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Article from "The Brigade, a history"

Ed- I can't summarize it easily enough to reference a specific unit other than the 3 brigades that received direct attention as examples. I'm assigned to the 43rd Sustainment Brigade and am prepping for deployment. Mikeofv ( talk) 20:07, 3 September 2008 (UTC)mikeofv reply

Are you trying to use it as a source on an article or trying to make an article about it? The book seems fairly streightforeward, it is history of how Brigades have been structured in the US Armed forces, how many there have been, and how they were used as units of deployment. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 21:29, 3 September 2008 (UTC) reply

Why did you mark this page with {{ Refimprove}} when every one of the citations already had its reference given? Urhixidur ( talk) 01:48, 5 September 2008 (UTC) reply

Because they aren't in the proper format. per WP:CITE, the references need to be parenthetical citations that identify the web site, author, access date, and so on, of the source. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 02:51, 5 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I think this can be easily fixed by changing {{ MPCit_JPL}}. I don't think we should make the inline parenthetical citation link to a References section, as this would grossly overburden the Meanings of asteroid names pages. In any case, the JPL SDB page is itself only a "redirect" of sorts, the true citation being the MPC (Minor Planet Circular)—which aren't available online. Urhixidur ( talk) 15:00, 6 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Tricky, this. We can change the dagger for the string "JPL SDB" or "NASA JPL SDB", but there is no good date to put in, since those pages are updated all the time. Most pertinent would be the "Last Updated" date given on the "Reference: DISCOVERY.DB" line, but we're going to need some automated way of extracting this. Remember that there are nearly 15,000 named asteroids: I'm not about to do this manually! Do you know someone who could write a Perl script to do this? (I think Perl can do it, but I'm not sure) Urhixidur ( talk) 15:07, 6 September 2008 (UTC) reply

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Can you urgently help Milhist please?

We've had a rather large bombshell dropped on us. The Wikipedia editorial team are aiming to release a version of Wikipedia on CD/DVD in time for the end of year holiday season. They've provided us with a list of 1333 Milhist articles they intend including.

The problem is that the quality of these articles varies considerably.

We've put together review page listing all the articles, in twenty-five article worklists. I'm hoping that 15-20 trusted editors can work through the list, weedying out problem articles and identifying suitable versions for release. The work is as far away from a tagging and assessing drive as you can imagine though, for convenience and ease of use, we've closely followed the traditional Milhist drive format.

This is, at the moment, an invitation-only review. The reason is that time is short and we can't afford too many mistakes. I'm only contacting experienced editors who performed very well indeed in the last two Milhist drives. I guess that working through a worklist of twenty-five articles will take between one and three hours to do. We're aiming to get the preliminary work done by next Sunday, so it's urgent too.

I do hope you can help but – if it's not too much trouble – if you are unable to participate at the moment, would you please let me know on my talk page? otherwise, please sign up here. Thank you for your time, -- ROGER DAVIES  talk 17:22, 20 September 2008 (UTC) reply

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173rd ABN

Hey there! My books mostly cover the WWII period, but I have some limited stuff on Vietnam airmobile operations as well. It depends how much detail you want; I could give you a couple of paragraphs on Corregidor in the WWII section and maybe some extra details on Vietnam. What level of detail were you thinking of? Skinny87 ( talk) 08:08, 9 December 2008 (UTC) reply

I've replied, luckily we can pillage dtuff from the Battle of Dak To. YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 05:06, 10 December 2008 (UTC) reply
Sorry to disappoint, but none of my sources really cover Vietnam in much depth. Skinny87 ( talk) 18:16, 10 December 2008 (UTC) reply

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198th IN BDE

Excellent work on those separate Army Brigades! I was wondering if you'd like to tackle the 198th Infantry Brigade. The 198th currently serves as Infantry OSUT BCT/AIT. Hal06 ( talk) 13:07, 15 December 2008 (UTC) reply

Hello. Yes, that Brigade would fall under my expertise, but I have a backup of GANs and Peer reviews going on right now that I'm trying to get out of the way before my busy holiday season, so I've been trying to get those taken care of first. I would like to do some work on it, though. There are probably a few good sources I get on that Brigade, too. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 22:18, 15 December 2008 (UTC) reply

Thank you!

