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Copy edit of Anesthesiologist

I've reviewed your copy edits on Anesthesiologist of 21 July 2017. You got rid of some redundant language and did some good cleanup of the lists. However, I'm afraid you added some minor style mistakes to the article. I shouldn't say that it's wrong, but it lacks consistency with other Wikipedia articles. Every publishing house has its own house style, and you may be used to a different style than is practiced here.

I would recommend that at some point you take a look at Wikipedia's Manual of Style and the GOCE copy editing instructions. However, there's no reason not to keep working on the article.

Some specific notes on your copyedit:

  • Excessive capitalization – There should not be capitalization for emphasis. In particular with professional titles not attached to a person's name (see MOS:JOBTITLE). There are a lot of other generic terms (eg: Intensive Care Units, Referral Hospitals, Transplants, Multiple Choice, etc.) which should not have been capitalized. Sentence case should be used in the infobox, so instead of "Medicine, Science" it should be "Medicine, science".
  • Acronyms – should be given in expanded form on first use in the lead and body (see MOS:ACRO for use and acceptable formats).
  • Excessive bold – Wikipedia does not use bold for emphasis (see MOS:BOLD). The only bold text in an article should be when stating the subject of the article for the first time in the lead. Bold is sometimes used for list items in a glossary article, but that's a specialized case. Another possible exception are row and column headings in a table. Other than those instances, bold text should be avoided.
  • Italic text is used for emphasis, foreign words not common in non-specialized English, titles of major works of art, and when referring to words themselves – but should not be overused (see MOS:ITALIC). Where you have the term anesthesiologist refers that's good, because you're referring to the word itself (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Words as words). But later on, Anaesthetists are physicians is no longer necessary to be italic. The italics in the Germany section are good ( MOS:FOREIGNITALIC).
  • Section headers should use sentence case and be kept short. It is generally not necessary to repeat the subject of the article in the section header. (This can be assumed.)
    • The bulk of the article is in the section Training in different countries. I think to better reflect the content of that section, it might be changed to something like Practices and training by country, or perhaps Regulation and qualifications by country. The "by country" part keeps it shorter than "in different countries"
  • Watch for stray spaces at punctuation, references, and inline templates.
  • Generally speaking, Wikipedia prefers prose to lists. It would be good if a lot of the lists could be converted to prose (i.e. written-out in paragraphs).
    • Watch for trivia: Sometimes editors will put trivial information in lists. Consider whether the information is important or relevant to the article. The article is about a profession; detailed instructions on how to qualify for the profession in a specific country may be excessive. (Consider how long the article would be if there were such detailed instructions for 150+ countries.)

Sorry, this is mostly nit-picky style stuff. I hope it helps you move in the right direction. I'll try to be available to look at your prose when you've done a little more work on the article. –  Reidgreg ( talk) 21:32, 22 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Hi, I am delighted to see that you had spared a lot of time to review my work. I am really grateful to you sir, and look forward to further guidance as I progress. Thank you for providing relevant links and making out the mistakes. :) I will keep in mind all the notes and others as I find them while copy-editing. Thank you again so much:) I will also see your copy-edits and try to learn an accepted style and how to proceed with copy-editing. :) Red Pen ( talk) 21:43, 22 July 2017 (UTC) reply


@ Vr parashar: Before getting back into it, I'd like to talk about some general philosophy for formatting. When a person learns about something new, they naturally want to try out these new tools of knowledge and experiment. The markup tools in the Wikimedia software let you do a lot of neat things, and templates take it even further. However, too much markup on a page can make it difficult to read. Making too many things stand out, drawing the reader's attention, can be distracting and have the effect that nothing stands out. Too much linking actually makes it less likely for a reader to follow any links (see WP:OVERLINKING). So excessive bold, capitals, italics and linking can make an article less readable and useful, which is contrary to the goal of making an encyclopedia for everyone. Use bold and italics, but use them sparingly. Capitalize where appropriate, which lets acronyms and proper names stand out. Link appropriate items relevant to the subject, which the reader is likely to follow.

Okay, lecture mode off. Let's focus on the first sentence: An Anesthesiologist ( American English) or Anaesthetist ( British English) is a Physician trained in Anesthesia and Perioperative medicine.

  • Bold text (for a full treatment, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Boldface)
    • The subject of the article Anesthesiologist should be in bold text on first occurrence in the lead. ( MOS:BOLDTITLE)
    • Anaesthetist is a major alternative name for the article's subject, as well as a redirect to the article, and should also be in bold text on first occurrence in the lead. ( MOS:BOLDSYN)
  • Some capitalization issues (for a full treatment, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters).
    • Sorry if I was using terms you didn't know. In general:
      • Letter case is when you capitalize every letter, essentially using ALL CAPS. This is one of the valid styles for acronyms. Otherwise, it is to be avoided.
      • Word case (or title case) is when you capitalize the first letter of every word (except for come less-important words, like the and of ). This is often used on Wikipedia for titles of works of art and for proper names.
      • Sentence case is when you capitalize the first letter of a sentence (or sentence fragment). This is used on Wikipedia for article titles, section headers, and captions.
      • With sentence case, any proper names or acronyms in that sentence can also have capital letters, as appropriate.
    • So, back to that first sentence, the only proper names are American English and British English. (You can be doubly sure of that because these take their names from other proper names.) All the other nouns in the first sentence are generic and should be lower-case.
  • Italics (general information in the main MOS, full treatment at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Italics)
    • Italic can be used for:
      • foreign words and phrases not common in everyday non-specialized English Checked
      • titles of works of art, which in this article might be the title of a medical journal (periodical)
      • words-as-words
      • emphasis (used sparingly)
    • It is not necessary to put proper names in italics. The guideline about foreign words being in italics does not apply to proper names. The only reason left for italics would be for emphasis, though I generally feel that the title case capitalization which proper names receive should allow them to stand out sufficiently.

A little further on, with several ( CRNAs) or anesthesiology assistants

  • Acronyms
    • Acronyms should be expanded on first occurrence in the lead and body. The article shouldn't make the reader guess what the acronym means, or require them to follow a link. Mousing-over the link might be sufficient for a common acronym, but I don't think a general readership will know this one.
      • In this instance, you could write: with several certified registered nurse anesthetists (CRNAs) or anesthesiology assistants". I was doubtful of the capitalization and followed the link, which is a redirect, and which led to show it in lower-case (generic). (It is not necessary to capitalize for the sake of explaining an acronym.)
      • A little further on is MD which I think most people would know from context as medical doctor / Doctorate of Medicine, but DO should be expanded and for consistency of formatting probably best to expand them both. If that becomes too "clunky" the sentence may have to be rephrased.

Down in the body of the article, there's a mix of hyphens and dashes

  • Dashes (see MOS:DASH)
    • This is pretty nit-picky but it's important for consistency, clarity and conciseness (my copy editing trinity). To show you what they look like, here is the hyphen - en dash – and em dash —. There should be a way to enter them from your keyboard or the edit window, or you can use the markup – and —. (They get their names because they were originally the width of the letters n and m.)
    • In short, hyphens are used to bring things together (conjunction) and dashes are used to separate them (disjunction).
    • Hyphens are usually used for compound modifiers such as ANZCA-approved training or three-year specialization, which increases readability.
    • Dashes are generally used to mark divisions in a sentence. Minor divisions between clauses use a comma; independent clauses can have a semicolon – stronger breaks may be marked with a dash. However, there shouldn't be more than two dashes in a sentence, and copy editors should be careful about clarity and consider breaking a complex sentence into two simpler sentences or otherwise rephrasing it.
    • You can use spaced en dashes or unspaced em dashes, but should use one style consistently through an article.
    • en dashes are also used for numeric ranges, date ranges, separating list items, and certain compounds (see: MOS:DASH).

