I don't think this is a bad start. Are there other court cases that show more regulations? Otherwise I think you have a good page going. Drohn141 ( talk) 23:32, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
I agree it's a good start... maybe you could add something about issues with free porn and how it affects the porn industry. Ac7958 ( talk) 15:08, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
Maybe try to research more on the "rights" subtopic. Is there any requirements on females taking birthcontrol, or are they required to practice and safe sex methods other than optional condoms. Patswrestling ( talk) 15:52, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
The adult film industry regulation article shows some promise so I have not tagged it for deletion. But you must deal with the basic matter of formatting - why on earth is written as separate lines, double-spaced? — RHaworth ( Talk | contribs) 18:42, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
I like the way this page has started. I think providing more concrete examples of safe or unsafe practices in the industry can add a certain appeal to the article. By providing real life examples, some may find the information to have more of an impact (
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I would be interested in talking to your instructor, so that we can help to guide projects like this without conflicting with Wikipedia's editing guidelines. We appreciate your contributions, and want to help. However, we don't want Wikipedia to be used as a host for class assignments: it may be more appropriate to improve existing articles than to create something new that may overlap with existing content. Please feel free to ask me questions or to discuss your goals in this project. Acroterion (talk) 02:22, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
How do I link pages to my article? I ofund articles I'd like to link but I don't know how to do it. Also, how do I make my article a better one? Sslota ( talk) 03:50, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
[[sausage]]
. This will appear on the page as
sausage.I like [[sausage|sausages]]
![]() | This article has no
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There are lots of ways to do this, some are simple, some more complex.
Personally, I like using citation templates, and fill in as much as I possibly can; maybe a bit more work, but I think it looks better. You have a <REF> at the start, then a suitable cite tag, then </REF>. An example usage is;
<ref> {{Citation | last = Preston | first = Peter | title = D. H. Lawrence in the modern world | last2 = Hoare | first2 = Peter | author2-link = | publication-date = 1989 | edition = illustrated | place = [[Cambridge]], [England] | publisher = [[Cambridge University Press]] | page = 125 | isbn = 0-521-37169-4 | url = http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=J5nRoaOwkPMC&printsec=frontcover#PPA125,M1 | accessdate = 2008-05-11 }} </ref>
For all the possible things to include, see Template:Citation
Of course, you don't have to put everything in, just whatever you can. The above example is a book, but I've included a 'convenience link' to a website that displays it.
Then, at the end of the document (but before any 'category' tags), you need a references section. You just put,
== References == {{reflist}}
Hard work? - help is at hand. There are lots of tools that create cite tags automagically. Personally, I use Zotero for the web links, and the cite book generator for books.
I also recommend you look at other articles and copy from them - especially featured articles, which should have good refs.
Hope this help, cheers, Chzz ► 04:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
There are two books about how to edit Wikipedia, both of which are online and both of which are free:
I don't think this is a bad start. Are there other court cases that show more regulations? Otherwise I think you have a good page going. Drohn141 ( talk) 23:32, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
I agree it's a good start... maybe you could add something about issues with free porn and how it affects the porn industry. Ac7958 ( talk) 15:08, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
Maybe try to research more on the "rights" subtopic. Is there any requirements on females taking birthcontrol, or are they required to practice and safe sex methods other than optional condoms. Patswrestling ( talk) 15:52, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
The adult film industry regulation article shows some promise so I have not tagged it for deletion. But you must deal with the basic matter of formatting - why on earth is written as separate lines, double-spaced? — RHaworth ( Talk | contribs) 18:42, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
I like the way this page has started. I think providing more concrete examples of safe or unsafe practices in the industry can add a certain appeal to the article. By providing real life examples, some may find the information to have more of an impact (
ChelseasexEd (
talk)
01:26, 6 April 2009 (UTC))
Welcome!
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Acroterion (talk) 02:21, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
I would be interested in talking to your instructor, so that we can help to guide projects like this without conflicting with Wikipedia's editing guidelines. We appreciate your contributions, and want to help. However, we don't want Wikipedia to be used as a host for class assignments: it may be more appropriate to improve existing articles than to create something new that may overlap with existing content. Please feel free to ask me questions or to discuss your goals in this project. Acroterion (talk) 02:22, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
How do I link pages to my article? I ofund articles I'd like to link but I don't know how to do it. Also, how do I make my article a better one? Sslota ( talk) 03:50, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
[[sausage]]
. This will appear on the page as
sausage.I like [[sausage|sausages]]
![]() | This article has no
links to other Wikipedia articles. (April 2009) |
There are lots of ways to do this, some are simple, some more complex.
Personally, I like using citation templates, and fill in as much as I possibly can; maybe a bit more work, but I think it looks better. You have a <REF> at the start, then a suitable cite tag, then </REF>. An example usage is;
<ref> {{Citation | last = Preston | first = Peter | title = D. H. Lawrence in the modern world | last2 = Hoare | first2 = Peter | author2-link = | publication-date = 1989 | edition = illustrated | place = [[Cambridge]], [England] | publisher = [[Cambridge University Press]] | page = 125 | isbn = 0-521-37169-4 | url = http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=J5nRoaOwkPMC&printsec=frontcover#PPA125,M1 | accessdate = 2008-05-11 }} </ref>
For all the possible things to include, see Template:Citation
Of course, you don't have to put everything in, just whatever you can. The above example is a book, but I've included a 'convenience link' to a website that displays it.
Then, at the end of the document (but before any 'category' tags), you need a references section. You just put,
== References == {{reflist}}
Hard work? - help is at hand. There are lots of tools that create cite tags automagically. Personally, I use Zotero for the web links, and the cite book generator for books.
I also recommend you look at other articles and copy from them - especially featured articles, which should have good refs.
Hope this help, cheers, Chzz ► 04:19, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
There are two books about how to edit Wikipedia, both of which are online and both of which are free: