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I am nominating this for featured list because meets the criteria like other similar featured lists. Emyil ( talk) 15:11, 19 May 2020 (UTC) reply
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The lead is far too short, contains unsourced information (notably the bit about those who won as a player and a manager) and reads very much as if it was written by a non-English speaker ("only manager to have succeeded winning two times" is not good English at all). More in-depth comments to come later...... -- ChrisTheDude ( talk) 07:26, 20 May 2020 (UTC) reply
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That's it for a quick pass. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:45, 9 July 2020 (UTC) reply
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Doing now. Aza24 ( talk) 01:48, 17 August 2020 (UTC) reply
Emyil are you intending to return to this? The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 14:14, 19 August 2020 (UTC) reply
Seeing that the nominator had not edited for some time, I thought I would see if I could help push this over the line. But looking through some of The Rambling Man's points above, and trying to rationalise them with the article, I came to realise that a lot of the content is completely unreferenced. There is no general reference, so one would expect the references provided in each row to source that entire row. They do not: the Suppici reference does not discuss his nationality; Juan López Fontana is barely even mentioned in his one. I can't see what is supporting "Juan López Fontana was the first manager to manage a national team to World Cup victory without having had a prior professional football career. He managed the Uruguay national team in the 1950 to victory; Vicente Feola and Carlos Alberto Parreira, who both managed Brazil also achieved this feat." at all. The table is missing a table caption. I concur with reviewers above that there could be more discussion of the manager to help justify this as a standalone list. There is no doubt that with some work, this could make Featured status, but without an active nominator, this is best failing the FL process right now, and coming back when overhauled. Harrias talk 08:39, 27 August 2020 (UTC) reply
The list was unsuccessful by The Rambling Man via FACBot ( talk) 00:25, 1 September 2020 (UTC) [1]. reply
List of FIFA World Cup winning managers ( | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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I am nominating this for featured list because meets the criteria like other similar featured lists. Emyil ( talk) 15:11, 19 May 2020 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude ( talk) 07:31, 2 June 2020 (UTC) reply |
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;Drive-by comment
The lead is far too short, contains unsourced information (notably the bit about those who won as a player and a manager) and reads very much as if it was written by a non-English speaker ("only manager to have succeeded winning two times" is not good English at all). More in-depth comments to come later...... -- ChrisTheDude ( talk) 07:26, 20 May 2020 (UTC) reply
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That's it for a quick pass. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:45, 9 July 2020 (UTC) reply
Quick comments –
Doing now. Aza24 ( talk) 01:48, 17 August 2020 (UTC) reply
Emyil are you intending to return to this? The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 14:14, 19 August 2020 (UTC) reply
Seeing that the nominator had not edited for some time, I thought I would see if I could help push this over the line. But looking through some of The Rambling Man's points above, and trying to rationalise them with the article, I came to realise that a lot of the content is completely unreferenced. There is no general reference, so one would expect the references provided in each row to source that entire row. They do not: the Suppici reference does not discuss his nationality; Juan López Fontana is barely even mentioned in his one. I can't see what is supporting "Juan López Fontana was the first manager to manage a national team to World Cup victory without having had a prior professional football career. He managed the Uruguay national team in the 1950 to victory; Vicente Feola and Carlos Alberto Parreira, who both managed Brazil also achieved this feat." at all. The table is missing a table caption. I concur with reviewers above that there could be more discussion of the manager to help justify this as a standalone list. There is no doubt that with some work, this could make Featured status, but without an active nominator, this is best failing the FL process right now, and coming back when overhauled. Harrias talk 08:39, 27 August 2020 (UTC) reply