Thank you for the barnstar! I always enjoy reviewing your GANs, as they are well-written, well-referenced and well-organized. Keep up the good work! Dana boomer ( talk) 14:12, 5 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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172nd IBCT

hey! if ou are still searching for sources citing that the 172nd was transformed to a infantry brigade combat team, here are two: TFM website, army.mil. greetings from germany -- Tafkas ( talk) 20:54, 25 January 2009 (UTC) reply

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Ghost Units of World War II

Hi Ed, I found the unit insignia and shoulder patches of all ever existing US military formations at www.vetshome.com, which based its work on the U.S. Army Patches, Flashes and Ovals book, which contains over 3600 unit insignias. (if you go to www.vetshome.com, scroll down and then after about 1.5 screens on the left side appears a listing of all the various patches down to Military Medical Company Patch level :-) -- noclador ( talk) 06:24, 29 April 2009 (UTC) reply

Thank you for offering to help with the article. While this article seems to be in great shape, I could use some help with improving articles on or related to the Buffalo Soldiers, specifically the 92nd and 93rd divisions. Dodgerblue777 ( talk) 04:52, 30 April 2009 (UTC) reply

OK then. Pending my work on the first two division articles, I'll see what I can do about these two. Any help would be appreciated. - Ed! (talk) 13:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
I've completed my GA review. I think this article still needs a fair bit of work. It contains a lot of factual errors. Let me know if you want to withdraw it for further work. (Also: I never got the 41st Infantry Division finished...) Hawkeye7 ( talk) 12:21, 6 May 2009 (UTC) reply

7th Infantry Division GA Review

Hi mate, I am currently undertaking the GA Review for 7th Infantry Division (United States). I have left some comments on the review page attached to the talk page. Could you please take a look and get back to me. I have included a section for your responses at the bottom on the review page, so please feel free to edit the review page. It's looking good so far. Cheers. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 05:51, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply

I've fixed two of the three problems you noted. As for the third, I'll look over the article later and try to fix what I find in terms of passive voice. - Ed! (talk) 15:59, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
I think I have fixed everything you pointed out to me. - Ed! (talk) 18:37, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
Hi, mate. Good work. Sorry it took a while for me to get back to. I got busy fixing one of my own articles up for GA. Its a bit 'jack' but I hope you will understand. I've passed the article for GA now. Nice work. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 12:12, 6 May 2009 (UTC) reply
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Article from "The Brigade, a history"

Ed- I can't summarize it easily enough to reference a specific unit other than the 3 brigades that received direct attention as examples. I'm assigned to the 43rd Sustainment Brigade and am prepping for deployment. Mikeofv ( talk) 20:07, 3 September 2008 (UTC)mikeofv reply

Are you trying to use it as a source on an article or trying to make an article about it? The book seems fairly streightforeward, it is history of how Brigades have been structured in the US Armed forces, how many there have been, and how they were used as units of deployment. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 21:29, 3 September 2008 (UTC) reply

Why did you mark this page with {{ Refimprove}} when every one of the citations already had its reference given? Urhixidur ( talk) 01:48, 5 September 2008 (UTC) reply

Because they aren't in the proper format. per WP:CITE, the references need to be parenthetical citations that identify the web site, author, access date, and so on, of the source. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 02:51, 5 September 2008 (UTC) reply
I think this can be easily fixed by changing {{ MPCit_JPL}}. I don't think we should make the inline parenthetical citation link to a References section, as this would grossly overburden the Meanings of asteroid names pages. In any case, the JPL SDB page is itself only a "redirect" of sorts, the true citation being the MPC (Minor Planet Circular)—which aren't available online. Urhixidur ( talk) 15:00, 6 September 2008 (UTC) reply
Tricky, this. We can change the dagger for the string "JPL SDB" or "NASA JPL SDB", but there is no good date to put in, since those pages are updated all the time. Most pertinent would be the "Last Updated" date given on the "Reference: DISCOVERY.DB" line, but we're going to need some automated way of extracting this. Remember that there are nearly 15,000 named asteroids: I'm not about to do this manually! Do you know someone who could write a Perl script to do this? (I think Perl can do it, but I'm not sure) Urhixidur ( talk) 15:07, 6 September 2008 (UTC) reply

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We've had a rather large bombshell dropped on us. The Wikipedia editorial team are aiming to release a version of Wikipedia on CD/DVD in time for the end of year holiday season. They've provided us with a list of 1333 Milhist articles they intend including.

The problem is that the quality of these articles varies considerably.

We've put together review page listing all the articles, in twenty-five article worklists. I'm hoping that 15-20 trusted editors can work through the list, weedying out problem articles and identifying suitable versions for release. The work is as far away from a tagging and assessing drive as you can imagine though, for convenience and ease of use, we've closely followed the traditional Milhist drive format.

