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Shorts - A long time tagged article, this one suffers from a monocultural point of view and lacks sources. Needs help from non North American editors to cover sociological conventions and history of other regions.—
Lendorien (
talk)
17:44, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Nautical tourism - Has been tagged for cleanup for 2 years. A stub with practically no edits but the creators, this desperately needs attention, expansion, sources, orphan fixing, etc.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:23, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Battle Dress Uniform makes no distinction between the generic term and the type of uniform of the US military that is currently being replaced by its successor.
Shaba I - Article has some issues and has for 2 years. Needs a little expansion in the background section for context and some tonal edits. And sourcing of course. - Requires a bit of research.—
Lendorien (
talk)
17:25, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
Nova Zagora - Coordinates and map on the entry for
Nova Zagora, Bulgaria page have errors that need to be corrected. 7 November 2008.
Done. The coordinates now work correctly and put the marker (Google Maps & Earth) in the center of the town's central park/square.
Astronaut (
talk)
18:40, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
Boys in Red Tragedy - Grammar, citations/references could use some cleanup. Expansion of Aftermath and Reaction sections also wouldn't hurt.—
Kuzwa (
talk)
William Poole (American 19th cent. NYC bully or gangster) - Intro is short but establishes notability as a political leader. Unfortunately, the article says nothing about this and just contains text dumps of article quotes. Research needed to turn this into a proper stub.—
Lendorien (
talk)
19:06, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
Podiatry - Some OR issues here. Parts need to be wikified, needs organizational help, soucing, and the difference/similarity between podiatry and chiropody need to be made clear.—
Lendorien (
talk)
14:16, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
Auditory masking is a quite informative article; however, there's lots of unnecessary text scattered throughout the article. e.g. "(Gelfand 2004)." is repeated many times for no reason, and "{{{author}}}, {{{title}}}, [[{{{publisher}}}]], [[{{{date}}}]]" appears in another place.
4.242.147.244 (
talk)
19:29, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
By some "six degrees of separation" type browsing, I find
De'ang to have a clear case of copy-and-paste content and the like. Could do with a mass perge of copyrighted material etc.
doktorbwordsdeeds07:36, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
Server (computing) - Confusing definition of the term, followed by other several disorderly definitions as the bulk of the article. There has to be a more encyclopedic way to present the subject.
Kreachure (
talk)
23:18, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
Upon review of the article, it is suggested that an authority on the subject replace the list of unneeded "Definitions of terms" and replace it with a history of the use of servers.
Vasileios Spanoulis Page has been hijacked many many times by Spanoulis' fans and i couldn't keep up with all the edits. It has turned into some kind of fanpage.Plus it contains many useless information and details.Page is also very long Lacks NPOV too. Just to tell you that i had to removed links to videos in youtube one of which was called "Vassilis Spanoulis is better than Ricky Rubio and Rudy Fernandez".
Sergiogr ([[User
talk:Sergiogr|talk]]) 11:10, 18 August 2008 (UTC)
List of disaster films Contains many films which fall outside of this category. List seems to be a list of all films which contain disasters (using a very broad definition) rather than read as a list of films from the
Disaster film genre. Needs much editing.
Deckchair (
talk)
15:11, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
Wacky Races-intermittent POV-pushing and little sourcing
Folk high school - The article—particularly the section on France—still needs quite a bit of sourcing. Also needs to be fact checked and possibly some text editing for normalization.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:46, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Anton Abele, a little help with organising the references.
Have changed the format of the references so they are now in order and relate to the article text. Have also made various style and grammar and spelling alterations to the text. The article could do with some more references.
IrishPete (
talk)
19:42, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
Vazhithala, needs to be written more clearly with some geographic context and needs wikification
Cleaned up grammar, trimmed down unneeded info, added stub tag still in need of a picture and political stats etc.
Royall (
talk) 14:3619 August 2008
Taiyuan Cites no references. I corrected some grammar errors, but I'm sure there's stil much to be done. I think that the intro should be expanded, as well.
IceUnshattered (
talk)
Academic disciplines is in some major need of revisions. Both in terms of the current bullet format which is making additions to various sections unsymmetrical, as well as major content issues. Currently there are few cited sources, and disciplines of all stripes are being added - including those that do not even have a wiki article.
OpusDiabolus (
talk)
11:17, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Stereotype needs dire work overall, drastically lacking citations, organization, POV, balance of information, and conciseness. Concentrates too much on ethnical discrimination rather than the overall topic itself. Recommended into splitting types of discrimination into sub-articles.