I see you've changed the lists into prose and wanted to look at that, but my attention is drifting. Will try to get a look at your prose after I'm rested. –  Reidgreg ( talk) 10:23, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Again thanks for extensive reviewing and showing interest in guiding a new wikipedian :) yes I basically converted it to prose and I think in the next step will go through MOS first and then do some refined edits to make it more clear. anyways Thank you for your valuable time and yes please do review the article as I again edit it hehe :D :) Thanks for helping sir. Good day. :) Red Pen ( talk) 13:39, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply


Looking at prose:

  • In this phrase – Anesthesiologists often provide more intensive care techniques – can you spot the ambiguity?
    • It's the last four words, "more intensive care techniques". This is why compound modifiers are usually hyphenated to make their relationship and meaning more clear. This could be either:
      1. more intensive-care techniques – which means additional intensive care techniques, or
      2. more-intensive care techniques – which means care techniques which are more intense or more concentrated/vigorous
    • From the previous versions and context, I believe the first meaning was intended. But rather than "more intensive-care techniques", I feel that "additional intensive-care techniques" might be clearer.
    • Look for other compound modifiers and see if there are similar issues.
  • In [other areas of the] United States, anesthesiologists work in what is deemed – with this phrasing, you removed the part in square [brackets], which changes the meaning. Mind you, it wasn't very clear to begin with, since earlier text never specified any part of the U.S. to distinguish these "other areas". I feel this could maybe be "In some areas of the United States" and so on.
  • At the beginning of Patient-informed consent, you moved some clauses around which changed the meaning.
    • Patient-Informed Consent is a medical principle stating that patients should be fully informed about the manner in which anesthesia will be administered to them. That makes it sound like patient-informed consent is only about anesthesia and not a broader standard in medicine.
    • On the other hand, looking at the earlier version (found under the "view history" tab of the article), I think you're right that it needs a better introduction of the principle before going into how specific national associations treat it.
      • I would recommend going back to the original version for the first sentence (you can find it under the "view history" tab on the article). The one that defines it as a "fundamental ethical and legal principle". Then a second sentence could talk about how it applies to anesthesia, with the patient being fully informed, etc.
      • You might also link to informed consent or doctor–patient relationship, if the reader wants more information.
  • Under "Selection and training" (which sounds a little awkward) it says "Selection and training process is similar in various countries." If the process is similar, then it should be possible to generalize it. You've read the article a few times by now, so you should be able to judge. Consider writing a generalization which will allow the article to avoid repeating information later on.
  • The fourth paragraph of the lead is all about the U.S. and I don't believe it belongs there. The lead is meant to summarize the entire article. I feel this paragraph should be moved down to the U.S. section and incorporated there.
    • In order to better summarize the article, you might write a new lead paragraph to replace the above. Again, you could try writing a paragraph to generalize the training or qualifications usually required by countries, or something else you feel has large coverage in the body but not in the lead.
  • In the section on Australia and New Zealand, I think the two-year PMET is before the five-year ANZCA approved-training, so it's a total of 7 years. The PMET seems to be general medical education and more of a qualifier to anesthesiology training, so I understand if you didn't want to include it.
  • In the lead, where you have a the before United States, that's a good sign you should also have a the before UK.
  • Spacing – there are a couple places where the article has a space before a comma, and I spotted one place that needs a space before opening parenthesis.

You're pretty brave to take on copy editing so soon! I was hanging around doing general cleanup for about six months before I started copy editing. When I came across statistics that the pages I was contributing to the most were getting 900k page views per month, I decided to work on improving my writing and joined the GOCE to learn and practice. I received a lot of help then, and I try to pay it forward a bit with other new editors. – Reidgreg ( talk) 16:24, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Hi, This is a very nice guide for a new editor and the fact that it is related specifically to my editing only and the review is also particularly about my editing only, it is really helpful. :) yes, for me copy-editing was always interesting and the way you unfold the points that we keep in mind while copy-editing makes it all the more interesting! :)
So, well, I think I got too much into reducing the word count haha.. :D ok I will see the earlier versions and see what the writer actually wanted to convey. All that you have pointed is good and helpful but one thing I will like to point sir, In Australia and New Zealand section, PMET does not come before ANZCA training, it a part of it - two years of PMET and then three years of advanced training make up the total five years of ANZCA training (As it was written in it before I started editing). I am sad you could not make it out from that text. I will try to first understand what writer originally wanted to convey and will try to make it clearer while preserving the meaning of sentences(rephrasing). Thanks for your extensive guide and valuable time again sir, I am really happy to get personalised suggestions on my editing which will surely help me throughout my copy-editing in future also. Thank you. :) Red Pen ( talk) 00:30, 24 July 2017 (UTC) reply
I will further edit the article after reading MoS and GOCE guidelines. so it will take a little bit of time sir, like 3-4 days. :) Red Pen ( talk) 11:17, 24 July 2017 (UTC) reply
I don't want you to rush, but don't feel that you have to learn everything. Very few editors know the whole MOS, though it's good to be familiar with the main pages. You'll learn a lot through practise, and (knock on wood) I should be able to check your work this time. Sorry about the PMET–ANZCA thing, I was too lazy to check the other articles and/or sources to confirm. – Reidgreg ( talk) 16:33, 26 July 2017 (UTC) reply

A cookie for you!

Sorry you didn't complete the copyedit for the drive, but please do continue to work on it and come back for the next blitz or drive. – Reidgreg ( talk) 12:08, 1 August 2017 (UTC) reply

Sorry for so much delay in responding sir. And Thank you for this delicious cookie!! :D :D ...actually sir I was reading it throughout and have almost covered main points so I will soon edit that page again. Thanks for your valuable support again. Red Pen ( talk) 11:15, 7 August 2017 (UTC) reply

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Progress report: As of 09:05, 3 December 2020 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors had processed 663 requests (18 from 2019) since 1 January and there were 52 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog of articles tagged for copy-editing stood at 494 (see monthly progress graph above).

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July Drive: Almost 575,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 24 people who signed up, 18 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

August Blitz: From 15 to 21 August, we copy edited articles tagged in April and May 2021 and requests. 9 participating editors completed 17 copy edits on the blitz. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

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June election: Jonesey95 was chosen to continue as lead coordinator, assisted by Dhtwiki, Tenryuu, and Miniapolis.

New maintenance template added to our project scope: After a short discussion in June, we added {{ cleanup tense}} to the list of maintenance templates that adds articles to the Guild's copy editing backlog categories. This change added 198 articles, spread over 97 months of backlog, to our queue. We processed all of those articles except for those from the three or four most recent months during the July backlog elimination drive (Here's a link to a "tense" discussion during the drive).

Progress report: As of 18:26, 24 September 2021 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 468 requests since 1 January and there were 60 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog of articles tagged for copy-editing stood at 433 (see monthly progress graph above).

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Hello and welcome to the December GOCE newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since September 2021.

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September Drive: Almost 400,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 27 people who signed up, 21 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

October Blitz: From 17 to 23 October, we copy edited articles tagged in May and June 2021 and requests. 8 participating editors completed 26 copy edits on the blitz. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

November Drive: Over 350,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 21 people who signed up, 14 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

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It is with great sadness that we report the death on 19 November of Twofingered Typist, who was active with the Guild almost daily for the past several years. His contributions long exceeded the thresholds for the Guild's highest awards, and he had a hand in innumerable good and featured article promotions as a willing collaborator. Twofingered Typist also served as a Guild coordinator from July 2019 to June 2021. He is sorely missed by the Wikipedia community.

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GOCE April 2022 newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors April 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the April newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since December 2021.

Election results: Jonesey95 retired as lead coordinator. Reidgreg was approved to fill this role after an 18-month absence from the coordinator team, and Baffle gab1978 was chosen as an assistant coordinator following a one-year break. Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Tenryuu continued on as long-standing assistant coordinators.

