Agree with your comment - Could do with some help in getting the article to an accepatble standard -- Davidsteed ( talk) 08:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Just a brief note to say what a magnificent job you've done with the Jehan Alain article. Euchiasmus 17:12, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
Thank you, your version is much better :) Mthibault ( talk) 23:05, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
-- tariqabjotu 18:29, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
The use of "religous segregation" seemed too pejorative, so it was replaced with the more usual term "denominational education" (which appears along with the related "denominational school" in several government documents [1], [2], [3], [4] as well as those of Educate Together [5], [6]) Autarch ( talk) 17:35, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
This edit reintroduced language that could be considered WP:EDITORIAL, perhaps even WP:POV or WP:OR - see also WP:NOTBLOG. The page Denominational education has examples of cited sources that criticise the system, though I did edit one phrase to be less WP:POV. I also wikified it a bit - there are pages on the HAI and AI. Autarch ( talk) 17:22, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Agree with your comment - Could do with some help in getting the article to an accepatble standard -- Davidsteed ( talk) 08:18, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
Just a brief note to say what a magnificent job you've done with the Jehan Alain article. Euchiasmus 17:12, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
Thank you, your version is much better :) Mthibault ( talk) 23:05, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
-- tariqabjotu 18:29, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
The use of "religous segregation" seemed too pejorative, so it was replaced with the more usual term "denominational education" (which appears along with the related "denominational school" in several government documents [1], [2], [3], [4] as well as those of Educate Together [5], [6]) Autarch ( talk) 17:35, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
This edit reintroduced language that could be considered WP:EDITORIAL, perhaps even WP:POV or WP:OR - see also WP:NOTBLOG. The page Denominational education has examples of cited sources that criticise the system, though I did edit one phrase to be less WP:POV. I also wikified it a bit - there are pages on the HAI and AI. Autarch ( talk) 17:22, 21 June 2010 (UTC)