Zanibas (
talk)
07:35, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
The article on
The Mars Volta has sections (especially those on their various albums) that are a real mess. There are multiple references to dates with no year given; grammar is often horrible; references are most often lacking. Perhaps someone with an overall knowledge of the band's oeuvre might be able to do some work on it.—
StavinChain (
talk)
11:56, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
Phineas and Ferb - Someone re-wrote the whole article to lie about the names of the cast, character(s) and title of show, along with one of its taglines
Chicken 65 The article has been edited and counter-edited by people wanting to lay claim to its legacy or something.. and one of the references quote is a blogspot.com post.. extremely irrelevant blog.. the dish however is not.. please ask me for help if needed.. in my opinion the whole article should be flushed.. made bare.—
Bijun (
talk)
17:36, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
Jackie_Collins Article has been incorrectly sourced from unofficial biographies of the author. I will be editing it over the next few weeks
Twiglet23 (
talk) 15:58, 1 May 2008 (GMT)
World War III (section) - The premise of the section Difficulty in determining a "World War" is relevant to the page, but the arguments are confused, and it drifts off the point. Deciding what is meant by "World War" is a pre-requisite to determining what (if any) events will be labelled as "World War III". Perhaps this section should just raise the question and refer to
World War, which covers the ground more coherently.
Swiveler (
talk)
06:23, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Rights of Man - This article is extremely cluttered, is running out of room, or needs better segways from section to section, some rewriting and possibly expert attention. Also lacks any sources.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:43, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
Pancharatna Kritis - Needs to be rewritten in a more encyclopedic style, wikifying, copy editing, and a lot of work. Contains all of the lyrics of the piece. These need to be removed or moved to wikisource. POV issues as well. No sourcing and orphaned. Desperately in need of attention. I've started work on it, but help needed.—
Lendorien (
talk)
00:45, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
I did a little grammer checking at the start of it, but since I havent the show, someone who has may want to look at its plot
{*TEE DUB*} (
talk)
18:50, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
I did a little plot work too, but I only saw up to that part.-
Sakuraluver(
talk)
This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the
current talk page.
Shorts - A long time tagged article, this one suffers from a monocultural point of view and lacks sources. Needs help from non North American editors to cover sociological conventions and history of other regions.—
Lendorien (
talk)
17:44, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Nautical tourism - Has been tagged for cleanup for 2 years. A stub with practically no edits but the creators, this desperately needs attention, expansion, sources, orphan fixing, etc.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:23, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
Battle Dress Uniform makes no distinction between the generic term and the type of uniform of the US military that is currently being replaced by its successor.
Shaba I - Article has some issues and has for 2 years. Needs a little expansion in the background section for context and some tonal edits. And sourcing of course. - Requires a bit of research.—
Lendorien (
talk)
17:25, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
Nova Zagora - Coordinates and map on the entry for
Nova Zagora, Bulgaria page have errors that need to be corrected. 7 November 2008.
Done. The coordinates now work correctly and put the marker (Google Maps & Earth) in the center of the town's central park/square.
Astronaut (
talk)
18:40, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
Boys in Red Tragedy - Grammar, citations/references could use some cleanup. Expansion of Aftermath and Reaction sections also wouldn't hurt.—
Kuzwa (
talk)
William Poole (American 19th cent. NYC bully or gangster) - Intro is short but establishes notability as a political leader. Unfortunately, the article says nothing about this and just contains text dumps of article quotes. Research needed to turn this into a proper stub.—
Lendorien (
talk)
19:06, 23 October 2008 (UTC)
Podiatry - Some OR issues here. Parts need to be wikified, needs organizational help, soucing, and the difference/similarity between podiatry and chiropody need to be made clear.—
Lendorien (
talk)
14:16, 20 October 2008 (UTC)
Auditory masking is a quite informative article; however, there's lots of unnecessary text scattered throughout the article. e.g. "(Gelfand 2004)." is repeated many times for no reason, and "{{{author}}}, {{{title}}}, [[{{{publisher}}}]], [[{{{date}}}]]" appears in another place.
4.242.147.244 (
talk)
19:29, 30 August 2008 (UTC)
By some "six degrees of separation" type browsing, I find
De'ang to have a clear case of copy-and-paste content and the like. Could do with a mass perge of copyrighted material etc.
doktorbwordsdeeds07:36, 25 August 2008 (UTC)
Server (computing) - Confusing definition of the term, followed by other several disorderly definitions as the bulk of the article. There has to be a more encyclopedic way to present the subject.
