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Thanks! My personal policy is not to start an article on a film I haven't seen or a book I haven't read. Same goes with perfumes. Hope my YSL bias isn't too obvious. Pete aka -- Shirt58 ( talk) 12:09, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
— Mayeenul Islam (TALK) 06:19, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Hi – you helped me earlier on with Roarkp on the Hugh Jackman page, but this person won't stop adding this irrelevant sex symbol information, despite what we've said. I'm going to revert again, but what other actions should be taken? It's clear that this person intends wants to somewhat edit-war. Thanks – 4TheWynne (talk) (contribs) 11:21, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
Soryy but Crimea is not in russia. Either remove the text or change country name to Ukraine. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:2F07:D18F:FFFF:0:0:50F:10F ( talk) 13:05, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
An editor has complained about you at WP:AN3. They assert that you're edit warring at College Democrats of America. See Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring#User:Wikiisawesome reported by User:Collegeisreallycool (Result: ). You can respond there if you wish. Thanks, EdJohnston ( talk) 00:00, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
But the authors of the original paper [1] in 1958 were both Roger Penrose and his father Lionel, see his entry. I knew them both and they showed me this and related phenomena on a visit to their home in London in that year. Gwestheimer 22:41, 14 March 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gwestheimer ( talk • contribs)
I think you've made a mistake. I understand that patents are not primary sources for the CONTENT or CLAIMS within the body of a patent, but they are, indisputably, the primary, and only accurate source for information about the existance of a patent (or provisional patent application) and about when a patent was filed. My entry merely stated that there are two competing patents for the CRISPR invention and it went on to link to those patents. That information is relevant to the CRISPR process and is a valid entry to this Wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.191.14.17 ( talk) 20:48, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
I am adding a human disambiguation page for Craig Sutherland, moving existing content to: Craig Stephen Sutherland (1988-), Scottish footballer.
Please stop blocking my hndis edits. Thank you.
Please explain your reasoning about censoring factual information about Sarfatti's long advocacy of retrocausality in quantum theory as is evidenced by the quote from Herbert Gold's 1993 book Bohemia on the page. The recent conference at Trinity College on this very subject is quite relevant as is the two AAAS retrocausality meetings at USD hosted by Dan Sheehan. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.252.40.193 ( talk) 08:21, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
kindly do not revert the edit. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_pepper_crab Black Pepper Crab are no longer only serve at Eng Seng Restaurant. There's alot of superb restaurant that serve black pepper crab eg: Red House, Jumbo etc. Those link provided are paid ads.
Noted. Will be caution in the future. Thanks.
Very neat!, thought it's a very short article. I will try to look up more on Black Pepper Crab history so to add more content into the page. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 103.252.202.247 ( talk) 15:20, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
Hello. I had made the addition to the vivisection entry that you removed. I don't really know how to add citations in any linkable format, however I can give you the citations that back up what I wrote. If you would be willing to put my text back in and add the citations yourself, I would be cool with that. The information I typed out was found from several other Wikipedia articles: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kang_Kek_Iew#Leading_the_Santebal_and_Tuol_Sleng http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medical_torture#Asserted_instances http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuol_Sleng_Genocide_Museum
Additionally, non-Wikipedia sources of information I looked at included: http://content.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,436029,00.html http://www.gq.com/news-politics/big-issues/200907/cambodia-khmer-rouge-michael-paterniti?printable=true http://www.michaelyon-online.com/no-darker-heart.htm http://www.caravanmagazine.in/reportage/how-did-phung-ton-die
In doing a quick search for further sources relating to what I wrote, I just found two non-electronic sources, as well:
-Genocide and International Justice By Rebecca Joyce Frey, page 368
-“Keeping Them Alive, One Gets Nothing; Killing Them, One Loses Nothing”: Prosecuting Khmer Rouge Medical Practices as Crimes against Humanity By Laura Vilim, Georgetown University Law Center 2012 Documentation Center of Cambodia Summer 2010 Legal Associate
I would like what I wrote put back up as it is very easily verifiable information, it is an important part of the darkness of human history, and it is directly related to the article I put it under. So let me know if you aren't going to do it. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.188.138.170 ( talk) 23:42, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
Reverted you. I agree that sex slang is important to include, but the phrase "dog sex" never refers to the act of "dogging" -- only to sex with dogs, etc. -- so it is misleading and irrelevant to include it there. 86.184.161.129 ( talk) 04:39, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
I wanted that on there so please put it back on there — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.197.130.184 ( talk) 21:30, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
You asked "how could we know", I was basing it on the teaser trailer - which seems to be the source of several recent edits 2.101.167.133 ( talk) 22:31, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
My changes to Burnie Burns page (of Rooster Teeth fame) was reverted when I tried to adjust it to account for his middle name, and I was asked to source this. As I don't know how to put in sources, I figure my best bet is to leave it hear so someone who knows what they're doing can do it. It's mentioned in the Rooster Teeth podcast #317 at around 30 minutes into the video, by the man himself. http://roosterteeth.com/podcast/episode.php?id=317 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.244.5.184 ( talk) 03:43, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
I changed the page "God in Islam" to remain consistent in introducing deities of different mythologies. If you look at other pages on deities within a mythology, if any word is used, they are introduced with "mythology" and not "theology". God in Islam was the only article I saw that used theology, so I changed it for the sake of consistency. Perhaps I should bring this to the talk page of the article?
NesHoarder ( talk) 17:09, 1 April 2015 (UTC)nesHoarder
Frank ocean and Damienn jones had a song out last year and they are good friends stop erasing and if you could help him get his on Wikipedia page or at least a stub page Thanks my name is tiffany — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.176.17.217 ( talk) 17:41, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hey, i really, really thank you for editing the page of A Bailar Tour. I'm just reorganizing the references, I am not quiting them by the way. So please, I beg you to don't undo my edition. Thank you again cutie! -- Alaan681 ( talk) 18:43, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello.
Where is your evidence that the section of the U.S. Navy in which Mr Ventura served was part of SEAL in the years he served? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.253.4.9 ( talk) 20:43, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Thank you. David A ( talk) 07:15, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
No one yet seems to have noticed Hawayo Takata, which is also frankly a mess. Not sure how you want to handle this, but we don't need or want a draft submission for an existing article, right? Dougweller ( talk) 14:06, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
86.5.176.46 ( talk) 00:40, 6 April 2015 (UTC) How do I put references in to it
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I am the former touring drummer of Geggy Tah. There are a few online references, but not much. I listed the ones on there. Obviously Geggy Tah is a a well-respected band amongst "true" artists. I would be more than beyond honored to be listed as their former drummer on Wikipedia. I actually had my own page someone put up about 10-12 years ago but it was ultimately removed.. As far as OPM, I can live without, though we did play alot of high profile shows including opening for the black eyed peas.
Womenonthemoons (
talk) 02:08, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I just wrote my very first article and it was rejected by you. I would like to know the reason in brief so I can edit my article. This is the link for the article draft entitled: Simonida Milojkovic, the link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Simonida_Milojkovic, Thanks for your response and advice in advance. Please note that in the article I added photos taken from the google images and I assumed that it is legal to use those photos.
Radomirkrkic ( talk) 05:58, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
bbboooooooooooooooooooooooo — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nattuff ( talk • contribs) 04:10, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
I have researched a lot about this company and added more information. I have added the best and reliable resources to justify my article. Kindly review this article again and do let me know if still improvement is needed.
AB (
talk) 12:08, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
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For your work at WP:AFC Fiddle Faddle 13:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC) |
Hi, Thanks for the feedback on my article. I have added very reliable resources such as Peta, Google Patent and other supportive references. Please consider them to justify the facts. AB ( talk) 16:40, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Agshender ( talk) 18:38, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
I have greatly expanded the page you reviewed ( Draft:2015_Portland_Thorns_FC_season) and would appreciate it if you could re-review and let me know if there's anything else that needs changing. Thank you!
Congratulations on trying to censor those who would tell the truth about NIMHANS. But the truth will out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 101.63.229.7 ( talk) 06:44, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I have made the changes as Timtrent said. Kindly go through my article again. AB ( talk) 11:39, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for your message, I made the change because I thought that there was a spelling mistake, but it seems the two words are very similar in meanings, nothing that can change the meaning of your sentence, still don't get why you said say is not constructive, you can have more words on your disposition to make sentences that could be clearer for your readers, at least it was my case, not saying that it mostly the case, but you know... why bothering changing the word if it does not make a difference in meaning?, 193.190.253.147 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.190.253.147 ( talk) 22:04, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback on my article. I understand now that there is no article on CS5L CMM and I was attempting to publish as a sub topic to "CYBERSECURITY CAPABILITY MATURITY MODEL (C2M2)". How do I do this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sean p connors ( talk • contribs) 18:09, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, As you suggested I added reliable references to article Draft:ECIL Bus Station. I sent it again to review. Can you please take a look at it again? If there are any improvements can you please tell me? And also, by mistake I clicked 'run citation Bot' link, after that it edited my article. It is written that only reviewers should click it. Will there be any problem? Thanks, Supdiop ( talk) 18:07, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. Would you be kind enough to highlight, at a broad level, what some of the egregious errors were? What should I watch out for when I edit and resubmit.
Regards, Prak nat ( talk) 14:21, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
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I am awarding you a Editor's Barnstar because of your tireless contributions to wikipedia. Keep up the good work. Supdiop ( talk) 21:32, 12 April 2015 (UTC) |
I just submitted an article that was temporarily rejected for lack of references. Almost the entire article is from a book that was released by BRC press in Belize on March 24, 2015 and sold more than 600 copies at the launch. How are reviewers ever to see a book and pass on its merits, unless they purchase a copy in Belize? It had 3 university professors as its authors and what I quote from it is not matter that is likely subject to bias in reporting. Jzsj ( talk) 17:29, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
65.8.91.216 ( talk) 17:54, 13 April 2015 (UTC) Thanks for the review. You pointed out the lack of inline citation and I rechecked the instructions to put <ref> in the body of the article and I can see the 12 references on the draft page (in edition, in the body; in the draft as clickable notes and full references at the bottom of the article). Sure I missed something but so far I can't see what. Thanks for your time. I'm looking too to ad a picture, but so far, I'm not sure of the process and will work on it later.
I have edited the article with updated citations. Thanks for the review and your time.
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 19:52, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 19:52, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
So do i just wait, or do I need to do something and re-submit?
Sean p connors ( talk) 20:46, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
Please view my talk page. I am confused why my article has been blacklisted. No reason given that I can work out.
Hi Wikiisawesome
I hope I have suitably improved and referenced the page for Digital Democracy.
Sorry to rush you, but it is a page for a political party with honourable intentions - the aim of returning some democracy to a fairly undemocratic UK. The UK general election on May 7th, less than a month away.
Please say If there's anything else I can do to help?. Basically the party (Digital Democracy) relies on the app (www.truedemocracy.uk) - or other respected digital democracy apps - to know what people want, and what they think is important.
A BIG thank you
Jon
Dear Awesome - I tend to agree with you. Azur was relatively insignificant in the overall scheme of things and probably, on balance, not worthy of inclusion in an Encyclopedia. However, we need to remind ourselves occasionally that WIKIPEDIA is not The Britannica, nor Colliers, nor even our simplified Middle School World Book. It's a living, pulsating, constantly morphing experiment in online scholarship and erudition. That having been said, I am willing to withdraw "Peter Azur" from consideration, largely since you've placed the onus on me to further perfect this article rather than on your own editorial resources. WIKI will be all the poorer as a result...
I'm not sure if I am talking to you in the right way, but I really need your help. I just don't understand. My latest edit has live citations for every assertion. I have explained in detail on my talk page what was wrong with the previous edit. I do need to know point by point what's wrong with my edit. What information is incorrect? Lutetia99 (talk) 18:27, 14 April 2015 (UTC) Lutetia99 ( talk) 18:36, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi wikiisaweome,
About the Beastie Boys:
I say they're Jewish (their wikipedia page identifies them as a Jewish band);
I say Jewish ethnicity derives from the Middle East (the wikipedia entry on 'Genetic studies of Jewish origins' confirms this)
I say White people are from Europe (the wikipedia page on 'White people' confirms this)
None of this is at all controversial, so I'm changing it back.
If you have any further doubts please first seek clarification on the relevant wikipedia pages sourced before getting back in touch.
Hello Wikiisawesome,
After reading the review it seems evident that I need to strike a balance. Being that this is my first time having submitted an article, I certainly would welcome and appreciate the experienced hand of one of the editors. I do not want to give up, I will take all the advice that I need to make this work.
I am not altogether certain that I understand everything that was said and perhaps you could help me with that.
I tried to stay within the guidelines for independent, reliable, published sources and references. I’ve quoted from
I would certainly welcome your guidance here.
For clarity’s sake, I’ve gone back and put in quotes keywords and sentences from each of my references. I realize that some of the statements seemed bombastic rather than “encyclopedic,” however every statement that seems to be over the top was a direct quote from what I thought to be a legitimate source.
What has been difficult is the fact that Peter Drucker was an absolutely extraordinary individual with a track record second to none on Wall Street and the international markets. No one has had the track record or credentials that he had. Hence the remarkable foresight he had shown as referenced by the slogan. Rats! This even sounds like an advertisement! However, in truth it has the unique quality of being accurate and true as every reference shows. If you read any biography of his, it will sound like my brief description. Should I water down his accolades? BTW.. I am retired and void of any agenda, and again; I am willing to submit to every suggestion.
I tried to make the central point of the article the slogan itself. However I thought that in order to properly explain the ramifications of the slogan, one needed to know who had written it and their qualifications to have done so.
Secondly, it’s also important to not only give the definition of “outsourcing,” but to explain its history and impact on domestic and global markets. Still, I Want this to be all about the slogan.
Again, I welcome any and all input, and I bow to your experience. I’m not sure exactly what to change. You’ve made some pretty broad strokes. Perhaps you can help me with some specificity.
Thank you for your kind consideration and the time you took to evaluate the article. I hope to hear from you soon… Henry Hbazarte ( talk) 15:59, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
Yes it was... Thanks again Henry Hbazarte ( talk) 17:12, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you, Wikiawesome for reviewing the Alexander Beridze page so quickly. I made revisions on the language to avoid being close to the language used on the web in his bio which I hope will avoid the copyright issues. I hope this will solve the concerns. I appreciate your feedback. AnnRos
AnnRos (
talk) 17:38, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
AnnRos (
talk) 17:38, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
My submission was deleted. I now only see the first revision that I submitted. I have lost all my edits during this process. Also it was deleted with no reason, as you said you would correct the disambiguate question once it was accepted. This method does not encourage sharing in the Wikipedia. :(
I need to post this article for a class. I assumed this was the proper manner to do that.
Smoomaw ( talk) 14:31, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
{{ connected contributor}} is more useful that COI notices. I wondered if you knew of it? We try to manage out the actual puffery during AFC, and seem content with COI under those circumstances. Fiddle Faddle 18:00, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
hi you rejected our page. can you advise what needs to be changed? there are no references because we wrote it about our website which is a great new service helping students to apply to scholarships .. please advice..
I have fixed the errors about advertising on Draft:RedArcGaming i believe, could you check it again. And for notability i cant provide any references since the organisation has just started and wont be able to get references until user base is stared. Thank you can hope you can help further.
added 'The Daily Terrorgraph (The Daily Telegraph)' to the editors section because I actually have a copy of the edition that section is referring to.
This is not a re-review request. I am a bit puzzled about how much more information is needed and am hoping you can give a couple of example where you would expect a citation. Thanks
Xxxmicrobexxx ( talk) 09:34, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Can I post the Draft:ECIL Bus Station directly to the article space? or wait till it gets reviewed? It has been like 10 days since I sent it to re-review. I don't feel sad if it gets rejected. What do you think? should I proceed to add it to main article space? Thank you Supdiop ( talk) 20:36, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Dear Wikiisawesome, Thank you so much for your review of the article on Draft:Alexander Beridze. I am learning a lot about Wikipedia. Another reviewer, CookieMonster755, is also reviewing the page and has given me great suggestions as well, so I appreciate the entire Wikipedia community! I have made many revisions to the page in response to both sets of comments. I don't know the protocol for two reviewers reviewing the same page, but any further suggestions you have would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! AnnRos ( talk) 12:44, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I need to add to an article for a class assignment. I only need to add a few lines. I submitted additions to Adaptive Behavior as substance abuse was not addressed. Not they say it was denied. Due tomorrow at midnight I need to make an addition to that page. Can you tell me how?
Shumbard (
talk) 21:00, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I'm watching you growing in expertise and stature. I know that almost sounds arrogant, as if I know what I'm doing . I look forward to seeing more and more of your work. not just at WP:AFC, but following up things like vandalism, sock puppetry, pr0motional usernames, and som much more. And, among that, enjoying creating and editing articles. Fiddle Faddle 20:05, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I added reliable outside sources to the "South Carolina Gamecocks men's golf" article. Could you please review it again and let me know if it can moved out of draft status? Whitesquire ( talk) 10:51, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
@ Whitesquire: Congrats on getting the article into the mainspace! It looks good. wia ( talk) 20:05, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
If you look at the bottom of the template, you will see that a connection is shown from Wanstrow to Witham.
However, there is a station called Strap Lane Halt that should be shown between Wanstrow and Witham. This station is clearly shown on the template of the Wilts, Somerset and Dorset Railway, where the northwards line connection to that line from the East Somerset Railway is clearly marked and shown.
Can you ensure that Strap Lane Halt is now shown at the foot section of the East Somerset Railway line template, please.
Paul Sidorczuk ( talk) 07:37, 19 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello! I just wanted to know if you had any specific recommendations for how I could improve this page. I'm doing it for a class assignment, and my Professor said that the assignment was developed in consultation with the Wikipedia Education Initiative, so the format should be fine. I tried removing anything that sounded like an opinion, but please let me know if there's anything else I should change in particular in order to get it approved.
Dagannt (
talk) 17:14, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
The comment was that there were insufficient citations in the article. However, there are 12 footnotes. Is that not sufficient?
PalmerWolf (
talk) 13:24, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
Dear Reviewer,
Hi,
Just received a notification against my article submission about the Cookie Box Group. it has been rejected for being similar to an advertisement which is not my intention,
As you have read the article it's just to inform a great movement took by the Cookie Box Group in initiating a whole new story in pastry industry in a country, Iran. making document about the real people doing real things in Iran was my main intention.
and this going to be my first article, will sure take time to get it right inside Wikipedia framework; so I would appreciate if I could have your suggestions or comments on the part of the article which have a misled interpretation of advertising the brand.
thank you very much in advance. sarah.
Sarahmorid (
talk) 11:25, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
I am creating a page for a department in the University of Kent and am having difficulty doing so. Any help would be appreciated.
Blorange2 ( talk) 11:13, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
I'm back to my desktop and made revisions on the text according to your advices. I hope all is clear. Thanks for the help and your time.
