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Hello. Would appreciate you taking a look at the Abdulaziz Bin Turki Bin Talal Al-Saud article, if you've got a moment, following your rejection of its draft version yesterday as "references do not adequately show the subject's notability". BLP isn't my strongest suit, and I'm not sure I'm confident enough to push it to an AfD.
The surrounding edits do seem a little suspicious; as well as posting the article despite the draft being rejected, User:Ibrahim.tabech has uploaded two other duplicate drafts and put a copy on their own userpage, and an IP blanked your rejected draft as soon as I mentioned it. -- McGeddon ( talk) 12:18, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I came across the draft article about Object Security while doing some work on model-driven security. In fact I know of the company and was surprised not to find it on Wikipedia because it's been working in the field for years.
Could you be a bit more specific about the edit you recommend please? I could try to have a go a it.
Fabien — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fabienpe ( talk • contribs) 20:44, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
Can you take another look at the Nick Marsh page for me? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 151.228.134.59 ( talk) 07:24, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi - the NIck Marsh feature was turned down on June 4th. Could you please take another look at it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.169.172.250 ( talk) 13:26, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Mithilsoni200 (
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16:34, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
stupid you are why are declining me now i have done correctly please dont do this otherwise i will be do repeatedly
I was about to revert those myself, but I see you caught the majority of it. Headbomb { talk / contribs / physics / books} 21:29, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
Normally it is okay to remind user per NOFORUM or collapse comments, the first time i see a user go around deleting editor input. And i do not agree with this on very specific topics like LAMBDA, where discussion is valid to discuss edits or briefly point something out. prokaryotes ( talk) 21:53, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks for correcting St. David's (Cardiff). I hadn't created the blockquote myself, so that made it more difficult to spot....thanks very much. SethWhales talk 23:50, 30 June 2015 (UTC) |
How do I cite text from a comic book that was published in 1989, but has no web link, no ISBN numbers, no online PDF, not archived, nothing....but the physical comic book?
2003:74:CF15:FC55:B923:3E43:CCF3:FD8F ( talk) 15:19, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
{{cite journal|title=The Curious Case of the Missing Onion|journal=Fred and Frank|date=3 June 2000}}
"The Curious Case of the Missing Onion". Fred and Frank. 3 June 2000.
Thank you for your closure, and I'm sorry if you felt I singled you out, but I needed to undrrscore that we are not to judge a topic by how poorly an article may be written or sourced but rather, and per WP:NRVE notability is based upon the sources available even if not used. And WP:NF does not mandate big spreads in major media... only coverage that is independent and reliable, sources which you mentioned dismissively while inexplicably deciding somehow that NF was failed. Again, thank you and I am sorry. I do ask that you be might in the future be more careful, and remember WP:BEFORE. Schmidt, Michael Q. 09:51, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi
Im sorry to bother you and I dont know if im in the right place, but someone has just reviewed my submission it was Surfboy well you previously declined it because of my wording, I fixed all of that and now he has declined it for some other reason ?
I just dont understand how this can be correct, if you first of all said it was only the wording,
Can you please help ?
/info/en/?search=Draft:Nasty_P
Azura81 ( talk) 06:57, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
Ibid. ( t) Josve05a ( c) 16:24, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
Hello Primefac,
Thanks for taking the time to review my article on Patrick Joseph. It seems it was declined for notability reasons. I'm curious as to whether his notability is in question, or whether I just haven't cited things properly....or both? I think it may just be me not submitting the article to meet the guidelines, but a brief rundown would help. I added a citation and updated a few things and resubmitted. Hopefully this is better, if not, please let me know what I could do, as I feel the subject deserves an article. Thank you, SC — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sparklingcoffee ( talk • contribs) 10:21, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
amit (
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05:53, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
2015(UTC)
Hi , May i know on what basis u have put the AFD msg in the page of Nucleus Premium Properties Private ltd.,
LEts talk here , Nucleus Premium properties is a very prominent brand in construction field in Kerala. There are lot of news links available in their name in leading dailies . And it sounds strange to note some one has placed a quote like they didnt found relevant info about the brand in searching news etc.. Please respond to me asap.
