The article is well written, comprehensive, and highly watched. Not to mention, NIИ is one of the most popular bands in the public eye at the moment. --
NeoVampTrunks14:50, 21 October 2006 (UTC)reply
Object - Several points:
Lead is too short (for an article of this length, two or three paragraphs should do).
The article tells me a lot about the discography, but not much about the history of the band. Try integrating the two, as is done in
Pink Floyd and other band FAs. How did they form? Why does the band change so much in terms of members?
Inline citations instead of inline HTML links look better as well, but I'm not about what the consensus is on that.
Insufficient references. For an idea of the amount of references needed, see
Pixies. 101 notes and references there - most of those I found and cited. Are there any books on NIN?
The article is well written, comprehensive, and highly watched. Not to mention, NIИ is one of the most popular bands in the public eye at the moment. --
NeoVampTrunks14:50, 21 October 2006 (UTC)reply
Object - Several points:
Lead is too short (for an article of this length, two or three paragraphs should do).
The article tells me a lot about the discography, but not much about the history of the band. Try integrating the two, as is done in
Pink Floyd and other band FAs. How did they form? Why does the band change so much in terms of members?
Inline citations instead of inline HTML links look better as well, but I'm not about what the consensus is on that.
Insufficient references. For an idea of the amount of references needed, see
Pixies. 101 notes and references there - most of those I found and cited. Are there any books on NIN?