January Drive: Of the 22 editors who signed up, 16 editors claimed 146 copy edits including 45 requests. ( details)

February Blitz: This one-week effort focused on requests and a theme of Africa and African diaspora history. Of the 12 editors who signed up, 6 editors recorded 21 copy edits, including 4 requests. ( details)

March Drive: Of the 28 editors who signed up, 18 claimed 116 copy edits including 25 requests. ( details)

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Guild of Copy Editors June 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June 2022 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since April 2022. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Blitz: of the 16 editors who signed up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, 12 completed at least one copy-edit, and between them removed 21 articles from the copy-editing backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 27 editors signed up for our May Backlog Elimination Drive; of these, 20 copy-edited at least one article. 144 articles were copy-edited, and 88 articles from our target months August and September 2021 were removed from the backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: our June Copy Editing Blitz, starting at 00:01, 19 June and closing at 00:59, 25 June (UTC), will focus on articles tagged for copy edit in September and October 2021, and requests from March, April and May 2022. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 07:12, 14 June 2022 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have completed 209 requests since 1 January and the backlog stands at 1,404 articles.

Election news: Nominations for our half-yearly Election of Coordinators continues until 23:50 on 15 June (UTC), after which, voting will commence until 23:59, 30 June (UTC). All Wikipedians in good standing (active and not blocked, banned, or under ArbCom or community sanctions) are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed.

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Guild of Copy Editors' October 2022 newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors October 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to our latest newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since June. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Drive: Of the 22 editors who signed up for our July Backlog Elimination Drive, 18 copy-edited, between them, 116 articles. Barnstars awarded are noted here.

Blitz: Participants in our August Copy Editing Blitz copy-edited 51,074 words in 17 articles. Of the 15 editors who signed up, 11 claimed at least one copy-edit. Barnstars awarded are noted here.

Drive: Forty-one editors took part in our September Backlog Elimination Drive; between them they copy-edited 199 articles. Barnstars awards are noted here.

Blitz: Our October Copy Editing Blitz begins on 16 October at 00:01 (UTC) and will end on 22 October at 23:59 (UTC). Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 19:57, 12 October 2022 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 303 requests for copy edit – including withdrawn and declined ones – since 1 January. At the time of writing, there are 77 requests awaiting attention and the backlog of tagged articles stands at 1,759. We always need more active, skilled copyeditors – particularly for requests – so please get involved if you can.

Election news: In our mid-year election, serving coordinators Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Reidgreg and Tenryuu were returned for another term, and were joined by new coordinator Zippybonzo. No lead coordinator was elected for this half-year. Jonesey95, a long-serving coordinator and lead, was elected as coordinator emeritus; we thank them for their service. Thank you to everyone who took part. Our next election of coordinators takes place throughout December. If you'd like to help out at the GOCE, please consider nominating yourself or other suitable editors (with their permission, of course!). It's your Guild, after all!

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Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to our latest newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since October. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Blitz: Our October Copy Editing Blitz focused on July and August 2022 request months; and articles tagged for c/e in December 2021 and January 2022. Seventeen of those who signed up claimed at least one copy-edit, and between them copy-edited forty-six articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: In the November Backlog Elimination Drive, thirty editors signed up, twenty-two of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Both target months—December 2021 and January 2022—were cleared, and February was added to the target months. Sixteen requests were copy-edited and 239 articles were removed from the backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Our seven-day-long December 2022 Copy Editing Blitz begins on 17 December at 00:01 (UTC)*. It will focus on articles tagged for copy-edit in February 2022, and pending requests from September and October. Barnstars awarded will be available here.

Progress report: As of 22:40, 8 December 2022, GOCE copyeditors have processed 357 requests since 1 January, there were seventy-four requests outstanding and the backlog stands at 1,791 articles. We always need skilled copy-editors; please help out if you can.

Election news: Nomination of candidates for the GOCE's Election of Coordinators for the first half of 2023 is open and continues until 23:59 on 15 December. Voting begins at 00:01 on 16 December and closes at 23:59 on 31 December. All editors in good standing (not under ArbCom or community sanctions) are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed. Coordinators serve a six-month term that ends at 23:59 on June 30. If you've thought about helping out at the Guild, please nominate yourself or any editor you consider suitable—with their permission, of course!. It's your Guild and it doesn't coordinate itself.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers and best seasonal wishes from your GOCE coordinators, Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Tenryuu, and Zippybonzo.

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Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter error

The GOCE December 2022 newsletter, as sent on 9 December, contains an erroneous start date for our December Blitz. The Blitz will start on 11 December rather than on 17 December, as stated in the newsletter. I'm sorry for the mistake and for disrupting your talk page; thanks for your understanding. Sent by Baffle gab1978 via MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) 21:31, 9 December 2022 (UTC) reply

Guild of Copy Editors 2022 Annual Report

Guild of Copy Editors 2022 Annual Report

Our 2022 Annual Report is now ready for review.

Highlights:

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  • Summary of Drives, Blitzes, and the Requests page
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Guild of Copy Editors March 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors March 2023 Newsletter


Hello and welcome to the March 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since December and our Annual Report for 2022. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below. We extend a warm welcome to all of our new members, including those who have signed up for our current March Backlog Elimination Drive. We wish you all happy copy-editing.

Election results: In our December 2022 coordinator election, Reidgreg and Tenryuu stepped down as coordinators; we thank them for their service. Incumbents Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo were returned as coordinators until 1 July. For the second time, no lead coordinator was chosen. Nominations for our mid-year Election of Coordinators open on 1 June (UTC).

Drive: 21 editors signed up for our January Backlog Elimination Drive, 14 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 170 articles totaling 389,737 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Our February Copy Editing Blitz focused on October and November 2022 requests, and the March and April 2022 backlogs. Of the 14 editors who signed up, nine claimed at least one copy-edit; and between them, they copy-edited 39,150 words in 22 articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: Sign up now for our month-long March Backlog Elimination Drive. Barnstars awarded will be posted here after the drive closes.

Progress report: As of 12:08, 19 March 2023 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 73 requests since 1 January 2023, all but five of them from 2022, and the backlog stands at 1,872 articles.

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Guild of Copy Editors June 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors June 2023 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since March. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Election news: Fancy helping out at the Guild? Nominations for our half-yearly Election of Coordinators are open until 23:59 on 15 June (UTC)*. Starting immediately after, the voting phase will run until 23:59 on 30 June. All Wikipedians in good standing are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed; it's your Guild and it doesn't organize itself!

Blitz: Of the 17 editors who signed up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, nine editors completed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 24 articles totaling 53,393 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 51 editors signed up for the month-long May Backlog Elimination Drive, and 31 copy-edited at least one article. 180 articles were copy-edited. Barnstars awarded are posted here.

Blitz: Sign up here for our week-long June Copy Editing Blitz, which runs from 11 to 17 June. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 03:09 on 6 June 2023, GOCE copyeditors have processed 91 requests since 1 January and the backlog stands at 1,887 articles.

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Guild of Copy Editors September 2023 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the September 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since June. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

David Thomsen: Prolific Wikipedian and Guild member David Thomsen ( Dthomsen8) died in November 2022. He was a regular copy editor who took part in many of our Drives and Blitzes. An obituary was published in the mid-July issue of The Signpost. Tributes can be left on David's talk page.

Election news: In our mid-year Election of Coordinators, Dhtwiki was chosen as lead coordinator, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo continue as assistant coordinators, and Baffle gab1978 stepped down from the role. If you're interested in helping out at the GOCE, please consider nominating yourself for our next election in December; it's your WikiProject and it doesn't organize itself!

June Blitz: Of the 17 editors who signed up for our June Copy Editing Blitz, 12 copy-edited at least one article. 70,035 words comprising 26 articles were copy-edited. Barnstars awarded are here.

July Drive: 34 of the 51 editors who took part in our July Backlog Elimination Drive copy-edited at least one article. They edited 276 articles and 683,633 words between them. Barnstars awarded are here.

August Blitz: In our August Copy Editing Blitz, 13 of the 16 editors who signed up worked on at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 79,608 words comprising 57 articles. Barnstars awarded are available here.