This is, at the moment, an invitation-only review. The reason is that time is short and we can't afford too many mistakes. I'm only contacting experienced editors who performed very well indeed in the last two Milhist drives. I guess that working through a worklist of twenty-five articles will take between one and three hours to do. We're aiming to get the preliminary work done by next Sunday, so it's urgent too.

I do hope you can help but – if it's not too much trouble – if you are unable to participate at the moment, would you please let me know on my talk page? otherwise, please sign up here. Thank you for your time, -- ROGER DAVIES  talk 17:22, 20 September 2008 (UTC) reply

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173rd ABN

Hey there! My books mostly cover the WWII period, but I have some limited stuff on Vietnam airmobile operations as well. It depends how much detail you want; I could give you a couple of paragraphs on Corregidor in the WWII section and maybe some extra details on Vietnam. What level of detail were you thinking of? Skinny87 ( talk) 08:08, 9 December 2008 (UTC) reply

I've replied, luckily we can pillage dtuff from the Battle of Dak To. YellowMonkey ( bananabucket) 05:06, 10 December 2008 (UTC) reply
Sorry to disappoint, but none of my sources really cover Vietnam in much depth. Skinny87 ( talk) 18:16, 10 December 2008 (UTC) reply

Happy Holidays

198th IN BDE

Excellent work on those separate Army Brigades! I was wondering if you'd like to tackle the 198th Infantry Brigade. The 198th currently serves as Infantry OSUT BCT/AIT. Hal06 ( talk) 13:07, 15 December 2008 (UTC) reply

Hello. Yes, that Brigade would fall under my expertise, but I have a backup of GANs and Peer reviews going on right now that I'm trying to get out of the way before my busy holiday season, so I've been trying to get those taken care of first. I would like to do some work on it, though. There are probably a few good sources I get on that Brigade, too. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 22:18, 15 December 2008 (UTC) reply

Thank you!

Thank you for the barnstar! I always enjoy reviewing your GANs, as they are well-written, well-referenced and well-organized. Keep up the good work! Dana boomer ( talk) 14:12, 5 January 2009 (UTC) reply

The Military history WikiProject Newsletter : Issue XXXIV (December 2008)

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172nd IBCT

hey! if ou are still searching for sources citing that the 172nd was transformed to a infantry brigade combat team, here are two: TFM website, army.mil. greetings from germany -- Tafkas ( talk) 20:54, 25 January 2009 (UTC) reply

Barnstar

The Tireless Contributor Barnstar
You work to a supurb level. This is yours! K50 Dude ROCKS! 17:57, 31 January 2009 (UTC) reply
Thank you very much! It's good to see one's work appreciated. - Ed! (talk) (Hall of Fame) 17:51, 1 February 2009 (UTC) reply

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Ghost Units of World War II

Hi Ed, I found the unit insignia and shoulder patches of all ever existing US military formations at www.vetshome.com, which based its work on the U.S. Army Patches, Flashes and Ovals book, which contains over 3600 unit insignias. (if you go to www.vetshome.com, scroll down and then after about 1.5 screens on the left side appears a listing of all the various patches down to Military Medical Company Patch level :-) -- noclador ( talk) 06:24, 29 April 2009 (UTC) reply

Thank you for offering to help with the article. While this article seems to be in great shape, I could use some help with improving articles on or related to the Buffalo Soldiers, specifically the 92nd and 93rd divisions. Dodgerblue777 ( talk) 04:52, 30 April 2009 (UTC) reply

OK then. Pending my work on the first two division articles, I'll see what I can do about these two. Any help would be appreciated. - Ed! (talk) 13:53, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
I've completed my GA review. I think this article still needs a fair bit of work. It contains a lot of factual errors. Let me know if you want to withdraw it for further work. (Also: I never got the 41st Infantry Division finished...) Hawkeye7 ( talk) 12:21, 6 May 2009 (UTC) reply

7th Infantry Division GA Review

Hi mate, I am currently undertaking the GA Review for 7th Infantry Division (United States). I have left some comments on the review page attached to the talk page. Could you please take a look and get back to me. I have included a section for your responses at the bottom on the review page, so please feel free to edit the review page. It's looking good so far. Cheers. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 05:51, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply

I've fixed two of the three problems you noted. As for the third, I'll look over the article later and try to fix what I find in terms of passive voice. - Ed! (talk) 15:59, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
I think I have fixed everything you pointed out to me. - Ed! (talk) 18:37, 5 May 2009 (UTC) reply
Hi, mate. Good work. Sorry it took a while for me to get back to. I got busy fixing one of my own articles up for GA. Its a bit 'jack' but I hope you will understand. I've passed the article for GA now. Nice work. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 12:12, 6 May 2009 (UTC) reply

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