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 17:46, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks! My personal policy is not to start an article on a film I haven't seen or a book I haven't read. Same goes with perfumes. Hope my YSL bias isn't too obvious. Pete aka -- Shirt58 ( talk) 12:09, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
— Mayeenul Islam (TALK) 06:19, 31 January 2015 (UTC)
Hi – you helped me earlier on with Roarkp on the Hugh Jackman page, but this person won't stop adding this irrelevant sex symbol information, despite what we've said. I'm going to revert again, but what other actions should be taken? It's clear that this person intends wants to somewhat edit-war. Thanks – 4TheWynne (talk) (contribs) 11:21, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
Soryy but Crimea is not in russia. Either remove the text or change country name to Ukraine. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:2F07:D18F:FFFF:0:0:50F:10F ( talk) 13:05, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
An editor has complained about you at WP:AN3. They assert that you're edit warring at College Democrats of America. See Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring#User:Wikiisawesome reported by User:Collegeisreallycool (Result: ). You can respond there if you wish. Thanks, EdJohnston ( talk) 00:00, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
But the authors of the original paper [1] in 1958 were both Roger Penrose and his father Lionel, see his entry. I knew them both and they showed me this and related phenomena on a visit to their home in London in that year. Gwestheimer 22:41, 14 March 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gwestheimer ( talk • contribs)
I think you've made a mistake. I understand that patents are not primary sources for the CONTENT or CLAIMS within the body of a patent, but they are, indisputably, the primary, and only accurate source for information about the existance of a patent (or provisional patent application) and about when a patent was filed. My entry merely stated that there are two competing patents for the CRISPR invention and it went on to link to those patents. That information is relevant to the CRISPR process and is a valid entry to this Wikipedia article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.191.14.17 ( talk) 20:48, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
I am adding a human disambiguation page for Craig Sutherland, moving existing content to: Craig Stephen Sutherland (1988-), Scottish footballer.
Please stop blocking my hndis edits. Thank you.
Please explain your reasoning about censoring factual information about Sarfatti's long advocacy of retrocausality in quantum theory as is evidenced by the quote from Herbert Gold's 1993 book Bohemia on the page. The recent conference at Trinity College on this very subject is quite relevant as is the two AAAS retrocausality meetings at USD hosted by Dan Sheehan. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.252.40.193 ( talk) 08:21, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
kindly do not revert the edit. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_pepper_crab Black Pepper Crab are no longer only serve at Eng Seng Restaurant. There's alot of superb restaurant that serve black pepper crab eg: Red House, Jumbo etc. Those link provided are paid ads.
Noted. Will be caution in the future. Thanks.
Very neat!, thought it's a very short article. I will try to look up more on Black Pepper Crab history so to add more content into the page. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 103.252.202.247 ( talk) 15:20, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
Hello. I had made the addition to the vivisection entry that you removed. I don't really know how to add citations in any linkable format, however I can give you the citations that back up what I wrote. If you would be willing to put my text back in and add the citations yourself, I would be cool with that. The information I typed out was found from several other Wikipedia articles: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kang_Kek_Iew#Leading_the_Santebal_and_Tuol_Sleng http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medical_torture#Asserted_instances http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuol_Sleng_Genocide_Museum
Additionally, non-Wikipedia sources of information I looked at included: http://content.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,436029,00.html http://www.gq.com/news-politics/big-issues/200907/cambodia-khmer-rouge-michael-paterniti?printable=true http://www.michaelyon-online.com/no-darker-heart.htm http://www.caravanmagazine.in/reportage/how-did-phung-ton-die
In doing a quick search for further sources relating to what I wrote, I just found two non-electronic sources, as well:
-Genocide and International Justice By Rebecca Joyce Frey, page 368
-“Keeping Them Alive, One Gets Nothing; Killing Them, One Loses Nothing”: Prosecuting Khmer Rouge Medical Practices as Crimes against Humanity By Laura Vilim, Georgetown University Law Center 2012 Documentation Center of Cambodia Summer 2010 Legal Associate
I would like what I wrote put back up as it is very easily verifiable information, it is an important part of the darkness of human history, and it is directly related to the article I put it under. So let me know if you aren't going to do it. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.188.138.170 ( talk) 23:42, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
Reverted you. I agree that sex slang is important to include, but the phrase "dog sex" never refers to the act of "dogging" -- only to sex with dogs, etc. -- so it is misleading and irrelevant to include it there. 86.184.161.129 ( talk) 04:39, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
I wanted that on there so please put it back on there — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.197.130.184 ( talk) 21:30, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
You asked "how could we know", I was basing it on the teaser trailer - which seems to be the source of several recent edits 2.101.167.133 ( talk) 22:31, 31 March 2015 (UTC)
My changes to Burnie Burns page (of Rooster Teeth fame) was reverted when I tried to adjust it to account for his middle name, and I was asked to source this. As I don't know how to put in sources, I figure my best bet is to leave it hear so someone who knows what they're doing can do it. It's mentioned in the Rooster Teeth podcast #317 at around 30 minutes into the video, by the man himself. http://roosterteeth.com/podcast/episode.php?id=317 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.244.5.184 ( talk) 03:43, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
I changed the page "God in Islam" to remain consistent in introducing deities of different mythologies. If you look at other pages on deities within a mythology, if any word is used, they are introduced with "mythology" and not "theology". God in Islam was the only article I saw that used theology, so I changed it for the sake of consistency. Perhaps I should bring this to the talk page of the article?
