My tenth nomination, which is on the filmography of
Madhuri Dixit, an Indian actress. Madhuri Dixit is one of the most popular bolywood actress. Do I need to say more who she is? Okay, she is the one known for her acting and dancing skills. She is the recipient of four
Filmfare Award for Best Actress and a
Best Supporting Actress award from the same award show. I look forward to constructive criticism, and I feel that the filmography fulfills all criteria and has the potential to be promoted. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:31, 27 May 2015 (UTC)reply
At first glance, I can see that the list isn't comprehensive enough. In the early 2000s, Dixit hosted a television show called Kahin Na Kahin Koi Hai, but there is no mention of that. There is also no mention of her appearance in the Gujarati film Satyavadi Raja Harishchandra. So I have to oppose it for failing to meet
criteria 3(a). --
Krimuk|90 (
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02:10, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
@
Krimuk90: While the first one has been added there with a source, the latter hasn't been added. I searched for it to find a reliable source to add, however, nada. I don't think it was notable enough. If it were, a source would have been certainly found, no? You may start your review if you want. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:35, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment – If I'm right, the source only confirms the existence of the film. We need explicit sources to prove that Madhuri was a part of the film. Some sources mention the name of the film as Satwadi Raja Harishchandra. Also, it looks like a Gujarati/Rajasthani film. I know neither of these languages. —
Vensatry(ping)10:36, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
@
Vensatry: If I'm not wrong, the source clearly says "Gujarati cinema too in films like Raja Harish Chandra with Madhuri Dixit", which indicates her presence in the film. Besides it is a Gujrati film, dubbed in Rajasthani. --
FrankCHITCHAT10:56, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Despite the fact that it was Dixit's only Gujrati appearance, I doubt the notability of this film, as no proper and reliable source exists for it and secondly it has no article in Wikipedia - a place to create notable articles. What say ye? --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:27, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
I'm unsure about the film's notability. I understand there won't be much coverage for a 1980s Gujarati film in the internet. But your reason for not including the film citing lack of notability isn't really convincing because lack of a WP article cannot be correlated with assessing the notability of a film. Trust me, there are loads of notable Indian films which don't have an article over here. If I were to take Devika Rani's filmography to FL status, I cannot ignore those red-linked films just because they don't have their own articles. —
Vensatry(ping)11:46, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
I agree with you on that, yet this film did not prove to be notable at least not for Madhuri Dixit as it was just a "special appearance". A big Bollywood film star of her era making a special appearance in a Gujrati film, but still no source. Non-notable film. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:58, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
It's alright. I have given the lead a major copy-edit as well. Good luck! This doesn't affect the nomination, but I'm sure you can find a much nicer image of the gorgeous woman than the current blurry picture. --
Krimuk|90 (
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06:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Thank you for the copy-edit
Krimuk90, which makes it look much better than it was. BTW I have uploaded the image of same setting with a nicer quality, but if you feel there is better image than the current one, please go ahead and change it. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
No ref. is available for it, and I have removed it. It does not affect the comprehensiveness of it as it was a non-notable Gujarati film appearnce. I don't think that absence of one film appearnce should stop a list from becoming FL. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT15:23, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
I wasn't the one who insisted you to include the film. So why didn't you saying anything when Krimuk opposed the candidate solely for excluding this film and the TV show? Reread the discussion below. —
Vensatry(ping)17:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
While resolving other queries, I just forgot about this, and I was in the search of another source these days, however, I couldn't find any. My apology! --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT17:59, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
No need to apologize. I was concerned because initially you included the film when Krimuk had opposed and now when I say the ref. is a mirror, you say the film is a non-notable one and excluding it will not stop this from becoming an FL. —
Vensatry(ping)18:38, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Actually, when Krimuk opposed, at that time, too I objected, "I searched for it to find a reliable source to add, however, nada. I don't think it was notable enough", but when he provided a source, I added that. Anyways enough of it.
No page seems to be written there, but the link directly goes to the page no. (unknown) which I have used as a reference for the info. present in the list.
You can find out the exact page no. by browsing through sites like Amazon, provided the corresponding page is available under a free preview. —
Vensatry(ping)15:33, 8 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Sanjay Dutt and Shah Rukh Khan are linked twice in the lede
"Dixit then played roles in commercial failure" - borders tautology
"Her breakthrough role came two years later with the lead role in" - first role is redundant
The above sentence is a little too long. Consider splitting it
"one of the highest grossing film" -> one of the highest grossing films
"her role of a violent revenge-seeking woman was well received." - This is not verified by either of the sources.
