The list was promoted by Dabomb87 16:02, 31 October 2009 [1].
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After some heavy re-working it finally matches the proper style of other featured TV season lists, in particular the other two FL 30 Rock seasons. Have reworked this list to save the Featured Topic from removal. Staxringold talk contribs 19:24, 23 September 2009 (UTC) reply
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Rambo's Revenge (talk) 21:09, 3 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:30, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 17:49, 23 October 2009 (UTC) reply Final round (opposing on 1. Prose)
This all stuck out in my first read through, and I'm pretty bad at prose. I strongly recommend you get a copyeditor. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 10:21, 24 October 2009 (UTC) reply |
Leaning support. I'm now in a similar boat to Goodraise, I have looked through this list fairly thoroughly and all my issues have been addressed, but I would be much more comfortable if an external copyediter/reviewer (who is much more prose competent than I) giving this a look.
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Comment According to the link checker, there are 16 dead links. Dabomb87 ( talk) 03:32, 12 October 2009 (UTC) reply
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I struck my oppose for now. Will give a new vote after I give the article another review pass.
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I have made some changes to the list based on my experiences, although I hope I haven't created any conflicts with the requests of others. Here are some things you could consider:
That's all for now, actally I might fix the last point myself. Corn.u.co.pia • Disc.us.sion 14:06, 23 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:01, 27 October 2009 (UTC) reply |
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Comments - late to the party, my apologies, will do my best to be constructive.
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The list was promoted by Dabomb87 16:02, 31 October 2009 [1].
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After some heavy re-working it finally matches the proper style of other featured TV season lists, in particular the other two FL 30 Rock seasons. Have reworked this list to save the Featured Topic from removal. Staxringold talk contribs 19:24, 23 September 2009 (UTC) reply
Comments
Oppose
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 21:09, 3 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 16:30, 9 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 17:49, 23 October 2009 (UTC) reply Final round (opposing on 1. Prose)
This all stuck out in my first read through, and I'm pretty bad at prose. I strongly recommend you get a copyeditor. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 10:21, 24 October 2009 (UTC) reply |
Leaning support. I'm now in a similar boat to Goodraise, I have looked through this list fairly thoroughly and all my issues have been addressed, but I would be much more comfortable if an external copyediter/reviewer (who is much more prose competent than I) giving this a look.
Rambo's Revenge
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21:04, 26 October 2009 (UTC)
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Comment According to the link checker, there are 16 dead links. Dabomb87 ( talk) 03:32, 12 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from Good raise 16:41, 24 October 2009 (UTC) reply |
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I struck my oppose for now. Will give a new vote after I give the article another review pass.
Good
raise
18:30, 23 October 2009 (UTC)
reply
Comments
I have made some changes to the list based on my experiences, although I hope I haven't created any conflicts with the requests of others. Here are some things you could consider:
That's all for now, actally I might fix the last point myself. Corn.u.co.pia • Disc.us.sion 14:06, 23 October 2009 (UTC) reply
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man ( talk) 17:01, 27 October 2009 (UTC) reply |
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Comments - late to the party, my apologies, will do my best to be constructive.
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