NesHoarder ( talk) 17:09, 1 April 2015 (UTC)nesHoarder
Frank ocean and Damienn jones had a song out last year and they are good friends stop erasing and if you could help him get his on Wikipedia page or at least a stub page Thanks my name is tiffany — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.176.17.217 ( talk) 17:41, 1 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hey, i really, really thank you for editing the page of A Bailar Tour. I'm just reorganizing the references, I am not quiting them by the way. So please, I beg you to don't undo my edition. Thank you again cutie! -- Alaan681 ( talk) 18:43, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello.
Where is your evidence that the section of the U.S. Navy in which Mr Ventura served was part of SEAL in the years he served? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 176.253.4.9 ( talk) 20:43, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Thank you. David A ( talk) 07:15, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
No one yet seems to have noticed Hawayo Takata, which is also frankly a mess. Not sure how you want to handle this, but we don't need or want a draft submission for an existing article, right? Dougweller ( talk) 14:06, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
86.5.176.46 ( talk) 00:40, 6 April 2015 (UTC) How do I put references in to it
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I am the former touring drummer of Geggy Tah. There are a few online references, but not much. I listed the ones on there. Obviously Geggy Tah is a a well-respected band amongst "true" artists. I would be more than beyond honored to be listed as their former drummer on Wikipedia. I actually had my own page someone put up about 10-12 years ago but it was ultimately removed.. As far as OPM, I can live without, though we did play alot of high profile shows including opening for the black eyed peas.
Womenonthemoons (
talk) 02:08, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I just wrote my very first article and it was rejected by you. I would like to know the reason in brief so I can edit my article. This is the link for the article draft entitled: Simonida Milojkovic, the link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Simonida_Milojkovic, Thanks for your response and advice in advance. Please note that in the article I added photos taken from the google images and I assumed that it is legal to use those photos.
Radomirkrkic ( talk) 05:58, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
bbboooooooooooooooooooooooo — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nattuff ( talk • contribs) 04:10, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
I have researched a lot about this company and added more information. I have added the best and reliable resources to justify my article. Kindly review this article again and do let me know if still improvement is needed.
AB (
talk) 12:08, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
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For your work at WP:AFC Fiddle Faddle 13:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC) |
Hi, Thanks for the feedback on my article. I have added very reliable resources such as Peta, Google Patent and other supportive references. Please consider them to justify the facts. AB ( talk) 16:40, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Agshender ( talk) 18:38, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
I have greatly expanded the page you reviewed ( Draft:2015_Portland_Thorns_FC_season) and would appreciate it if you could re-review and let me know if there's anything else that needs changing. Thank you!
Congratulations on trying to censor those who would tell the truth about NIMHANS. But the truth will out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 101.63.229.7 ( talk) 06:44, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I have made the changes as Timtrent said. Kindly go through my article again. AB ( talk) 11:39, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for your message, I made the change because I thought that there was a spelling mistake, but it seems the two words are very similar in meanings, nothing that can change the meaning of your sentence, still don't get why you said say is not constructive, you can have more words on your disposition to make sentences that could be clearer for your readers, at least it was my case, not saying that it mostly the case, but you know... why bothering changing the word if it does not make a difference in meaning?, 193.190.253.147 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.190.253.147 ( talk) 22:04, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your feedback on my article. I understand now that there is no article on CS5L CMM and I was attempting to publish as a sub topic to "CYBERSECURITY CAPABILITY MATURITY MODEL (C2M2)". How do I do this? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sean p connors ( talk • contribs) 18:09, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, As you suggested I added reliable references to article Draft:ECIL Bus Station. I sent it again to review. Can you please take a look at it again? If there are any improvements can you please tell me? And also, by mistake I clicked 'run citation Bot' link, after that it edited my article. It is written that only reviewers should click it. Will there be any problem? Thanks, Supdiop ( talk) 18:07, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. Would you be kind enough to highlight, at a broad level, what some of the egregious errors were? What should I watch out for when I edit and resubmit.