I missed this – "She won a second Best Actress award ... woman who rebels against her manipulative mother-in-law in the drama Beta" This isn't verified by the source either. Page #573 of the book talks about Saroj Khan. —
Vensatry(ping)18:48, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Whoops, my bad! It's pg 394 that says "In Beta, Madhuri Dixit takes on a scheming mother-in-law, Aruna Irani, to ensure justice for..." The "Best Actress" part has also been cited with a reliable source. @
Vensatry: Please let me know if I have resolved your concerns. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT18:56, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
"she played a woman escaping from her abusive marriage" - Same as above
Yes, it doesn't, yet it talks the same thing about
Julia Roberts' character in Sleeping with the Enemy; Yaarana was its remake. And since Dixit is the one stepping into the role of Roberts, I think the source is okay.
"However, her 1997 release of the romantic film Dil To Pagal Hai was a major success" -> However, the 1997 romantic film Dil To Pagal Hai was a major success.
"Her two film releases in 2002 were ... " - We are aware that we're talking about films until now.
"In the latter film, she portrayed a prostitute in love with an alcoholic" - I'm not sure about the usage of the word prostitute here. Courtesan would be more appropriate.
A mention of Gaja Gamini could well be made in the lede owing to the importance given to her character.
The link to Bombay Talkies in the table points to the studio
"The role of a con woman in Abhishek Chaubey's black comedy film Dedh Ishqiya (2014) marked her comeback after five years, which earned critical acclaim" - It's quite obvious to anyone that the gap was seven years.
Whoops! Mixed up with Aaja Nachle. Corrected!
"For her role in Dedh Ishqiya, Dixit received her 14th nomination of the Filmfare Award for Best Actress" - This should precede the previous sentence.
Leaning towards support The lede is a tad bloated, and it should feature some notable TV performances, but it is a well researched list other than this, I was looking at it earlier. Perhaps you could add some of her TV performances too to ensure it is fully comprehensive?♦
Dr. Blofeld16:53, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Hi @
Dr. Blofeld: Thank you for the kind review. I think that Dixit, being a film actress does not have so much of contributions in the television industry, but the two shows she judged/hosted are present there. Besides she has had appearances in TV shows, which is common among film actors, and I don't think that is a good idea. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Krimuk left the impression that it wasn't comprehensive that's all. I agree that a lot of those sorts of TV appearances aren't worth mentioning.♦
Dr. Blofeld09:36, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
When nominated, a notable TV show that she had hosted was not mentioned at all. That's why I didn't consider the list comprehensive. --
Krimuk|90 (
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12:12, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
A few comments
Sorry for being late. Well, i feel there are a few issues to be rectified or an explanation being required.
Why mentioning 'Ek Do Teen' in particular? I believe her other songs 'Choli Ke Peeche', 'Dhak Dhak Karne' and 'Maar Dala' were equally popular. So, i suggest the nominator to remove it.
We all know that Tezaab was a breakthrough film for her, which I think is also mentioned in the previous sentence. The song was a major highlight in the film and was highly instrumental in the film's success. Dare I say, it served as a launchpad for her career. I agree that the other songs you've mentioned are also popular but we cannot include every cult song of hers here. —
Vensatry(ping)10:45, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Per Vensatry's comment.
"play the romantic interest to male protagonists" — i don't think so that she used to play the romantic interests of antagonists in particular. Isn't the statement She continued to play the female lead in the successful action-dramas Ram Lakhan (1989), Tridev (1989), and Kishen Kanhaiya (1990) enough?
Done.
Perhaps Gaja Gamini be called and art house film rather than using the term experimental. If using art house is wrong, forgive me. But experimental is a bit out-of-the-blue.
Art house is a bit informal. I think experimental is correct as I have seen most of the high quality articles use this term.
In 2013, she performed an item number in the Ayan Mukerji-directed romantic comedy Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani. — adding the song name along with a reliable source is appreciable.
The song wasn't quite notable, but since it was her only appearance in 2013, I gave it a mention.