Kreachure (
talk)
23:18, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
Upon review of the article, it is suggested that an authority on the subject replace the list of unneeded "Definitions of terms" and replace it with a history of the use of servers.
Vasileios Spanoulis Page has been hijacked many many times by Spanoulis' fans and i couldn't keep up with all the edits. It has turned into some kind of fanpage.Plus it contains many useless information and details.Page is also very long Lacks NPOV too. Just to tell you that i had to removed links to videos in youtube one of which was called "Vassilis Spanoulis is better than Ricky Rubio and Rudy Fernandez".
Sergiogr ([[User
talk:Sergiogr|talk]]) 11:10, 18 August 2008 (UTC)
List of disaster films Contains many films which fall outside of this category. List seems to be a list of all films which contain disasters (using a very broad definition) rather than read as a list of films from the
Disaster film genre. Needs much editing.
Deckchair (
talk)
15:11, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
Wacky Races-intermittent POV-pushing and little sourcing
Folk high school - The article—particularly the section on France—still needs quite a bit of sourcing. Also needs to be fact checked and possibly some text editing for normalization.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:46, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Anton Abele, a little help with organising the references.
Have changed the format of the references so they are now in order and relate to the article text. Have also made various style and grammar and spelling alterations to the text. The article could do with some more references.
IrishPete (
talk)
19:42, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
Vazhithala, needs to be written more clearly with some geographic context and needs wikification
Cleaned up grammar, trimmed down unneeded info, added stub tag still in need of a picture and political stats etc.
Royall (
talk) 14:3619 August 2008
Taiyuan Cites no references. I corrected some grammar errors, but I'm sure there's stil much to be done. I think that the intro should be expanded, as well.
IceUnshattered (
talk)
Academic disciplines is in some major need of revisions. Both in terms of the current bullet format which is making additions to various sections unsymmetrical, as well as major content issues. Currently there are few cited sources, and disciplines of all stripes are being added - including those that do not even have a wiki article.
OpusDiabolus (
talk)
11:17, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
Stereotype needs dire work overall, drastically lacking citations, organization, POV, balance of information, and conciseness. Concentrates too much on ethnical discrimination rather than the overall topic itself. Recommended into splitting types of discrimination into sub-articles.
Zanibas (
talk)
07:35, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
The article on
The Mars Volta has sections (especially those on their various albums) that are a real mess. There are multiple references to dates with no year given; grammar is often horrible; references are most often lacking. Perhaps someone with an overall knowledge of the band's oeuvre might be able to do some work on it.—
StavinChain (
talk)
11:56, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
Phineas and Ferb - Someone re-wrote the whole article to lie about the names of the cast, character(s) and title of show, along with one of its taglines
Chicken 65 The article has been edited and counter-edited by people wanting to lay claim to its legacy or something.. and one of the references quote is a blogspot.com post.. extremely irrelevant blog.. the dish however is not.. please ask me for help if needed.. in my opinion the whole article should be flushed.. made bare.—
Bijun (
talk)
17:36, 22 May 2008 (UTC)
Jackie_Collins Article has been incorrectly sourced from unofficial biographies of the author. I will be editing it over the next few weeks
Twiglet23 (
talk) 15:58, 1 May 2008 (GMT)
World War III (section) - The premise of the section Difficulty in determining a "World War" is relevant to the page, but the arguments are confused, and it drifts off the point. Deciding what is meant by "World War" is a pre-requisite to determining what (if any) events will be labelled as "World War III". Perhaps this section should just raise the question and refer to
World War, which covers the ground more coherently.
Swiveler (
talk)
06:23, 14 April 2008 (UTC)
Rights of Man - This article is extremely cluttered, is running out of room, or needs better segways from section to section, some rewriting and possibly expert attention. Also lacks any sources.—
Lendorien (
talk)
16:43, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
Pancharatna Kritis - Needs to be rewritten in a more encyclopedic style, wikifying, copy editing, and a lot of work. Contains all of the lyrics of the piece. These need to be removed or moved to wikisource. POV issues as well. No sourcing and orphaned. Desperately in need of attention. I've started work on it, but help needed.—
Lendorien (
talk)
00:45, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
I did a little grammer checking at the start of it, but since I havent the show, someone who has may want to look at its plot
{*TEE DUB*} (
talk)
18:50, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
I did a little plot work too, but I only saw up to that part.-
Sakuraluver(
talk)