Regards, Prak nat ( talk) 14:21, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
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I am awarding you a Editor's Barnstar because of your tireless contributions to wikipedia. Keep up the good work. Supdiop ( talk) 21:32, 12 April 2015 (UTC) |
I just submitted an article that was temporarily rejected for lack of references. Almost the entire article is from a book that was released by BRC press in Belize on March 24, 2015 and sold more than 600 copies at the launch. How are reviewers ever to see a book and pass on its merits, unless they purchase a copy in Belize? It had 3 university professors as its authors and what I quote from it is not matter that is likely subject to bias in reporting. Jzsj ( talk) 17:29, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
65.8.91.216 ( talk) 17:54, 13 April 2015 (UTC) Thanks for the review. You pointed out the lack of inline citation and I rechecked the instructions to put <ref> in the body of the article and I can see the 12 references on the draft page (in edition, in the body; in the draft as clickable notes and full references at the bottom of the article). Sure I missed something but so far I can't see what. Thanks for your time. I'm looking too to ad a picture, but so far, I'm not sure of the process and will work on it later.
I have edited the article with updated citations. Thanks for the review and your time.
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 19:52, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 19:52, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
So do i just wait, or do I need to do something and re-submit?
Sean p connors ( talk) 20:46, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
Please view my talk page. I am confused why my article has been blacklisted. No reason given that I can work out.
Hi Wikiisawesome
I hope I have suitably improved and referenced the page for Digital Democracy.
Sorry to rush you, but it is a page for a political party with honourable intentions - the aim of returning some democracy to a fairly undemocratic UK. The UK general election on May 7th, less than a month away.
Please say If there's anything else I can do to help?. Basically the party (Digital Democracy) relies on the app (www.truedemocracy.uk) - or other respected digital democracy apps - to know what people want, and what they think is important.
A BIG thank you
Jon
Dear Awesome - I tend to agree with you. Azur was relatively insignificant in the overall scheme of things and probably, on balance, not worthy of inclusion in an Encyclopedia. However, we need to remind ourselves occasionally that WIKIPEDIA is not The Britannica, nor Colliers, nor even our simplified Middle School World Book. It's a living, pulsating, constantly morphing experiment in online scholarship and erudition. That having been said, I am willing to withdraw "Peter Azur" from consideration, largely since you've placed the onus on me to further perfect this article rather than on your own editorial resources. WIKI will be all the poorer as a result...
I'm not sure if I am talking to you in the right way, but I really need your help. I just don't understand. My latest edit has live citations for every assertion. I have explained in detail on my talk page what was wrong with the previous edit. I do need to know point by point what's wrong with my edit. What information is incorrect? Lutetia99 (talk) 18:27, 14 April 2015 (UTC) Lutetia99 ( talk) 18:36, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi wikiisaweome,
About the Beastie Boys:
I say they're Jewish (their wikipedia page identifies them as a Jewish band);
I say Jewish ethnicity derives from the Middle East (the wikipedia entry on 'Genetic studies of Jewish origins' confirms this)
I say White people are from Europe (the wikipedia page on 'White people' confirms this)
None of this is at all controversial, so I'm changing it back.
If you have any further doubts please first seek clarification on the relevant wikipedia pages sourced before getting back in touch.
Hello Wikiisawesome,
After reading the review it seems evident that I need to strike a balance. Being that this is my first time having submitted an article, I certainly would welcome and appreciate the experienced hand of one of the editors. I do not want to give up, I will take all the advice that I need to make this work.
I am not altogether certain that I understand everything that was said and perhaps you could help me with that.
I tried to stay within the guidelines for independent, reliable, published sources and references. I’ve quoted from
I would certainly welcome your guidance here.
For clarity’s sake, I’ve gone back and put in quotes keywords and sentences from each of my references. I realize that some of the statements seemed bombastic rather than “encyclopedic,” however every statement that seems to be over the top was a direct quote from what I thought to be a legitimate source.
What has been difficult is the fact that Peter Drucker was an absolutely extraordinary individual with a track record second to none on Wall Street and the international markets. No one has had the track record or credentials that he had. Hence the remarkable foresight he had shown as referenced by the slogan. Rats! This even sounds like an advertisement! However, in truth it has the unique quality of being accurate and true as every reference shows. If you read any biography of his, it will sound like my brief description. Should I water down his accolades? BTW.. I am retired and void of any agenda, and again; I am willing to submit to every suggestion.
I tried to make the central point of the article the slogan itself. However I thought that in order to properly explain the ramifications of the slogan, one needed to know who had written it and their qualifications to have done so.
Secondly, it’s also important to not only give the definition of “outsourcing,” but to explain its history and impact on domestic and global markets. Still, I Want this to be all about the slogan.
Again, I welcome any and all input, and I bow to your experience. I’m not sure exactly what to change. You’ve made some pretty broad strokes. Perhaps you can help me with some specificity.
Thank you for your kind consideration and the time you took to evaluate the article. I hope to hear from you soon… Henry Hbazarte ( talk) 15:59, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
Yes it was... Thanks again Henry Hbazarte ( talk) 17:12, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
Thank you, Wikiawesome for reviewing the Alexander Beridze page so quickly. I made revisions on the language to avoid being close to the language used on the web in his bio which I hope will avoid the copyright issues. I hope this will solve the concerns. I appreciate your feedback. AnnRos
AnnRos (
talk) 17:38, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
AnnRos (
talk) 17:38, 15 April 2015 (UTC)
My submission was deleted. I now only see the first revision that I submitted. I have lost all my edits during this process. Also it was deleted with no reason, as you said you would correct the disambiguate question once it was accepted. This method does not encourage sharing in the Wikipedia. :(
I need to post this article for a class. I assumed this was the proper manner to do that.