September Drive: Sign up here for our month-long September Backlog Elimination Drive, which is now underway. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 14:29, 9 September 2023 (UTC), GOCE copy editors have processed 245 requests since 1 January. The backlog of tagged articles stands at 2,066.

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Guild of Copy Editors December 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2023 Newsletter

Hello, and welcome to the December 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since September. Don't forget that you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Election news: The Guild needs coordinators! If you'd like to help out, you may nominate yourself or any suitable editor—with their permission—for the Election of Coordinators for the first half of 2024. Nominations will close at 23:59 on 15 December (UTC). Voting begins immediately after the close of nominations and closes at 23:59 on 31 December. All editors in good standing (not under current sanctions) are eligible, and self-nominations are welcome. Coordinators normally serve a six-month term that ends at 23:59 on 30 June.

Drive: Of the 69 editors who signed up for the September Backlog Elimination Drive, 40 copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 661,214 words in 290 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Blitz: Of the 22 editors who signed up for the October Copy Editing Blitz, 13 copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 109,327 words in 52 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Drive: During the November Backlog Elimination Drive, 38 of the 58 editors who signed up copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 458,620 words in 234 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Blitz: Our December Copy Editing Blitz will run from 10 to 16 December. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 20:33, 10 December 2023 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 344 requests since 1 January, and the backlog stands at 2,191 articles.

Other news: Our Annual Report for 2023 is planned for release in the new year.

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Guild of Copy Editors 2023 Annual Report

Guild of Copy Editors 2023 Annual Report

Our 2023 Annual Report is now ready for review.

Highlights:

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Guild of Copy Editors April 2024 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors April 2024 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the April 2024 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since December. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below. We extend a warm welcome to all of our new members. We wish you all happy copy-editing.

Election results: In our December 2023 coordinator election, Zippybonzo stepped down as coordinator; we thank them for their service. Incumbents Dhtwiki and Miniapolis were reelected coordinators, and Wracking was newly elected coordinator, to serve through 30 June. Nominations for our mid-year Election of Coordinators will open on 1 June (UTC).

Drive: 46 editors signed up for our January Backlog Elimination Drive, 32 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 289 articles totaling 626,729 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: 23 editors signed up for our February Copy Editing Blitz. 18 claimed at least one copy-edit and between them, they copy-edited 100,293 words in 32 articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 53 editors signed up for our March Backlog Elimination Drive, 34 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 300 articles totaling 587,828 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Sign up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, which runs from 14 to 20 April. Barnstars will be awarded here.

Progress report: As of 23:17, 11 April 2024 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 109 requests since 1 January 2024, and the backlog stands at 2,480 articles.

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Greetings! :) Please start a new section :) Have a nice day :)

Copy edit of Anesthesiologist

I've reviewed your copy edits on Anesthesiologist of 21 July 2017. You got rid of some redundant language and did some good cleanup of the lists. However, I'm afraid you added some minor style mistakes to the article. I shouldn't say that it's wrong, but it lacks consistency with other Wikipedia articles. Every publishing house has its own house style, and you may be used to a different style than is practiced here.

I would recommend that at some point you take a look at Wikipedia's Manual of Style and the GOCE copy editing instructions. However, there's no reason not to keep working on the article.

Some specific notes on your copyedit:

  • Excessive capitalization – There should not be capitalization for emphasis. In particular with professional titles not attached to a person's name (see MOS:JOBTITLE). There are a lot of other generic terms (eg: Intensive Care Units, Referral Hospitals, Transplants, Multiple Choice, etc.) which should not have been capitalized. Sentence case should be used in the infobox, so instead of "Medicine, Science" it should be "Medicine, science".
  • Acronyms – should be given in expanded form on first use in the lead and body (see MOS:ACRO for use and acceptable formats).
  • Excessive bold – Wikipedia does not use bold for emphasis (see MOS:BOLD). The only bold text in an article should be when stating the subject of the article for the first time in the lead. Bold is sometimes used for list items in a glossary article, but that's a specialized case. Another possible exception are row and column headings in a table. Other than those instances, bold text should be avoided.
  • Italic text is used for emphasis, foreign words not common in non-specialized English, titles of major works of art, and when referring to words themselves – but should not be overused (see MOS:ITALIC). Where you have the term anesthesiologist refers that's good, because you're referring to the word itself (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Words as words). But later on, Anaesthetists are physicians is no longer necessary to be italic. The italics in the Germany section are good ( MOS:FOREIGNITALIC).
  • Section headers should use sentence case and be kept short. It is generally not necessary to repeat the subject of the article in the section header. (This can be assumed.)
    • The bulk of the article is in the section Training in different countries. I think to better reflect the content of that section, it might be changed to something like Practices and training by country, or perhaps Regulation and qualifications by country. The "by country" part keeps it shorter than "in different countries"
  • Watch for stray spaces at punctuation, references, and inline templates.
  • Generally speaking, Wikipedia prefers prose to lists. It would be good if a lot of the lists could be converted to prose (i.e. written-out in paragraphs).
    • Watch for trivia: Sometimes editors will put trivial information in lists. Consider whether the information is important or relevant to the article. The article is about a profession; detailed instructions on how to qualify for the profession in a specific country may be excessive. (Consider how long the article would be if there were such detailed instructions for 150+ countries.)

Sorry, this is mostly nit-picky style stuff. I hope it helps you move in the right direction. I'll try to be available to look at your prose when you've done a little more work on the article. –  Reidgreg ( talk) 21:32, 22 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Hi, I am delighted to see that you had spared a lot of time to review my work. I am really grateful to you sir, and look forward to further guidance as I progress. Thank you for providing relevant links and making out the mistakes. :) I will keep in mind all the notes and others as I find them while copy-editing. Thank you again so much:) I will also see your copy-edits and try to learn an accepted style and how to proceed with copy-editing. :) Red Pen ( talk) 21:43, 22 July 2017 (UTC) reply


@ Vr parashar: Before getting back into it, I'd like to talk about some general philosophy for formatting. When a person learns about something new, they naturally want to try out these new tools of knowledge and experiment. The markup tools in the Wikimedia software let you do a lot of neat things, and templates take it even further. However, too much markup on a page can make it difficult to read. Making too many things stand out, drawing the reader's attention, can be distracting and have the effect that nothing stands out. Too much linking actually makes it less likely for a reader to follow any links (see WP:OVERLINKING). So excessive bold, capitals, italics and linking can make an article less readable and useful, which is contrary to the goal of making an encyclopedia for everyone. Use bold and italics, but use them sparingly. Capitalize where appropriate, which lets acronyms and proper names stand out. Link appropriate items relevant to the subject, which the reader is likely to follow.

Okay, lecture mode off. Let's focus on the first sentence: An Anesthesiologist ( American English) or Anaesthetist ( British English) is a Physician trained in Anesthesia and Perioperative medicine.

  • Bold text (for a full treatment, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Boldface)
    • The subject of the article Anesthesiologist should be in bold text on first occurrence in the lead. ( MOS:BOLDTITLE)
    • Anaesthetist is a major alternative name for the article's subject, as well as a redirect to the article, and should also be in bold text on first occurrence in the lead. ( MOS:BOLDSYN)
  • Some capitalization issues (for a full treatment, see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters).
    • Sorry if I was using terms you didn't know. In general:
      • Letter case is when you capitalize every letter, essentially using ALL CAPS. This is one of the valid styles for acronyms. Otherwise, it is to be avoided.
      • Word case (or title case) is when you capitalize the first letter of every word (except for come less-important words, like the and of ). This is often used on Wikipedia for titles of works of art and for proper names.
      • Sentence case is when you capitalize the first letter of a sentence (or sentence fragment). This is used on Wikipedia for article titles, section headers, and captions.
      • With sentence case, any proper names or acronyms in that sentence can also have capital letters, as appropriate.
    • So, back to that first sentence, the only proper names are American English and British English. (You can be doubly sure of that because these take their names from other proper names.) All the other nouns in the first sentence are generic and should be lower-case.
  • Italics (general information in the main MOS, full treatment at Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting#Italics)
    • Italic can be used for:
      • foreign words and phrases not common in everyday non-specialized English Checked
      • titles of works of art, which in this article might be the title of a medical journal (periodical)
      • words-as-words
      • emphasis (used sparingly)
    • It is not necessary to put proper names in italics. The guideline about foreign words being in italics does not apply to proper names. The only reason left for italics would be for emphasis, though I generally feel that the title case capitalization which proper names receive should allow them to stand out sufficiently.