Thanks and Best Regards.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Johnabraham1 ( talk • contribs) 13:31, 23 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac. I've been thinking about something recently. I see that you've become one of the more prolific AfC patrollers out there, and dare I say one of the better ones. That leads to where I'm going next: have you considered running for adminship? I would be willing to nominate you if you would like to run. As an AfC patroller, you clearly have a need for the tools, both to process G13s and block obvious spammers who try to use the process solely for promotion. Your work at WPAST leads me to trust your judgment on admin-related matters as well, and gives you some content experience, which I personally feel is vital for adminship.
I must say, though, that RfA is a grueling process, and can take a lot out of a candidate. Believe me, I would know :). I cannot guarantee that you will pass, either; it's difficult to tell which way an RfA will fall beforehand. That's why I'm coming here. Would you be interested in such a nomination, or would you prefer to hold off either for some period of time or indefinitely? StringTheory11 ( t • c) 04:35, 13 July 2015 (UTC)
It is my pleasure to present to you Primefac as an adminship candidate. Primefac has had an account since 2010 and has been consistently active since late 2013, racking up over 12000 edits since then. Lately, he has mostly been active in the articles for creation process, where I have noticed him to be one of the most level-headed reviewers there. For AfC reviewers, the tools are a large help in order to process G13s, remove obvious spam, and other tasks. At AfC, he is helpful to the newbies who don’t know our policies, giving them sound advice and teaching them our policies. AfC and G13s are always backlogged, and we could do with more admins to help out.
But don’t be fooled into thinking that Primefac does not have content experience of his own; quite the opposite, in fact. He has taken the article astronomical spectroscopy from a terrible initial state into a strong B-class article that could probably pass a GA review in the state it’s currently in. He is also an active member of WikiProject Astronomy, where I have found him to demonstrate consistently good judgment and reason in scenarios on which he has commented. Even when consensus does not agree with him on an issue, his arguments are always logical, and I believe that he would make a wonderful addition to the admin crew.
StringTheory11 would like to nominate you to become an administrator. Please visit Wikipedia:Requests for adminship to see what this process entails, and then contact StringTheory11 to accept or decline the nomination. A page has been created for your nomination at Wikipedia:Requests for adminship/Primefac. If you accept the nomination, you must state and sign your acceptance. You may also choose to make a statement and/or answer the optional questions to supplement the information your nominator has given. Once you are satisfied with the page, you may post your nomination for discussion, or request that your nominator do so. |
Hi Primefac. I have have submitted the article on Ken LaZebnik several times and been rejected on notability grounds twice. I have just edited the article again adding a link to a Columbia Daily Tribune newspaper article from 2005 in which Ken is the primary subject. Also included are many of the accomplishments I mention in the Wikipedia article. Is this the missing piece for notability? I appreciate your help.
Thanks, MikeBravo54 ( talk) 18:28, 24 July 2015 (UTC)MikeBravo54, July 24, 2015
Primefac please let me know if I corrected the issues that you noted in my earlier submission. I hope that the many references that were added will allow for the article to be posted. If not, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rtapscott ( talk • contribs) 18:34, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
I believe the issues mentioned have been addressed. Let me know if I should make additional changes.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Rtapscott ( talk • contribs) 22:20, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Dear sir/ madam Telangana movement is 60 years fight for a separate state in India many people died in this fight Now Telangana is 29th state in India Deccan TV working for Telangana people's aspirations and for their culture In this regard we require Wikipedia support thank u...Soon I will try to present this article in the prescribed format thank you vamsi— Preceding unsigned comment added by Vamsiglobal ( talk • contribs) 21:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac, thanks for your help. I must mention that I am new to wikipedia. I am seeing that you have nominated my pages to be removed, and I am struggling to understand how the biographical text can be changed more that I already have.. Alonhadas ( talk) 21:58, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac:
I started a new article for a Japan Prize winner (2012) Dr. Masato Sagawa, which is declined due to "references do not adequately show the subject's notability" I am trying to figure out what I should put for the reference. I checked the Wiki page for another Japan Prize Winner (also in 2012): /info/en/?search=Brian_Druker, which has only two references:
And I have 7 references as shown below, including his original work (his first published work) in 1984:
Please advise for what I should do to make the references are adequtely show the subject's notability?
Thank you, Christina— Preceding unsigned comment added by Christina.h.chen ( talk • contribs) 21:41, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac,
How are you, I am sorry to hear about your adminiship. I supported you all the way. I wish you all the best in your time here on Wikipedia and please don't hesitate to talk to me on my talkpage, Regards -- EurovisionNim (talk to me) (see my edits) 12:01, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
Three quick points.