Also, i assume that she was "praised" by critics mostly. For example, in the statement The widely praised role of a con woman in Abhishek Chaubey's black comedy film Dedh Ishqiya (2014) marked her first acting role in seven years i think "widely praised" can be replaced with "critically acclaimed".
The "widely praised" is same as "critically acclaimed" and such. Since "critical acclaim" has been used twice in the list, I have used the term "praised" to avoid monotonous prose.
Any info about the critical reception and BO Verdict of Gulaab Gang?
We need not mention critical and/or box-office performance for each and every film. This film's performance (barring Juhi Chawla's) was not notable anyway.
Are the four seasons of Jhalak Dikhla Jaa, in which she served as a talent judge, consecutive?
That is explained in the form of a FN.
Anyways, the table is looking fine and comprehensive. The validity of the image used is also perfect though a recent image can be more appropriate. However it is the nominator's call. Ping me after you rectify these issues and/or after you complete giving explanations if any.
Pavanjandhyala (
talk)
08:07, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Support — Good job overall, could be better. Being a non-native English speaker, i am unable to find further issues. But i am sure someone else may do.
Pavanjandhyala (
talk)
11:26, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment: Dixit received a Filmfare for completing 25 years (I dont know if this should be mentioned or maybe). What are your thoughts since its her filmography and she got that recognition for her long list of films.
Better suits the parent article and the awards page.
Why mentioning of her item number (YJHD) in the lead is important to her filmography? I think it should be removed.
Was her only appearance of 2013 (that too after six years).
Still I think this should be removed. So please remove it.
Her role in Lajja was not a starring role but a supporting. Correct this.
Corrected.
"She also appeared in Yaraana—a remake of the psychological thriller Sleeping with the Enemy". Why this is important in her filmography. It fits better either in the film's article or her biography.
Support: I agree that the lead is slightly too detailed and "bloated", but that is easily sorted. Aside from that the table is fine and so are the references. —
Calvin99916:54, 9 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Delegate's comment - Reading the lead, I have to agree with the above comments regarding it appearing bloated. It's not as bad as some I've seen, but a trimming would be nice. —
Chris Woodrich (
talk)
06:06, 16 June 2015 (UTC)reply
My tenth nomination, which is on the filmography of
Madhuri Dixit, an Indian actress. Madhuri Dixit is one of the most popular bolywood actress. Do I need to say more who she is? Okay, she is the one known for her acting and dancing skills. She is the recipient of four
Filmfare Award for Best Actress and a
Best Supporting Actress award from the same award show. I look forward to constructive criticism, and I feel that the filmography fulfills all criteria and has the potential to be promoted. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:31, 27 May 2015 (UTC)reply
At first glance, I can see that the list isn't comprehensive enough. In the early 2000s, Dixit hosted a television show called Kahin Na Kahin Koi Hai, but there is no mention of that. There is also no mention of her appearance in the Gujarati film Satyavadi Raja Harishchandra. So I have to oppose it for failing to meet
criteria 3(a). --
Krimuk|90 (
talk)
02:10, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
@
Krimuk90: While the first one has been added there with a source, the latter hasn't been added. I searched for it to find a reliable source to add, however, nada. I don't think it was notable enough. If it were, a source would have been certainly found, no? You may start your review if you want. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:35, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment – If I'm right, the source only confirms the existence of the film. We need explicit sources to prove that Madhuri was a part of the film. Some sources mention the name of the film as Satwadi Raja Harishchandra. Also, it looks like a Gujarati/Rajasthani film. I know neither of these languages. —
Vensatry(ping)10:36, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
@
Vensatry: If I'm not wrong, the source clearly says "Gujarati cinema too in films like Raja Harish Chandra with Madhuri Dixit", which indicates her presence in the film. Besides it is a Gujrati film, dubbed in Rajasthani. --
FrankCHITCHAT10:56, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Despite the fact that it was Dixit's only Gujrati appearance, I doubt the notability of this film, as no proper and reliable source exists for it and secondly it has no article in Wikipedia - a place to create notable articles. What say ye? --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:27, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
I'm unsure about the film's notability. I understand there won't be much coverage for a 1980s Gujarati film in the internet. But your reason for not including the film citing lack of notability isn't really convincing because lack of a WP article cannot be correlated with assessing the notability of a film. Trust me, there are loads of notable Indian films which don't have an article over here. If I were to take Devika Rani's filmography to FL status, I cannot ignore those red-linked films just because they don't have their own articles. —
