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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 19:45, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
1. What the author did well: I really like how you outlined what the article did well and what you are planning to improve. I agree that differentiating between acute and chronic interstitial nephritis will improve the article. In addition, I like how your overview of interstitial nephritis gives a broad idea about the topic without going too much in depth. Can't wait to see how you improve the other sections. 2. Ways to improve: Consider using bullet points to discuss the causes of interstitial nephritis. In treatment and prognosis sections I would also recommend differentiating between acute and chronic interstitial nephritis. Do you feel that the article would benefit from a discussion of the presentation and cause in pediatrics? 3. Ideas to borrow: I like how you mentioned checking the links for the references to make sure that they work. I will have to do that with my article. I also like how are you planning on adding a picture. Vneph Vneph ( talk) 12:04, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
| This user is a student editor in University_of_Cincinnati/Communicating_Your_Science_(Fall) . |
Hello, Drcheech, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 19:45, 12 September 2018 (UTC)
1. What the author did well: I really like how you outlined what the article did well and what you are planning to improve. I agree that differentiating between acute and chronic interstitial nephritis will improve the article. In addition, I like how your overview of interstitial nephritis gives a broad idea about the topic without going too much in depth. Can't wait to see how you improve the other sections. 2. Ways to improve: Consider using bullet points to discuss the causes of interstitial nephritis. In treatment and prognosis sections I would also recommend differentiating between acute and chronic interstitial nephritis. Do you feel that the article would benefit from a discussion of the presentation and cause in pediatrics? 3. Ideas to borrow: I like how you mentioned checking the links for the references to make sure that they work. I will have to do that with my article. I also like how are you planning on adding a picture. Vneph Vneph ( talk) 12:04, 14 October 2018 (UTC)