Hi Chrisgp,
Thanks for you work on the above article, your changes are of a high quality, but one change has given a confused sentence. Could you recheck it to aid the article. "Cover claimed to have seen Mattan leaving Volpert's shop, though it later emerged that he had previously identified as the man he had seen another Somali living in the area at the time". Thanks FruitMonkey ( talk) 23:10, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I'm Optakeover. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —the one you made with this edit to Glastonbury Tor— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Optakeover (U) (T) (C) 14:33, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
Hi Chrisgp,
Thanks for you work on the above article, your changes are of a high quality, but one change has given a confused sentence. Could you recheck it to aid the article. "Cover claimed to have seen Mattan leaving Volpert's shop, though it later emerged that he had previously identified as the man he had seen another Somali living in the area at the time". Thanks FruitMonkey ( talk) 23:10, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
Hello, I'm Optakeover. I wanted to let you know that I reverted one of your recent contributions —the one you made with this edit to Glastonbury Tor— because it did not appear constructive. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Optakeover (U) (T) (C) 14:33, 30 September 2016 (UTC)