Vensatry(ping)11:46, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
I agree with you on that, yet this film did not prove to be notable at least not for Madhuri Dixit as it was just a "special appearance". A big Bollywood film star of her era making a special appearance in a Gujrati film, but still no source. Non-notable film. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT11:58, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
It's alright. I have given the lead a major copy-edit as well. Good luck! This doesn't affect the nomination, but I'm sure you can find a much nicer image of the gorgeous woman than the current blurry picture. --
Krimuk|90 (
talk)
06:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Thank you for the copy-edit
Krimuk90, which makes it look much better than it was. BTW I have uploaded the image of same setting with a nicer quality, but if you feel there is better image than the current one, please go ahead and change it. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
No ref. is available for it, and I have removed it. It does not affect the comprehensiveness of it as it was a non-notable Gujarati film appearnce. I don't think that absence of one film appearnce should stop a list from becoming FL. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT15:23, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
I wasn't the one who insisted you to include the film. So why didn't you saying anything when Krimuk opposed the candidate solely for excluding this film and the TV show? Reread the discussion below. —
Vensatry(ping)17:21, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
While resolving other queries, I just forgot about this, and I was in the search of another source these days, however, I couldn't find any. My apology! --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT17:59, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
No need to apologize. I was concerned because initially you included the film when Krimuk had opposed and now when I say the ref. is a mirror, you say the film is a non-notable one and excluding it will not stop this from becoming an FL. —
Vensatry(ping)18:38, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Actually, when Krimuk opposed, at that time, too I objected, "I searched for it to find a reliable source to add, however, nada. I don't think it was notable enough", but when he provided a source, I added that. Anyways enough of it.
No page seems to be written there, but the link directly goes to the page no. (unknown) which I have used as a reference for the info. present in the list.
You can find out the exact page no. by browsing through sites like Amazon, provided the corresponding page is available under a free preview. —
Vensatry(ping)15:33, 8 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Sanjay Dutt and Shah Rukh Khan are linked twice in the lede
"Dixit then played roles in commercial failure" - borders tautology
"Her breakthrough role came two years later with the lead role in" - first role is redundant
The above sentence is a little too long. Consider splitting it
"one of the highest grossing film" -> one of the highest grossing films
"her role of a violent revenge-seeking woman was well received." - This is not verified by either of the sources.
I missed this – "She won a second Best Actress award ... woman who rebels against her manipulative mother-in-law in the drama Beta" This isn't verified by the source either. Page #573 of the book talks about Saroj Khan. —
Vensatry(ping)18:48, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Whoops, my bad! It's pg 394 that says "In Beta, Madhuri Dixit takes on a scheming mother-in-law, Aruna Irani, to ensure justice for..." The "Best Actress" part has also been cited with a reliable source. @
Vensatry: Please let me know if I have resolved your concerns. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT18:56, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
"she played a woman escaping from her abusive marriage" - Same as above
Yes, it doesn't, yet it talks the same thing about
Julia Roberts' character in Sleeping with the Enemy; Yaarana was its remake. And since Dixit is the one stepping into the role of Roberts, I think the source is okay.
"However, her 1997 release of the romantic film Dil To Pagal Hai was a major success" -> However, the 1997 romantic film Dil To Pagal Hai was a major success.
"Her two film releases in 2002 were ... " - We are aware that we're talking about films until now.
"In the latter film, she portrayed a prostitute in love with an alcoholic" - I'm not sure about the usage of the word prostitute here. Courtesan would be more appropriate.
A mention of Gaja Gamini could well be made in the lede owing to the importance given to her character.
The link to Bombay Talkies in the table points to the studio
"The role of a con woman in Abhishek Chaubey's black comedy film Dedh Ishqiya (2014) marked her comeback after five years, which earned critical acclaim" - It's quite obvious to anyone that the gap was seven years.
Whoops! Mixed up with Aaja Nachle. Corrected!
"For her role in Dedh Ishqiya, Dixit received her 14th nomination of the Filmfare Award for Best Actress" - This should precede the previous sentence.