Hi! The Warner/Chappell Production Music article can not be merged into the Warner/Chappell article because they are two seperate companies. Though Warner/Chappell does own Warner/Chappell Production Music, they do two completely seperate things. Warner/Chappell Production Music is a production music company that produces music for T.V. news, film trailers, advertisements, and video games. They are located in a completely different building than Warner/Chappell. /info/en/?search=Draft:Warner/Chappell_Production_Music
Ashleighann93 ( talk) 01:59, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
Please stop your
disruptive editing, as you did at
WP:Articles for creation. Your edits have been
reverted or removed.
Do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive until the dispute is resolved through consensus. Continuing to edit disruptively may result in your being blocked from editing. olowe2011 ( talk) 12:41, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello. This message is being sent to inform you that there is currently a discussion involving you at
Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring regarding a possible violation of Wikipedia's policy on
edit warring. The thread is
Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Edit warring#User:Primefac reported by User:Olowe2011 (Result: ). Thank you.
olowe2011 (
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12:53, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks so much for a beautiful job reorganizing and cleaning up the James Lorin Richards article. I was obviously in way over my head and I really appreciate your work. Thanks again,
Jtlanghorne ( talk) 13:40, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac: Thank you for the feedback on my (first ever) draft for an article on the Cantiere del Pardo shipyard - Draft:Cantiere_del_Pardo_S.p.A.
You have left to me comment: There need to be references that talk about the company (I assume Cantier del Pardo is a company) specifically. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail. Primefac (talk) 17:33, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
I have changed my references links and I have add many other hyper links all around to reliable web site, could you please confirm me if I did well this time? if not what should I do next in order to have my article passed?
Thank you so much for your help, Kind regards; Maya Maybachcdp ( talk) 12:27, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
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Thank you for your helpful help! Maybachcdp ( talk) 16:27, 5 August 2015 (UTC) |
@ Primefac: I have noticed that you seem to be making a deliberate attempt to follow my edits and disrupt them since I opened a case for Edit warring against you on the administrators noticeboard. I recognize that you may be reverting my edits without consultation with me first in good faith however, at the same time it appears you may be deliberately following my contributions with an aim to disrupt them. This is against Wikipedia's clearly defined harassment policy. Given the fact I did open a case against you via the Administrators notice board it would be reasonable to assert that edits to contributions that I make are not maintaining a neutral point of view and may disrupt due process here on Wikipedia. I'd ask that you disengage from my further edits or contributions on Wikipedia and refer them onto a person with a NPOV on the subject matter. Thank you. olowe2011 ( talk) 18:58, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
When making accusation against another user for HOUNDING, please provide specific diff-links and examples where the user may have been "making a deliberate attempt to follow my edits and disrupt them". Unleass such can be provided, no action, nor discussion, can be held about this issue, where there is no issue to take actions or discuss about. i hope you all understand that. Thanks. ( t) Josve05a ( c) 19:48, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
193.62.69.1 ( talk) 08:59, 7 August 2015 (UTC)Hello Primefac, I just wanted to say thank you for reviewing and posting my article so quickly. I understand it needs some work and will look into that as well. Thanks again, Navaeeda Naeem 193.62.69.1 ( talk) 08:59, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Kindly delete this article.
SyedAminul (
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15:10, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac, We have been in contact before and I refer to my talk about Draft:Wolfram_Wöß with you in May: Archive_6#11:13:32.2C_16_April_2015_review_of_submission_by_Laoswikiedit
You wrote: The main thing your draft needs is two or three independent reliable sources that talk about Wöß, and I don't see any reason why the draft shouldn't be accepted. If you want more help, stop by the Teahouse, the IRC channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 21:58, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
According to your suggestion, I added two reports from the Austrian television broadcasting service, two newspaper articles from different newspapers and a radio report, and added additional references of done research work, but apparently this is not enough. Now, as my article is declined again, I would like to ask you, which further steps do you suggest?
In addition, I don’t understand the claim that the page reads more like an advertisement, as the content is based on the information of a public University and not a private company website trying to attract possible customers.