A little further on, with several ( CRNAs) or anesthesiology assistants

  • Acronyms
    • Acronyms should be expanded on first occurrence in the lead and body. The article shouldn't make the reader guess what the acronym means, or require them to follow a link. Mousing-over the link might be sufficient for a common acronym, but I don't think a general readership will know this one.
      • In this instance, you could write: with several certified registered nurse anesthetists (CRNAs) or anesthesiology assistants". I was doubtful of the capitalization and followed the link, which is a redirect, and which led to show it in lower-case (generic). (It is not necessary to capitalize for the sake of explaining an acronym.)
      • A little further on is MD which I think most people would know from context as medical doctor / Doctorate of Medicine, but DO should be expanded and for consistency of formatting probably best to expand them both. If that becomes too "clunky" the sentence may have to be rephrased.

Down in the body of the article, there's a mix of hyphens and dashes

  • Dashes (see MOS:DASH)
    • This is pretty nit-picky but it's important for consistency, clarity and conciseness (my copy editing trinity). To show you what they look like, here is the hyphen - en dash – and em dash —. There should be a way to enter them from your keyboard or the edit window, or you can use the markup – and —. (They get their names because they were originally the width of the letters n and m.)
    • In short, hyphens are used to bring things together (conjunction) and dashes are used to separate them (disjunction).
    • Hyphens are usually used for compound modifiers such as ANZCA-approved training or three-year specialization, which increases readability.
    • Dashes are generally used to mark divisions in a sentence. Minor divisions between clauses use a comma; independent clauses can have a semicolon – stronger breaks may be marked with a dash. However, there shouldn't be more than two dashes in a sentence, and copy editors should be careful about clarity and consider breaking a complex sentence into two simpler sentences or otherwise rephrasing it.
    • You can use spaced en dashes or unspaced em dashes, but should use one style consistently through an article.
    • en dashes are also used for numeric ranges, date ranges, separating list items, and certain compounds (see: MOS:DASH).

I see you've changed the lists into prose and wanted to look at that, but my attention is drifting. Will try to get a look at your prose after I'm rested. –  Reidgreg ( talk) 10:23, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Again thanks for extensive reviewing and showing interest in guiding a new wikipedian :) yes I basically converted it to prose and I think in the next step will go through MOS first and then do some refined edits to make it more clear. anyways Thank you for your valuable time and yes please do review the article as I again edit it hehe :D :) Thanks for helping sir. Good day. :) Red Pen ( talk) 13:39, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply


Looking at prose:

  • In this phrase – Anesthesiologists often provide more intensive care techniques – can you spot the ambiguity?
    • It's the last four words, "more intensive care techniques". This is why compound modifiers are usually hyphenated to make their relationship and meaning more clear. This could be either:
      1. more intensive-care techniques – which means additional intensive care techniques, or
      2. more-intensive care techniques – which means care techniques which are more intense or more concentrated/vigorous
    • From the previous versions and context, I believe the first meaning was intended. But rather than "more intensive-care techniques", I feel that "additional intensive-care techniques" might be clearer.
    • Look for other compound modifiers and see if there are similar issues.
  • In [other areas of the] United States, anesthesiologists work in what is deemed – with this phrasing, you removed the part in square [brackets], which changes the meaning. Mind you, it wasn't very clear to begin with, since earlier text never specified any part of the U.S. to distinguish these "other areas". I feel this could maybe be "In some areas of the United States" and so on.
  • At the beginning of Patient-informed consent, you moved some clauses around which changed the meaning.
    • Patient-Informed Consent is a medical principle stating that patients should be fully informed about the manner in which anesthesia will be administered to them. That makes it sound like patient-informed consent is only about anesthesia and not a broader standard in medicine.
    • On the other hand, looking at the earlier version (found under the "view history" tab of the article), I think you're right that it needs a better introduction of the principle before going into how specific national associations treat it.
      • I would recommend going back to the original version for the first sentence (you can find it under the "view history" tab on the article). The one that defines it as a "fundamental ethical and legal principle". Then a second sentence could talk about how it applies to anesthesia, with the patient being fully informed, etc.
      • You might also link to informed consent or doctor–patient relationship, if the reader wants more information.
  • Under "Selection and training" (which sounds a little awkward) it says "Selection and training process is similar in various countries." If the process is similar, then it should be possible to generalize it. You've read the article a few times by now, so you should be able to judge. Consider writing a generalization which will allow the article to avoid repeating information later on.
  • The fourth paragraph of the lead is all about the U.S. and I don't believe it belongs there. The lead is meant to summarize the entire article. I feel this paragraph should be moved down to the U.S. section and incorporated there.
    • In order to better summarize the article, you might write a new lead paragraph to replace the above. Again, you could try writing a paragraph to generalize the training or qualifications usually required by countries, or something else you feel has large coverage in the body but not in the lead.
  • In the section on Australia and New Zealand, I think the two-year PMET is before the five-year ANZCA approved-training, so it's a total of 7 years. The PMET seems to be general medical education and more of a qualifier to anesthesiology training, so I understand if you didn't want to include it.
  • In the lead, where you have a the before United States, that's a good sign you should also have a the before UK.
  • Spacing – there are a couple places where the article has a space before a comma, and I spotted one place that needs a space before opening parenthesis.

You're pretty brave to take on copy editing so soon! I was hanging around doing general cleanup for about six months before I started copy editing. When I came across statistics that the pages I was contributing to the most were getting 900k page views per month, I decided to work on improving my writing and joined the GOCE to learn and practice. I received a lot of help then, and I try to pay it forward a bit with other new editors. – Reidgreg ( talk) 16:24, 23 July 2017 (UTC) reply

Hi, This is a very nice guide for a new editor and the fact that it is related specifically to my editing only and the review is also particularly about my editing only, it is really helpful. :) yes, for me copy-editing was always interesting and the way you unfold the points that we keep in mind while copy-editing makes it all the more interesting! :)
So, well, I think I got too much into reducing the word count haha.. :D ok I will see the earlier versions and see what the writer actually wanted to convey. All that you have pointed is good and helpful but one thing I will like to point sir, In Australia and New Zealand section, PMET does not come before ANZCA training, it a part of it - two years of PMET and then three years of advanced training make up the total five years of ANZCA training (As it was written in it before I started editing). I am sad you could not make it out from that text. I will try to first understand what writer originally wanted to convey and will try to make it clearer while preserving the meaning of sentences(rephrasing). Thanks for your extensive guide and valuable time again sir, I am really happy to get personalised suggestions on my editing which will surely help me throughout my copy-editing in future also. Thank you. :) Red Pen ( talk) 00:30, 24 July 2017 (UTC) reply
I will further edit the article after reading MoS and GOCE guidelines. so it will take a little bit of time sir, like 3-4 days. :) Red Pen ( talk) 11:17, 24 July 2017 (UTC) reply
I don't want you to rush, but don't feel that you have to learn everything. Very few editors know the whole MOS, though it's good to be familiar with the main pages. You'll learn a lot through practise, and (knock on wood) I should be able to check your work this time. Sorry about the PMET–ANZCA thing, I was too lazy to check the other articles and/or sources to confirm. – Reidgreg ( talk) 16:33, 26 July 2017 (UTC) reply

A cookie for you!

Sorry you didn't complete the copyedit for the drive, but please do continue to work on it and come back for the next blitz or drive. – Reidgreg ( talk) 12:08, 1 August 2017 (UTC) reply

Sorry for so much delay in responding sir. And Thank you for this delicious cookie!! :D :D ...actually sir I was reading it throughout and have almost covered main points so I will soon edit that page again. Thanks for your valuable support again. Red Pen ( talk) 11:15, 7 August 2017 (UTC) reply

GOCE June newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors June 2020 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since March 2020. You can unsubscribe from our mailings at any time; see below. All times and dates stated are in UTC.

Current events

Election time: Nomination of candidates in our mid-year Election of Coordinators opened on 1 June, and voting will take place from 00:01 on 16 June. GOCE coordinators normally serve a six-month term and are elected on an approval basis. Self-nominations are welcome. If you've thought about helping out at the Guild, or you know of another editor who would make a good coordinator, please consider standing for election or nominating them here.

June Blitz: This blitz begins at 00:01 on 14 June and ends at 23:59 on 20 June, with themes of articles tagged for copyedit in May 2020 and requests.

Drive and blitz reports

March Drive: Self-isolation from coronavirus may have played a hand in making this one of our most successful backlog elimination drives. The copy-editing backlog was reduced from 477 to a record low of 118 articles, a 75% reduction. The last four months of 2019 were cleared, reducing the backlog to three months. Fifty requests were also completed, and the total word count of copy-edited articles was 759,945. Of the 29 editors who signed up, 22 completed at least one copy edit. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

April Blitz: This blitz ran from 12 to 18 April with a theme of Indian military history. Of the 18 people who signed up, 14 copyedited at least one article. Participants claimed a total of 60 copyedits. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

May Drive: This event marked the 10th anniversary of the GOCE's copy-editing drives, and set a goal of diminishing the backlog to just one month of articles, as close to zero articles as possible. We achieved the goal of eliminating all articles that had been tagged prior to the start of the drive, for the first time in our history! Of the 51 editors who signed up, 43 copyedited at least one article. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

Other news

Progress report: as of 2 June, GOCE participants had processed 328 requests since 1 January, which puts us on pace to exceed any previous year's number of requests. As of the end of the May drive, the backlog stood at just 156 articles, all tagged in May 2020.

Outreach: To mark the 10th anniversary of our first Backlog Elimination Drive, The Signpost contributor and GOCE participant Puddleglum2.0 interviewed project coordinators and copy-editors for the journal's April WikiProject Report. The Drive and the current Election of Coordinators have also been covered in The Signpost's May News and Notes page.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Jonesey95, Baffle gab1978, Reidgreg, Tdslk and Twofingered Typist.

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July 2020 GOCE drive bling

The Minor Barnstar
This barnstar is awarded to Vr parashar for copy edits totaling between 1 and 3,999 words (including bonus and rollover words) during the GOCE July 2020 Backlog Elimination Drive. Congratulations, and thank you for your contributions! Tdslk ( talk) 18:16, 9 August 2020 (UTC) reply

Guild of Copy Editors September 2020 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors September 2020 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the September GOCE newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since June 2020.

                 Current and upcoming events

September Drive: Our current backlog-elimination drive is open until 23:59 on 30 September (UTC) and is open to all copy editors. Sign up today!

Election reminder: our end-of-year Election of Coordinators opens for nominations on 1 December. Coordinators normally serve a six-month term and are elected on an approval basis. Self-nominations are welcome. If you've thought of helping out at the Guild, or know of another editor who would make a good coordinator, please consider standing for election or nominating them here.

Drive and Blitz reports

June Blitz: An uncorrected typo (even copy editors make copy editing mistakes!) led to an eight-day "leap blitz" from 14 to 21 June, focusing on requests and articles tagged in May. 19 participating editors claimed 54 copy edits. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

July Drive: Over 750,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event, keeping pace with the previous three self-isolated drives. Of the 38 people who signed up, 30 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

August Blitz: From 16 to 22 August, we copy edited articles tagged in June and July 2020 and requests. 12 participating editors completed 37 copy edits on the blitz. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

Other news

June election: Jonesey95 was chosen to continue as lead coordinator, assisted by Baffle gab1978, Tdslk, Twofingered Typist, and first-time coordinator Puddleglum2.0. Reidgreg took a break after serving for a couple years. Thanks to everyone who participated!

Progress report: As of 01:33, 18 September 2020 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors had processed 532 requests since 1 January and there were 38 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog of articles tagged for copy-editing stood at 433 (see monthly progress graph above).

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Jonesey95, Baffle gab1978, Puddleglum2.0, Tdslk and Twofingered Typist.

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December 2020 Guild of Copy Editors Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2020 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the December GOCE newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since September 2020.

                 Current and upcoming events

Election time: our end-of-year Election of Coordinators opened for nominations on 1 December and will close on 15 December at 23:59 (UTC). Voting opens at 00:01 the following day and will continue until 31 December at 23:59, just before Auld Lang Syne. Coordinators normally serve a six-month term and are elected on an approval basis. Self-nominations are welcome. If you've thought of helping out at the Guild, or know of another editor who would make a good coordinator, please consider standing for election or nominating them here.

December Blitz: This will run from 13 to 19 December, and will target all Requests. Sign up now.

Drive and Blitz reports

September Drive: 67 fewer articles had copy-edit templates by this month's close. Of the 27 editors who signed up, 15 copy-edited at least one article, and 124 articles were claimed for the drive.

October Blitz: this ran from 18 to 24 October, and focused on articles tagged for copy-edit in July and August 2020, and all Requests. Of the 13 who signed up, 11 editors copy-edited at least one article. 21 articles were claimed for the blitz.

November Drive: Of the 18 editors who signed up, 15 copy-edited at least one article, and together claimed 134 articles. At the close of the drive, 67 fewer articles were in the backlog and we had dealt with 39 requests.

Other news

Progress report: As of 09:05, 3 December 2020 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors had processed 663 requests (18 from 2019) since 1 January and there were 52 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog of articles tagged for copy-editing stood at 494 (see monthly progress graph above).

Annual Report for 2020: this roundup of the year's activity at the Guild is planned for publication in late January or early February.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Seasonal tidings and cheers from your GOCE coordinators: Jonesey95, Baffle gab1978, Puddleglum2.0, Tdslk and Twofingered Typist.

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GOCE June 2021 newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors June 2021 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June newsletter, our first newsletter of 2021, which is a brief update of Guild activities since December 2020. To unsubscribe, follow the link at the bottom of this box.

Current events

Election time: Voting in our mid-year Election of Coordinators opened on 16 June and will conclude at the end of the month. GOCE coordinators normally serve a six-month term and are elected on an approval basis. Have your say and show support here.

June Blitz: Our June copy-editing blitz is underway and will conclude on 26 June.

Drive and blitz reports

January Drive: 28 editors completed 324 copy edits totalling 714,902 words. At the end of the drive, the backlog had reached a record low of 52 articles. ( full results)

February Blitz: 15 editors completed 48 copy edits totalling 142,788 words. ( full results)

March Drive: 29 editors completed 215 copy edits totalling 407,736 words. ( full results)

April Blitz: 12 editors completed 23 copy edits totalling 56,574 words. ( full results)

May Drive: 29 editors completed 356 copy edits totalling 479,013 words. ( full results)

Other news

Progress report: as of 26 June, GOCE participants had completed 343 Requests since 1 January. The backlog has fluctuated but remained in control, with a low of 52 tagged articles at the end of January and a high of 620 articles in mid-June.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Jonesey95, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Tenryuu and Twofingered Typist, and from member Reidgreg.

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September 2021 Guild of Copy Editors newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors September 2021 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the September GOCE newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since June 2021.

                 Current and upcoming events

September Drive: Our current backlog-elimination drive is open until 23:59 on 30 September (UTC) and is open to all copy editors. Sign up today!

Drive and Blitz reports

June Blitz: From 20 to 26 June, 6 participating editors claimed 16 copy edits, focusing on requests and articles tagged in March and April. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

July Drive: Almost 575,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 24 people who signed up, 18 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

August Blitz: From 15 to 21 August, we copy edited articles tagged in April and May 2021 and requests. 9 participating editors completed 17 copy edits on the blitz. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

Other news

June election: Jonesey95 was chosen to continue as lead coordinator, assisted by Dhtwiki, Tenryuu, and Miniapolis.

New maintenance template added to our project scope: After a short discussion in June, we added {{ cleanup tense}} to the list of maintenance templates that adds articles to the Guild's copy editing backlog categories. This change added 198 articles, spread over 97 months of backlog, to our queue. We processed all of those articles except for those from the three or four most recent months during the July backlog elimination drive (Here's a link to a "tense" discussion during the drive).

Progress report: As of 18:26, 24 September 2021 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 468 requests since 1 January and there were 60 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog of articles tagged for copy-editing stood at 433 (see monthly progress graph above).

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Jonesey95, Dhtwiki, Tenryuu, and Miniapolis.

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December 2021 GOCE Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2021 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the December GOCE newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since September 2021.

                 Current and upcoming events

Election time: Our end-of-year election of coordinators opened for nominations on 1 December and will close on 15 December at 23:59 (UTC). Voting opens at 00:01 the following day and will continue until 31 December at 23:59, just before " Auld Lang Syne". Coordinators normally serve a six-month term and are elected on an approval basis. Self-nominations are welcome. If you've thought of helping out at the Guild, or know of another editor who would make a good coordinator, please consider standing for election or nominating them here.

December Blitz: We have scheduled a week-long copy-editing blitz for 12 to 18 December. Sign up now!

Drive and Blitz reports

September Drive: Almost 400,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 27 people who signed up, 21 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

October Blitz: From 17 to 23 October, we copy edited articles tagged in May and June 2021 and requests. 8 participating editors completed 26 copy edits on the blitz. Final results, including barnstars awarded, are available here.

November Drive: Over 350,000 words of articles were copy edited for this event. Of the 21 people who signed up, 14 copyedited at least one article. Final results and awards are listed here.

Other news

It is with great sadness that we report the death on 19 November of Twofingered Typist, who was active with the Guild almost daily for the past several years. His contributions long exceeded the thresholds for the Guild's highest awards, and he had a hand in innumerable good and featured article promotions as a willing collaborator. Twofingered Typist also served as a Guild coordinator from July 2019 to June 2021. He is sorely missed by the Wikipedia community.

Progress report: As of 30 November, GOCE copyeditors have completed 619 requests in 2021 and there were 51 requests awaiting completion on the Requests page. The backlog stood at 946 articles tagged for copy-editing (see monthly progress graph above).

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Jonesey95, Dhtwiki, Tenryuu, and Miniapolis.

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GOCE April 2022 newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors April 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the April newsletter, a brief update of Guild activities since December 2021.

Election results: Jonesey95 retired as lead coordinator. Reidgreg was approved to fill this role after an 18-month absence from the coordinator team, and Baffle gab1978 was chosen as an assistant coordinator following a one-year break. Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Tenryuu continued on as long-standing assistant coordinators.

January Drive: Of the 22 editors who signed up, 16 editors claimed 146 copy edits including 45 requests. ( details)

February Blitz: This one-week effort focused on requests and a theme of Africa and African diaspora history. Of the 12 editors who signed up, 6 editors recorded 21 copy edits, including 4 requests. ( details)

March Drive: Of the 28 editors who signed up, 18 claimed 116 copy edits including 25 requests. ( details)

April Blitz: This one-week copy editing event has been scheduled for 17–23 April, sign up now!

Progress report: As of 11 April, copy editors have removed approximately 500 articles from the backlog and completed 127 copy-editing requests during 2022. The backlog has been hovering at about 1,100 tagged articles for the past six months.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Reidgreg, Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Tenryuu

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June GOCE newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors June 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June 2022 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since April 2022. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Blitz: of the 16 editors who signed up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, 12 completed at least one copy-edit, and between them removed 21 articles from the copy-editing backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 27 editors signed up for our May Backlog Elimination Drive; of these, 20 copy-edited at least one article. 144 articles were copy-edited, and 88 articles from our target months August and September 2021 were removed from the backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: our June Copy Editing Blitz, starting at 00:01, 19 June and closing at 00:59, 25 June (UTC), will focus on articles tagged for copy edit in September and October 2021, and requests from March, April and May 2022. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 07:12, 14 June 2022 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have completed 209 requests since 1 January and the backlog stands at 1,404 articles.

Election news: Nominations for our half-yearly Election of Coordinators continues until 23:50 on 15 June (UTC), after which, voting will commence until 23:59, 30 June (UTC). All Wikipedians in good standing (active and not blocked, banned, or under ArbCom or community sanctions) are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Reidgreg, Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Tenryuu

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Guild of Copy Editors' October 2022 newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors October 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to our latest newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since June. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Drive: Of the 22 editors who signed up for our July Backlog Elimination Drive, 18 copy-edited, between them, 116 articles. Barnstars awarded are noted here.

Blitz: Participants in our August Copy Editing Blitz copy-edited 51,074 words in 17 articles. Of the 15 editors who signed up, 11 claimed at least one copy-edit. Barnstars awarded are noted here.

Drive: Forty-one editors took part in our September Backlog Elimination Drive; between them they copy-edited 199 articles. Barnstars awards are noted here.

Blitz: Our October Copy Editing Blitz begins on 16 October at 00:01 (UTC) and will end on 22 October at 23:59 (UTC). Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 19:57, 12 October 2022 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 303 requests for copy edit – including withdrawn and declined ones – since 1 January. At the time of writing, there are 77 requests awaiting attention and the backlog of tagged articles stands at 1,759. We always need more active, skilled copyeditors – particularly for requests – so please get involved if you can.

Election news: In our mid-year election, serving coordinators Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Reidgreg and Tenryuu were returned for another term, and were joined by new coordinator Zippybonzo. No lead coordinator was elected for this half-year. Jonesey95, a long-serving coordinator and lead, was elected as coordinator emeritus; we thank them for their service. Thank you to everyone who took part. Our next election of coordinators takes place throughout December. If you'd like to help out at the GOCE, please consider nominating yourself or other suitable editors (with their permission, of course!). It's your Guild, after all!

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Reidgreg, Tenryuu and Zippybonzo.

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Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to our latest newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since October. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Blitz: Our October Copy Editing Blitz focused on July and August 2022 request months; and articles tagged for c/e in December 2021 and January 2022. Seventeen of those who signed up claimed at least one copy-edit, and between them copy-edited forty-six articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: In the November Backlog Elimination Drive, thirty editors signed up, twenty-two of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Both target months—December 2021 and January 2022—were cleared, and February was added to the target months. Sixteen requests were copy-edited and 239 articles were removed from the backlog. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Our seven-day-long December 2022 Copy Editing Blitz begins on 17 December at 00:01 (UTC)*. It will focus on articles tagged for copy-edit in February 2022, and pending requests from September and October. Barnstars awarded will be available here.

Progress report: As of 22:40, 8 December 2022, GOCE copyeditors have processed 357 requests since 1 January, there were seventy-four requests outstanding and the backlog stands at 1,791 articles. We always need skilled copy-editors; please help out if you can.

Election news: Nomination of candidates for the GOCE's Election of Coordinators for the first half of 2023 is open and continues until 23:59 on 15 December. Voting begins at 00:01 on 16 December and closes at 23:59 on 31 December. All editors in good standing (not under ArbCom or community sanctions) are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed. Coordinators serve a six-month term that ends at 23:59 on June 30. If you've thought about helping out at the Guild, please nominate yourself or any editor you consider suitable—with their permission, of course!. It's your Guild and it doesn't coordinate itself.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers and best seasonal wishes from your GOCE coordinators, Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis, Tenryuu, and Zippybonzo.

