Hello, I'm MelbourneStar. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Cecil Kaye, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. — MelbourneStar☆ ^talk 10:00, 11 April 2014 (UTC) reply

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Hello, CarolineFHarvey46. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by David Biddulph ( talk) 11:42, 28 April 2020 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template). reply

Your draft Draft:General James Primrose has content, but no format. The guidelines at your first article are essential. Cecil Kaye can be used as a model. David notMD ( talk) 12:53, 28 April 2020 (UTC) reply

I created the sections you intended (sections are within == ==), and put the ref content into the body of the text. David notMD ( talk) 19:54, 28 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

Please see WP:MOS for how to properly format an article and WP:REFB for how to properly source it.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:General James Primrose and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:General James Primrose, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{ Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
• If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Sulfurboy ( talk) 15:38, 28 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Hello, CarolineFHarvey46! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy ( talk) 15:38, 28 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Hi CarolineFHarvey46! The thread you created at the Wikipedia:Teahouse, How to publish an article, has been archived because there was no discussion for a few days. You can still find the archived discussion here. If you have any additional questions that weren't answered then, please feel free to create a new thread. The archival was done by Lowercase sigmabot III, and this notification was delivered by Muninnbot, both automated accounts. You can opt out of future notifications by placing {{ bots|deny=Muninnbot}} here on your user talk page. Muninnbot ( talk) 19:02, 1 May 2020 (UTC) reply

Hello, CarolineFHarvey46. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, " General James Primrose".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 16:01, 29 October 2020 (UTC) reply