Laoswikiedit ( talk) 12:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac,
Thanks for the comments on the draft of Janus Pannonius Grand Prize for Poetry. The article was indeed copied from an outside source but the user who copied it has the permission of the original author, Mr. Géza Szőcs, who sent an e-mail to permissions-en[at]wikimedia.org stating that he releases it under Creative Commons licence. Can you please help this article get approved? Thanks. – Alensha talk 16:02, 2 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac,
Thank you for your quick response to my latest submission. /info/en/?search=Draft:Roberta_Grossman
In reviewing another Wikipedia biography somewhat similar to Roberta Grossman's, I wondered why /info/en/?search=Aviva_Kempner is acceptable and published on Wikipedia when it seemingly has less references and filmography than Roberta Grossman?
The Aviva Kempner article also has a notice at the top:
This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page. This biographical article needs additional citations for verification. (August 2008) This article is an autobiography or has been extensively edited by the subject or by someone connected to the subject. (August 2008) This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (August 2008)
Can you please help me understand?
I appreciate your response and time.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 17:38, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
I quite expected that some changes would be asked for, but I do not know what to change. Can you be more specific. Also I think it would help if I sent a drawing but I do not know how to do this. Any help would be appreciated as I have had no computer training and I am aged 77. The 'Blackburn Cycle' appears on most searches but no one seems to take much notice. If this technology is used it would go a long way to solve the worldwide Global Warming problem and I thought that this article might reach the academic world. Thank you
Anthony Blackburn
Blackburn cycle (
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16:09, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
I think my article is ideal for Wikipedia and should be of huge public interest as it would lead to very large CO2 reductions. Details have been sent to the Car Makers several times but their Engineers cannot enter into any correspondence because correspondence in other instances have been cited as evidence that manufacturers have copied inventions. I should be able to answer any doubts about this technology without legal complications. I have drafted minor changes to my article which I will try to paste. I would also like to attach a drawing if you can advise how I might do this.
Regards
Anthony Blackburn
Anthony Blackburn (
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05:21, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
I think the challenge I face in writing Draft:Roberta Grossman is that the subject is not often the main feature of independent articles. Rather, her films are the main subjects. So I have attempted to put in film reviews, such as one from "The Hollywood Reporter" for "Above and Beyond" which also mentions Roberta Grossman, the Director of the film.
"Interviews with pilots who flew these missions is one of the highlights of the film."<ref>{{cite web |last1=Scheck|first1=Frank|title=Above and Beyond: Film Review|url=http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/review/beyond-film-review-763585/|website=The Hollywood Reporter|publisher=The Hollywood Reporter|accessdate=1 January 2015}}</ref>
Unfortunately, I cannot figure out how to format this addition. It links to an external website which I know is a violation of your policies. Perhaps you can correct it if you have time.
Thank you again.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 22:55, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
After I learned how to insert citations with templates, I corrected the in-body external link that had temporarily appeared in the body of the text.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 13:46, 8 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac,
Thanks so much for talking the time to review my draft and suggesting for reliable sources. Could you please let me know if "reliable sources" refer to a link(s) under Reference in particular? I'm working on it, but just want to be sure I understand the way of doing it.
Zoe 1001Bookworm ( talk) 00:10, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks so much for your helpful suggestions and information, Primefac. I've done another revision and will resubmit it. Please point out any problems that I need to work on. Your time is really appreciated. 1001Bookworm ( talk) 03:33, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Thanks for your reply and advice. If you feel my article is not suitable for Wiki then I would accept that. I thought my web page would have started testing and development but I cannot trace any benefit and the same may be true here. It is difficult and expensive to test the ‘Blackburn Cycle’ properly. A new cylinder head casting is needed which is beyond the ability of Universities. You would like external confirmation and while I have replies from academics and others no one has actually seen or tested this concept other than myself, so they are not much help. Experts say things like it is the same as, or should be combined with, cylinder de-activation or there will be more friction with 8 strokes in the cycle, which is simply not true. You question notability – wow – what else is there which can reduce the CO2 emissions from cars worldwide by 30-50%. You think it may be too soon. My first ‘Blackburn Cycle’ patent was in 1991, so you can see there has not been much progress. I have excluded figures for efficiency gains because you or others might see them as exaggerated but these were reliable and accurate results. Please feel free to edit or alter my article. Whatever you or anyone else does cannot be worse than zero, which is the present status of this concept. I plan to delete the previous copy and paste the new. Best regards
Anthony Blackburn (
talk)
08:16, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
158.69.146.202 ( talk) 01:52, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
Alright, we want to make sure whats the issue with Nethking's wikipedia? why is it getting declined tell us what we can do to make the article Valid?
Sir, I believe that Detox need to get accepted because fans may have a hard time finding Detox. I did before, so this page is perfect for Detox. They can know why it was cancelled & what songs where released from the album. Fans can also find out why it was delayed so many times.
Nastradumas 2001 (
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19:35, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
I am sorry to say that I find your site complicated and difficult to use. Am I in the correct space here? You seem to have 2 concerns. First I can confirm that I have no business and I am selling nothing. I want to get this new technology known and I would even welcome unauthorised use of my patents initially and hope to get some Royalties later. If you do not like a link to my web page you can delete it, but this would stop easy access to more detailed information for anyone who is interested.
Secondly you seem concerned with notability. Although this technology has been known to me for many years it is still unknown and untested by the academic community. Opinions without tests are of little value. If you can encourage independent tests this would be most welcome. I think your users should know that there is a more fuel efficient and lower CO2 alternative to the usual 4 stroke Otto Cycle engine. Please advise if more information or changes are required. Regards Anthony Blackburn ( talk) 08:44, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Anthony Blackburn (
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08:44, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Never mind. Another user answered my question.
Jfleach ( talk) 21:34, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments on my draft. I have added 6 published references at different positions in the text. I have also removed the unnecessary detail which you mentioned. I hope that the draft now meets the Wikipedia criteria. Davidwit ( talk) 15:31, 17 August 2015 (UTC) DavidWit
I saw your review of the Draft:Eduar Canizalez BLP. See the previously created Eduar Mafla Canizalez, which I have prodded as it is un-sourced. Couldn't find much in the way of sources either. 220 of Borg 10:11, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks for your help with Begunahi article!! Begunahi ( talk) 15:48, 18 August 2015 (UTC) |
Imasku ( talk) 15:53, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
There are no significant documents to prove the importance this band contributed to the blues music scene due to the time period. I am still trying to get access to pay per use information, finding third party resources is next to non - existent.. It is one reason the documentary film is being made. But this band is one of the fore runners to bringing the genre of blues music to Ontario. Imasku ( talk) 15:53, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
I have tried - I have spent days in archives. Its not there is what I am finding, even with Mr. Kendall's help trying to locate magazines. the time period just did not record what these fore runner bands did... they did not care. sadly Imasku ( talk) 15:59, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for your feedback on my submission of the page Jean Stevens. I have made several changes and I hope the page now meets the requirements for submission. I have re-saved the changes. I have also added to my user page to state that I am the editor/webmaster of Jean Stevens' website - she is my mother.
Nick Stevens (
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18:13, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Ellacomm (
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20:49, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
My article has been rejected and the reasons why do not make any sense. A lot of my work is in the middle east and is not documented on this site so it is difficult to reference it. The TV show I was on for over 2 years in Australia is also not listed as a reference so I could not attach it either. I have put the only show that was documented for reference on the wikipedia site.
Kindest regards Amira Celon
My article has been rejected and the reasons why do not make any sense. A lot of my work is in the middle east and is not documented on this site so it is difficult to reference it. The TV show I was on for over 2 years in Australia is also not listed as a reference so I could not reference it either. I have put the only show that was documented for reference on the wikipedia site. Kindly review it and see what is needed. It is also not a sales page - I have not selling anything there about myself - just documented the only reference I could find listed. Kindest regards Amira Celon — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ellacomm ( talk • contribs) 20:55, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
IT Enthusiast ( talk) 13:28, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time and reviewing the article, and for directing my attention to the username policy. The name was chosen in a haste and it has since been changed.
Once again thank you for your input, and please let me know if this resolves all the issues or if there are other details that i should work on before resubmitting the article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by IT Enthusiast ( talk • contribs) 14:28, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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so that people know who it was that made the comment.