*All times and dates on this newsletter are UTC.
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Guild of Copy Editors December 2022 Newsletter error

The GOCE December 2022 newsletter, as sent on 9 December, contains an erroneous start date for our December Blitz. The Blitz will start on 11 December rather than on 17 December, as stated in the newsletter. I'm sorry for the mistake and for disrupting your talk page; thanks for your understanding. Sent by Baffle gab1978 via MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) 21:31, 9 December 2022 (UTC) reply

Guild of Copy Editors 2022 Annual Report

Guild of Copy Editors 2022 Annual Report

Our 2022 Annual Report is now ready for review.

Highlights:

  • Overview of Backlog-reduction progress
  • Summary of Drives, Blitzes, and the Requests page
  • Membership news and results of elections
  • Closing words
– Your Guild coordinators: Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo
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Guild of Copy Editors March 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors March 2023 Newsletter


Hello and welcome to the March 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since December and our Annual Report for 2022. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below. We extend a warm welcome to all of our new members, including those who have signed up for our current March Backlog Elimination Drive. We wish you all happy copy-editing.

Election results: In our December 2022 coordinator election, Reidgreg and Tenryuu stepped down as coordinators; we thank them for their service. Incumbents Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo were returned as coordinators until 1 July. For the second time, no lead coordinator was chosen. Nominations for our mid-year Election of Coordinators open on 1 June (UTC).

Drive: 21 editors signed up for our January Backlog Elimination Drive, 14 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 170 articles totaling 389,737 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Our February Copy Editing Blitz focused on October and November 2022 requests, and the March and April 2022 backlogs. Of the 14 editors who signed up, nine claimed at least one copy-edit; and between them, they copy-edited 39,150 words in 22 articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: Sign up now for our month-long March Backlog Elimination Drive. Barnstars awarded will be posted here after the drive closes.

Progress report: As of 12:08, 19 March 2023 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 73 requests since 1 January 2023, all but five of them from 2022, and the backlog stands at 1,872 articles.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo.

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Guild of Copy Editors June 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors June 2023 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the June 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since March. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Election news: Fancy helping out at the Guild? Nominations for our half-yearly Election of Coordinators are open until 23:59 on 15 June (UTC)*. Starting immediately after, the voting phase will run until 23:59 on 30 June. All Wikipedians in good standing are eligible and self-nominations are welcomed; it's your Guild and it doesn't organize itself!

Blitz: Of the 17 editors who signed up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, nine editors completed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 24 articles totaling 53,393 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 51 editors signed up for the month-long May Backlog Elimination Drive, and 31 copy-edited at least one article. 180 articles were copy-edited. Barnstars awarded are posted here.

Blitz: Sign up here for our week-long June Copy Editing Blitz, which runs from 11 to 17 June. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 03:09 on 6 June 2023, GOCE copyeditors have processed 91 requests since 1 January and the backlog stands at 1,887 articles.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Baffle gab1978, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybongo.

*All times and dates in this newsletter are in UTC, and may significantly vary from your local time.

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Septermber GOCE newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors September 2023 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the September 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since June. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

David Thomsen: Prolific Wikipedian and Guild member David Thomsen ( Dthomsen8) died in November 2022. He was a regular copy editor who took part in many of our Drives and Blitzes. An obituary was published in the mid-July issue of The Signpost. Tributes can be left on David's talk page.

Election news: In our mid-year Election of Coordinators, Dhtwiki was chosen as lead coordinator, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo continue as assistant coordinators, and Baffle gab1978 stepped down from the role. If you're interested in helping out at the GOCE, please consider nominating yourself for our next election in December; it's your WikiProject and it doesn't organize itself!

June Blitz: Of the 17 editors who signed up for our June Copy Editing Blitz, 12 copy-edited at least one article. 70,035 words comprising 26 articles were copy-edited. Barnstars awarded are here.

July Drive: 34 of the 51 editors who took part in our July Backlog Elimination Drive copy-edited at least one article. They edited 276 articles and 683,633 words between them. Barnstars awarded are here.

August Blitz: In our August Copy Editing Blitz, 13 of the 16 editors who signed up worked on at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 79,608 words comprising 57 articles. Barnstars awarded are available here.

September Drive: Sign up here for our month-long September Backlog Elimination Drive, which is now underway. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 14:29, 9 September 2023 (UTC), GOCE copy editors have processed 245 requests since 1 January. The backlog of tagged articles stands at 2,066.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators, Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo.

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Guild of Copy Editors December 2023 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors December 2023 Newsletter

Hello, and welcome to the December 2023 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since September. Don't forget that you can unsubscribe at any time; see below.

Election news: The Guild needs coordinators! If you'd like to help out, you may nominate yourself or any suitable editor—with their permission—for the Election of Coordinators for the first half of 2024. Nominations will close at 23:59 on 15 December (UTC). Voting begins immediately after the close of nominations and closes at 23:59 on 31 December. All editors in good standing (not under current sanctions) are eligible, and self-nominations are welcome. Coordinators normally serve a six-month term that ends at 23:59 on 30 June.

Drive: Of the 69 editors who signed up for the September Backlog Elimination Drive, 40 copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 661,214 words in 290 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Blitz: Of the 22 editors who signed up for the October Copy Editing Blitz, 13 copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 109,327 words in 52 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Drive: During the November Backlog Elimination Drive, 38 of the 58 editors who signed up copy-edited at least one article. Between them, they copy-edited 458,620 words in 234 articles. Barnstars awarded are listed here.

Blitz: Our December Copy Editing Blitz will run from 10 to 16 December. Barnstars awarded will be posted here.

Progress report: As of 20:33, 10 December 2023 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 344 requests since 1 January, and the backlog stands at 2,191 articles.

Other news: Our Annual Report for 2023 is planned for release in the new year.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from your GOCE coordinators Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Zippybonzo.

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Guild of Copy Editors 2023 Annual Report

Guild of Copy Editors 2023 Annual Report

Our 2023 Annual Report is now ready for review.

Highlights:

  • Introduction
  • Membership news, obituary and election results
  • Summary of Drives, Blitzes and the Requests page
  • Closing words
– Your Guild coordinators: Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Wracking.
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Guild of Copy Editors April 2024 Newsletter

Guild of Copy Editors April 2024 Newsletter

Hello and welcome to the April 2024 newsletter, a quarterly digest of Guild activities since December. Don't forget you can unsubscribe at any time; see below. We extend a warm welcome to all of our new members. We wish you all happy copy-editing.

Election results: In our December 2023 coordinator election, Zippybonzo stepped down as coordinator; we thank them for their service. Incumbents Dhtwiki and Miniapolis were reelected coordinators, and Wracking was newly elected coordinator, to serve through 30 June. Nominations for our mid-year Election of Coordinators will open on 1 June (UTC).

Drive: 46 editors signed up for our January Backlog Elimination Drive, 32 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 289 articles totaling 626,729 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: 23 editors signed up for our February Copy Editing Blitz. 18 claimed at least one copy-edit and between them, they copy-edited 100,293 words in 32 articles. Barnstars awarded are here.

Drive: 53 editors signed up for our March Backlog Elimination Drive, 34 of whom claimed at least one copy-edit. Between them, they copy-edited 300 articles totaling 587,828 words. Barnstars awarded are here.

Blitz: Sign up for our April Copy Editing Blitz, which runs from 14 to 20 April. Barnstars will be awarded here.

Progress report: As of 23:17, 11 April 2024 (UTC), GOCE copyeditors have processed 109 requests since 1 January 2024, and the backlog stands at 2,480 articles.

Thank you all again for your participation; we wouldn't be able to achieve what we have without you! Cheers from Baffle gab1978 and your GOCE coordinators Dhtwiki, Miniapolis and Wracking.

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