28, 8 June 2015 (UTC) reply

• Your Churchill ref (footnote 5) currently doesn't link properly. Nikkimaria ( talk) 15:28, 8 June 2015 (UTC) reply

Addressed, thank you for time and comments. EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 17:28, 8 June 2015 (UTC) reply

Comments: G'day, nice work.

• I made a few tweaks, please check that you are happy with these changes. I have the following other suggestions: AustralianRupert ( talk) 09:02, 15 July 2015 (UTC) reply
• the first sentence in the Deception section seems a bit abrupt
• in the References, some of the works have publisher locations, but others don't. For A-class and higher, this should be consistent. Regards, AustralianRupert ( talk) 09:02, 15 July 2015 (UTC) reply

Sorry for the delay in responding, I have not been that active recently. Like the changes. I will make amendments per your suggestions. EnigmaMcmxc ( talk) 22:54, 28 July 2015 (UTC) reply