Primefac (
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14:25, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac
I refer to your review of my submission of the Draft:Oom Gielie se Dipbak. Thank you very much for your valuable feedback. I have sought to rectify the draft according to your recommendations and await your re-review of the draft. In particular, I have attempted to change the draft's layout and tone away from sounding and looking like an advertisement towards a more neutral encyclopedic statement and layout whilst trying not to dilute the subject content too much. Please feel free to advise me further on this. I have also reduced the draft's reliance on references to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed, again not trying to dilute the content and quality too much and I have also added one more independant source. I appreciate any comment in this regard. Please also advise if you feel that the draft article needs to be shortened even further in its entirety.
Kind Regards Pmf29 ( talk) 22:00, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Kindly suggest if any further changes needed @ Draft:Sumaira Abdulali-- . Shlok talk . 08:12, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac
I have had my PA look at the formula to submit the article and I have tried to understand it myself. Neither of us can actually do it or understand anything. I need help other than - read the instructions - because we can't do it after reading everything. It is a limitation of our intelligence or the fact that we don't have a phd in Wikipedia matter. Kindly refer me to some who I can actually hire to submit my article in the correct way.
Many thanks Amira — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.189.189.116 ( talk) 23:18, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
I'm working on an article for a foundation of which I'm a board member, and I have that relationship disclosed on my user page. Do you think I should continue, or rather hand it off to a seasoned editor like you? I need advice - THANKS! Article is -- Draft: Begunahi Foundation USA Wenderfully ( talk) 17:00, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
Truly sorry, but I was editing my own post that someone had added to about their own issue. Never happen again. Wenderfully ( talk) 14:49, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi - I've deleted the submission under EWWDC and left the one under Selinaw53. These are two different versions of the draft and the one under Selina53 is the most recent. Please review that one instead. Thanks! ---- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Selinaw53 ( talk • contribs) 15:59, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, I am particularly new to Wikipedia stuff, just started making some pages. I need to know what CAN be reliable sources instead of STEAM? Review pages? Official Game pages? Please reply. Thanks anyways — Preceding unsigned comment added by Raibatsu ( talk • contribs) 11:51, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Mrinal Razdan (
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09:53, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac: Your explanation was very clear and accurate. I had to muddle through the page to find the location you indicated and it worked! The link has now been corrected to the Tanz/Wired article referenced in the wiki article.
Thank you for my edification on the procedure. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WikiSnickety ( talk • contribs) 20:34, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Good Morning,
In it's current 'edited' state, our page is missing the links to all local schools, institutions, and transit options. It is also missing all the images we uploaded. Can you please revert this back to its original state so that we can make the appropriate changes? Thank you in advance.
Miamicd11 ( talk) 13:46, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
You are invited to join the discussion at
Draft:Sumaira Abdulali. Thanks.
. Shlok
talk .
14:10, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac - can you please give me an example how to correct what ever is wrong with this article? Is it not allowed to have links to a website ourside or wiki?
Best regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ottcla ( talk • contribs) 13:11, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Regarding your decline of this draft, there is actually a worse problem than the "unsourced" aspect you mentioned in the decline. It's a duplicate of the topic (and some is actually just cut'n'paste) of the existing Field-effect transistor article. Not sure what the AfC workflow is for this situation. But there's no point in leading the editor on in thinking the draft can become viable, but also to invite that editor to work on the existing article. DMacks ( talk) 04:47, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
. Shlok talk . 07:01, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
I want to forgive me, but not worth it, you are annoying me I understand. If you give me one last chance, I will be grateful, and maybe I can presume good faith, I have to go to the chapel or cathedral has been praying.
However, I have a reason to give:
I want you to forgive me.
I can not go back to Wikipedia for more than 20 weeks, until I refleccione
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:17, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
Bye — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk • contribs) 20:42, 23 August 2015 (UTC) }
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:51, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
I'm sorry
Thank you SineBot -- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:51, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac, You're a great person
Mikelief Artsymaine 21:03, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
I've addressed your concerns. It should be accepted. Cheers. 7&6=thirteen ( ☎) 16:17, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
if you agree and want to come back fine, but I must go
if you agree and want to come back fine, but I must go, God bless you, but you can not deny that I made some contributions
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 19:56, 24 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk • contribs)
Thank you
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 23:14, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
I want to learn how to create my very firm, to avoid problems when go to any library.
Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 23:14, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for the feedback and overview Primefac. I removed, changed and added more independent sources as requested, as well as the addition of non-primary sources. I wasn't sure how many resubmissions are allowed which is why I'm writing through here, or shall I just hit the resubmit button?
