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I am nominating this for featured list for the third time because I believe all issues have been addressed since the last time it was at FLC, specifically, that it received a copyedit a couple months back, and I believe all the other criteria have already been satisfied since the last time. Hopefully, third time's the charm.-- 十 八 01:51, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment Image needs alternative text. Dabomb87 ( talk) 21:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment I think the prose is mostly good, and made a few copy-edits here and there. One sentence confused me, and needs recasting: "On the festival's last day, Hazumu tries to meet up with Yasuna and Tomari but keeps missing them." What does "miss" mean in this context? Dabomb87 ( talk) 20:33, 6 August 2009 (UTC) reply
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Oppose Mainly due to concerns about length. I'm not just talking about the rule-of-thumb 10 entries thing, though I think that does still apply. My concern is it's mergability with the main article, and how the list would change if it was indeed merged. The bulk of this list seems to be plot summaries of each volume. If the list were merged into the main article, all of this would probably be covered within the Plot section, thus making the small list even smaller (ie more mergable). I also have some objections to some of the rest of the content used to fill out this list: chapter lists and cover character specifically. I think the chapter names is not unlike avoiding tracklistings in discographies: unnecessary detail that doesn't really have much relevance to the list as a whole. Or in other words, does the fact that chapter 4 of the first volume is named "Tomari, Confused!" have anything to do with anything? And the latter, the cover characters, just seems entirely trivial to me. I must admit I've always avoided reviewing manga FLCs, so for all I know chapter names and cover characters are a common addition to these lists, so I won't hold that particular part against this candidacy. But all of that combined makes me think that merging the list into the main article is clearly the better option here. Drewcifer ( talk) 21:07, 6 August 2009 (UTC) reply
The list was not promoted by Matthewedwards 18:04, 8 August 2009 [1].
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I am nominating this for featured list for the third time because I believe all issues have been addressed since the last time it was at FLC, specifically, that it received a copyedit a couple months back, and I believe all the other criteria have already been satisfied since the last time. Hopefully, third time's the charm.-- 十 八 01:51, 22 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment Image needs alternative text. Dabomb87 ( talk) 21:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC) reply
Comment I think the prose is mostly good, and made a few copy-edits here and there. One sentence confused me, and needs recasting: "On the festival's last day, Hazumu tries to meet up with Yasuna and Tomari but keeps missing them." What does "miss" mean in this context? Dabomb87 ( talk) 20:33, 6 August 2009 (UTC) reply
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Oppose Mainly due to concerns about length. I'm not just talking about the rule-of-thumb 10 entries thing, though I think that does still apply. My concern is it's mergability with the main article, and how the list would change if it was indeed merged. The bulk of this list seems to be plot summaries of each volume. If the list were merged into the main article, all of this would probably be covered within the Plot section, thus making the small list even smaller (ie more mergable). I also have some objections to some of the rest of the content used to fill out this list: chapter lists and cover character specifically. I think the chapter names is not unlike avoiding tracklistings in discographies: unnecessary detail that doesn't really have much relevance to the list as a whole. Or in other words, does the fact that chapter 4 of the first volume is named "Tomari, Confused!" have anything to do with anything? And the latter, the cover characters, just seems entirely trivial to me. I must admit I've always avoided reviewing manga FLCs, so for all I know chapter names and cover characters are a common addition to these lists, so I won't hold that particular part against this candidacy. But all of that combined makes me think that merging the list into the main article is clearly the better option here. Drewcifer ( talk) 21:07, 6 August 2009 (UTC) reply