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I have gotten the lead of the article to a level that I think meets the criteria. Everything else should be good too. Thanks. XR228 ( talk) 19:22, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
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Since their creation, the Kraken have drafted 28 players, the 2023 NHL entry draft being the third in which they participated.– The juxtaposition from picks to the 2023 being their third draft is choppy and needs rewording.
After the end of his rookie 2022–23 season, Beniers won the Calder Memorial Trophy as the League’s best rookie– Remove "end of his rookie" from the first part of the sentence. The second part explains the award clearly enough that this information is redundant.
...managing 24 goals and 33 assists in 80 games.– Probably improved by replacing "managing" with "having accumulated".
The Kraken's second overall draft pick in 2021 was the highest they have ever drafted.– Could be reworded to be better I think. Something like, "The highest the Kraken have ever drafted was in 2021, when they had the second overall pick." or "The Kraken have never selected higher than in 2021, when they had the second overall pick."
That's what I've got for now, though I think on a re-pass over I'll probably find more. Please ping me when you respond. Hey man im josh ( talk) 16:49, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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...Ryker Evans, Ryan Winterton, and 2022 fourth overall pick Shane Wright.– Remove the part about his pick. It's not specified for others so it's not necessary for Shane Wright.
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template to the top of the article under the short description for consistent date formattingPrior to the 2005–06 season, the NHL instituted a penalty shootout for regular season games that remained tied after a five-minute overtime period, which prevented ties– Close, but might be a bit too wordy. What about something like "As of the 2005–06 season, the NHL implemented new tiebreaker procedures, making ties no longer possible."?
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I have gotten the lead of the article to a level that I think meets the criteria. Everything else should be good too. Thanks. XR228 ( talk) 19:22, 8 June 2024 (UTC)
|+ caption_textas the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting
|+ {{sronly|caption_text}}instead.
Since their creation, the Kraken have drafted 28 players, the 2023 NHL entry draft being the third in which they participated.– The juxtaposition from picks to the 2023 being their third draft is choppy and needs rewording.
After the end of his rookie 2022–23 season, Beniers won the Calder Memorial Trophy as the League’s best rookie– Remove "end of his rookie" from the first part of the sentence. The second part explains the award clearly enough that this information is redundant.
...managing 24 goals and 33 assists in 80 games.– Probably improved by replacing "managing" with "having accumulated".
The Kraken's second overall draft pick in 2021 was the highest they have ever drafted.– Could be reworded to be better I think. Something like, "The highest the Kraken have ever drafted was in 2021, when they had the second overall pick." or "The Kraken have never selected higher than in 2021, when they had the second overall pick."
That's what I've got for now, though I think on a re-pass over I'll probably find more. Please ping me when you respond. Hey man im josh ( talk) 16:49, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
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...Ryker Evans, Ryan Winterton, and 2022 fourth overall pick Shane Wright.– Remove the part about his pick. It's not specified for others so it's not necessary for Shane Wright.
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to the reference, as a subscription is required to access the source|publisher=The Internet Hockey Database
to |website=
HockeyDB
, based on the fact the Wiki page is called that{{
Use mdy dates|June 2024}}
template to the top of the article under the short description for consistent date formattingPrior to the 2005–06 season, the NHL instituted a penalty shootout for regular season games that remained tied after a five-minute overtime period, which prevented ties– Close, but might be a bit too wordy. What about something like "As of the 2005–06 season, the NHL implemented new tiebreaker procedures, making ties no longer possible."?
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is not acceptable for accessibility reasons.