121.223.187.37 ( talk) 05:06, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac - I made the modifications you suggested (adding independent reliable sources) and resubmit the article, I hope that's enough to provide indication of notability. Quick question, since there is another article with the same name, what would be the process to define whether a disambiguation page is needed? and if now, what article takes priority?
OS ( talk) 21:57, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
I request a re-review of the list as your reason why this list is unnecessary is that
List of PC games is "more than satisfactory for someone looking for highly-ranked games". I find that page un-satisfactory as I would need to go through each alphabetized page to see all of the games AND sort each list by it's MetaScore. This seems like too much hassle and it is much easier for acclaimed PC games to be stored in one page rather than twenty-seven.
GregorGuy (
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21:13, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
primefac you decide you want to re-edit wikipedia or better I hope that everything is resolved. If I must be presumed good faith by Obias reasons.
Well, so, no problem
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 15:21, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
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Primefac, you starred really you, congratulations, leave good comments are quite valid
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this is my first article i even don't know how to write the wiki article in proper way kindly do help me & edit anything you want cite the source accordingly..please do not delete the page
Legacy2015 ( talk) 09:22, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
There are many additional secondary sources establishing notability, which I could potentially provide, but it seemed awkward to force reference to them into the article? Please let me know what you think needs to be added and how. Thanks. -- CamEngTeacher ( talk) 09:41, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
CamEngTeacher ( talk) 09:41, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi there,
You mentioned in your comment that wiki page has to be about what others also say about the company. When I had put that, the other reviewers rejected it saying that it looked like an ad. For eg., based on the below link (one such media that carried Dalal Times story) I had written 'Dalal Times is being recognized as a knowledge platform for investors' However, this also got rejected on the grounds that it looks like an ad. So is it okay to use other media quotes and put on wiki page? Should i change it back? http://www.moneycontrol.com/news/business/dalal-times-a-platform-to-spread-knowledge-among-investors_1368590.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sonalkumbhat ( talk • contribs) 09:34, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Draft:Twist with the Ventures - This is my first article submitted; I have added some additional references as requested. I am going to re-submit it. If it is inadequate, please assist and be specific. I have read the "referencing" page before and again today. I am wary of over-referencing such a short article. Frankzappatwin ( talk) 12:49, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Frankzappatwin, Wikipedia can't be used as a reference, because it's user-generated content. You've properly resubmitted the draft, though. You're not a pest, you're learning, there's a difference! Primefac ( talk) 19:06, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
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I was editing the page from one window and hadn't opened up another Wikipedia window between when I started doing that and when you posted on the talk page. You absolutely can change the maps back if you'd like. I feel pretty bad about the whole thing. Immortal Z ( talk) 17:46, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
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Yongsheng Gao ( talk) 23:04, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
Thanks for revising my page. I have improved that page according to your comments. Could you please have a look that is Okay or not. Thanks for valuable time and looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards.
Yongsheng.
Thanks for the feedback on my Shoppertainment post.
I think I can wrangle enough independent references to show that Shoppertainment is now a "term of art" ...
What is the ebst way to supply these references to you?
Willg2763 ( talk) 00:12, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi, and thanks for the comment Primefac. You are quite right, and indeed I will delete the extra information. I only keep it in the draft, for the time being, as an example to help me build the article (I am still learning). When finished with the draft (first 4 chapters), I will delete the example article. Thanks for the heads up. Cheers Celdomi ( talk) 17:47, 9 September 2015 (UTC) prefix:User talk:Primefac/
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Thank you for your help Primefac....I would not have known how to handle my situation without your help. InterestedCanadian ( talk) 17:50, 10 September 2015 (UTC) |
Hi,
These two Wikipedia entries are on two different subjects. The Clan Irvine entry is focused on the Irvines of Drum, David Irvine of Drum is 26th Baron, who are the Irvines in the Highlands. Clan Irving are in the Borders and the Wikipedia entry has a paragraph clearly stating the differences between the two. This is also reflected in the Clan Irvine entry. Can you please re-review the article with these differences in mind?
Many Thanks
ClanIrving (
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16:31, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
This article was denied because of what were judged as inadequate references. I would like to discuss this decision as I believe that all references used in this article are supporting:
1. The notability of Richard Wilcox in his field of activity. In this regard, it is important to realize that the there is limited distinction between Richard Wilcox and its projects for food security such as African Risk Capacity.