Smoomaw ( talk) 14:31, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
{{ connected contributor}} is more useful that COI notices. I wondered if you knew of it? We try to manage out the actual puffery during AFC, and seem content with COI under those circumstances. Fiddle Faddle 18:00, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
hi you rejected our page. can you advise what needs to be changed? there are no references because we wrote it about our website which is a great new service helping students to apply to scholarships .. please advice..
I have fixed the errors about advertising on Draft:RedArcGaming i believe, could you check it again. And for notability i cant provide any references since the organisation has just started and wont be able to get references until user base is stared. Thank you can hope you can help further.
added 'The Daily Terrorgraph (The Daily Telegraph)' to the editors section because I actually have a copy of the edition that section is referring to.
This is not a re-review request. I am a bit puzzled about how much more information is needed and am hoping you can give a couple of example where you would expect a citation. Thanks
Xxxmicrobexxx ( talk) 09:34, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Can I post the Draft:ECIL Bus Station directly to the article space? or wait till it gets reviewed? It has been like 10 days since I sent it to re-review. I don't feel sad if it gets rejected. What do you think? should I proceed to add it to main article space? Thank you Supdiop ( talk) 20:36, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Dear Wikiisawesome, Thank you so much for your review of the article on Draft:Alexander Beridze. I am learning a lot about Wikipedia. Another reviewer, CookieMonster755, is also reviewing the page and has given me great suggestions as well, so I appreciate the entire Wikipedia community! I have made many revisions to the page in response to both sets of comments. I don't know the protocol for two reviewers reviewing the same page, but any further suggestions you have would be greatly appreciated. Thank you! AnnRos ( talk) 12:44, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I need to add to an article for a class assignment. I only need to add a few lines. I submitted additions to Adaptive Behavior as substance abuse was not addressed. Not they say it was denied. Due tomorrow at midnight I need to make an addition to that page. Can you tell me how?
Shumbard (
talk) 21:00, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I'm watching you growing in expertise and stature. I know that almost sounds arrogant, as if I know what I'm doing . I look forward to seeing more and more of your work. not just at WP:AFC, but following up things like vandalism, sock puppetry, pr0motional usernames, and som much more. And, among that, enjoying creating and editing articles. Fiddle Faddle 20:05, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
I added reliable outside sources to the "South Carolina Gamecocks men's golf" article. Could you please review it again and let me know if it can moved out of draft status? Whitesquire ( talk) 10:51, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
@ Whitesquire: Congrats on getting the article into the mainspace! It looks good. wia ( talk) 20:05, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
If you look at the bottom of the template, you will see that a connection is shown from Wanstrow to Witham.
However, there is a station called Strap Lane Halt that should be shown between Wanstrow and Witham. This station is clearly shown on the template of the Wilts, Somerset and Dorset Railway, where the northwards line connection to that line from the East Somerset Railway is clearly marked and shown.
Can you ensure that Strap Lane Halt is now shown at the foot section of the East Somerset Railway line template, please.
Paul Sidorczuk ( talk) 07:37, 19 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello! I just wanted to know if you had any specific recommendations for how I could improve this page. I'm doing it for a class assignment, and my Professor said that the assignment was developed in consultation with the Wikipedia Education Initiative, so the format should be fine. I tried removing anything that sounded like an opinion, but please let me know if there's anything else I should change in particular in order to get it approved.
Dagannt (
talk) 17:14, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
The comment was that there were insufficient citations in the article. However, there are 12 footnotes. Is that not sufficient?
PalmerWolf (
talk) 13:24, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
Dear Reviewer,
Hi,
Just received a notification against my article submission about the Cookie Box Group. it has been rejected for being similar to an advertisement which is not my intention,
As you have read the article it's just to inform a great movement took by the Cookie Box Group in initiating a whole new story in pastry industry in a country, Iran. making document about the real people doing real things in Iran was my main intention.
and this going to be my first article, will sure take time to get it right inside Wikipedia framework; so I would appreciate if I could have your suggestions or comments on the part of the article which have a misled interpretation of advertising the brand.
thank you very much in advance. sarah.
Sarahmorid (
talk) 11:25, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
I am creating a page for a department in the University of Kent and am having difficulty doing so. Any help would be appreciated.
Blorange2 ( talk) 11:13, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
I'm back to my desktop and made revisions on the text according to your advices. I hope all is clear. Thanks for the help and your time.
65.8.253.169 (
talk) 17:46, 21 April 2015 (UTC)