Leaning towards support The lede is a tad bloated, and it should feature some notable TV performances, but it is a well researched list other than this, I was looking at it earlier. Perhaps you could add some of her TV performances too to ensure it is fully comprehensive?♦
Dr. Blofeld16:53, 28 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Hi @
Dr. Blofeld: Thank you for the kind review. I think that Dixit, being a film actress does not have so much of contributions in the television industry, but the two shows she judged/hosted are present there. Besides she has had appearances in TV shows, which is common among film actors, and I don't think that is a good idea. --
FrankBoyCHITCHAT09:31, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
Krimuk left the impression that it wasn't comprehensive that's all. I agree that a lot of those sorts of TV appearances aren't worth mentioning.♦
Dr. Blofeld09:36, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
When nominated, a notable TV show that she had hosted was not mentioned at all. That's why I didn't consider the list comprehensive. --
Krimuk|90 (
talk)
12:12, 29 May 2015 (UTC)reply
A few comments
Sorry for being late. Well, i feel there are a few issues to be rectified or an explanation being required.
Why mentioning 'Ek Do Teen' in particular? I believe her other songs 'Choli Ke Peeche', 'Dhak Dhak Karne' and 'Maar Dala' were equally popular. So, i suggest the nominator to remove it.
We all know that Tezaab was a breakthrough film for her, which I think is also mentioned in the previous sentence. The song was a major highlight in the film and was highly instrumental in the film's success. Dare I say, it served as a launchpad for her career. I agree that the other songs you've mentioned are also popular but we cannot include every cult song of hers here. —
Vensatry(ping)10:45, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Per Vensatry's comment.
"play the romantic interest to male protagonists" — i don't think so that she used to play the romantic interests of antagonists in particular. Isn't the statement She continued to play the female lead in the successful action-dramas Ram Lakhan (1989), Tridev (1989), and Kishen Kanhaiya (1990) enough?
Done.
Perhaps Gaja Gamini be called and art house film rather than using the term experimental. If using art house is wrong, forgive me. But experimental is a bit out-of-the-blue.
Art house is a bit informal. I think experimental is correct as I have seen most of the high quality articles use this term.
In 2013, she performed an item number in the Ayan Mukerji-directed romantic comedy Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani. — adding the song name along with a reliable source is appreciable.
The song wasn't quite notable, but since it was her only appearance in 2013, I gave it a mention.
Also, i assume that she was "praised" by critics mostly. For example, in the statement The widely praised role of a con woman in Abhishek Chaubey's black comedy film Dedh Ishqiya (2014) marked her first acting role in seven years i think "widely praised" can be replaced with "critically acclaimed".
The "widely praised" is same as "critically acclaimed" and such. Since "critical acclaim" has been used twice in the list, I have used the term "praised" to avoid monotonous prose.
Any info about the critical reception and BO Verdict of Gulaab Gang?
We need not mention critical and/or box-office performance for each and every film. This film's performance (barring Juhi Chawla's) was not notable anyway.
Are the four seasons of Jhalak Dikhla Jaa, in which she served as a talent judge, consecutive?
That is explained in the form of a FN.
Anyways, the table is looking fine and comprehensive. The validity of the image used is also perfect though a recent image can be more appropriate. However it is the nominator's call. Ping me after you rectify these issues and/or after you complete giving explanations if any.
Pavanjandhyala (
talk)
08:07, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Support — Good job overall, could be better. Being a non-native English speaker, i am unable to find further issues. But i am sure someone else may do.
Pavanjandhyala (
talk)
11:26, 1 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment: Dixit received a Filmfare for completing 25 years (I dont know if this should be mentioned or maybe). What are your thoughts since its her filmography and she got that recognition for her long list of films.
Better suits the parent article and the awards page.
Why mentioning of her item number (YJHD) in the lead is important to her filmography? I think it should be removed.
Was her only appearance of 2013 (that too after six years).
Still I think this should be removed. So please remove it.
Her role in Lajja was not a starring role but a supporting. Correct this.
Corrected.
"She also appeared in Yaraana—a remake of the psychological thriller Sleeping with the Enemy". Why this is important in her filmography. It fits better either in the film's article or her biography.
Support: I agree that the lead is slightly too detailed and "bloated", but that is easily sorted. Aside from that the table is fine and so are the references. —
Calvin99916:54, 9 June 2015 (UTC)reply
Delegate's comment - Reading the lead, I have to agree with the above comments regarding it appearing bloated. It's not as bad as some I've seen, but a trimming would be nice. —
Chris Woodrich (
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06:06, 16 June 2015 (UTC)reply