2. Statements are made in the articles in terms of past, present and future activities link to Richard Wilcox. These references are especially relevant since there is, for example, no wikipage on African Risk Capacity. When such a page is created, it will be natural to reduce the amount of references on Richard Wilcox and simply refer to it.
Please re-review as the sourcing is not as general as described by Lamona, it is instead extremely relevant to the global understanding Mr Wilcox's activities that made him a notable diplomat.
Davidmaslo (
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10:32, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac and thanks for the replay. As already agreed with Sam my list could be considered as a WP:SALAT. You can find similar approach on List of large sailing vessels, List of schooners and List of clipper ships. Tell me what you think and if for you is ok to re-re-submit. Thanks! The Weatherman ( talk) 18:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
Hello! I have addressed the concerns expressed by the reviewer, and have added citations to my submission.
74.136.225.42 ( talk) 03:22, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
74.136.225.42 ( talk) 03:22, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
There isn't much information available for this player other than the CFL.ca profile page, the Team player profile page and
one article
http://cfl.ca/roster/show/id/8305
http://ticats.ca/player/jay-langa
Dwj7738 (
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11:05, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
http://thechronicleherald.ca/sports/1253896-jonathan-langa-locks-up-cis-honour
Dwj7738 ( talk) 11:05, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
Please discuss with your colleagues whether you're expecting too much from countries of the South, where newspaper articles show prominence and are all that can be reasonably expected in the case of many prominent people who would be covered more amply in the affluent North, where book publication is far more common and cost-effective. Jzsj ( talk) 15:30, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
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Hello. Would appreciate you taking a look at the Abdulaziz Bin Turki Bin Talal Al-Saud article, if you've got a moment, following your rejection of its draft version yesterday as "references do not adequately show the subject's notability". BLP isn't my strongest suit, and I'm not sure I'm confident enough to push it to an AfD.
The surrounding edits do seem a little suspicious; as well as posting the article despite the draft being rejected, User:Ibrahim.tabech has uploaded two other duplicate drafts and put a copy on their own userpage, and an IP blanked your rejected draft as soon as I mentioned it. -- McGeddon ( talk) 12:18, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I came across the draft article about Object Security while doing some work on model-driven security. In fact I know of the company and was surprised not to find it on Wikipedia because it's been working in the field for years.
Could you be a bit more specific about the edit you recommend please? I could try to have a go a it.
Fabien — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fabienpe ( talk • contribs) 20:44, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
Can you take another look at the Nick Marsh page for me? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 151.228.134.59 ( talk) 07:24, 18 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi - the NIck Marsh feature was turned down on June 4th. Could you please take another look at it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.169.172.250 ( talk) 13:26, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Mithilsoni200 (
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16:34, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
stupid you are why are declining me now i have done correctly please dont do this otherwise i will be do repeatedly
I was about to revert those myself, but I see you caught the majority of it. Headbomb { talk / contribs / physics / books} 21:29, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
Normally it is okay to remind user per NOFORUM or collapse comments, the first time i see a user go around deleting editor input. And i do not agree with this on very specific topics like LAMBDA, where discussion is valid to discuss edits or briefly point something out. prokaryotes ( talk) 21:53, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks for correcting St. David's (Cardiff). I hadn't created the blockquote myself, so that made it more difficult to spot....thanks very much. SethWhales talk 23:50, 30 June 2015 (UTC) |
How do I cite text from a comic book that was published in 1989, but has no web link, no ISBN numbers, no online PDF, not archived, nothing....but the physical comic book?
2003:74:CF15:FC55:B923:3E43:CCF3:FD8F ( talk) 15:19, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
{{cite journal|title=The Curious Case of the Missing Onion|journal=Fred and Frank|date=3 June 2000}}
"The Curious Case of the Missing Onion". Fred and Frank. 3 June 2000.
Thank you for your closure, and I'm sorry if you felt I singled you out, but I needed to undrrscore that we are not to judge a topic by how poorly an article may be written or sourced but rather, and per WP:NRVE notability is based upon the sources available even if not used. And WP:NF does not mandate big spreads in major media... only coverage that is independent and reliable, sources which you mentioned dismissively while inexplicably deciding somehow that NF was failed. Again, thank you and I am sorry. I do ask that you be might in the future be more careful, and remember WP:BEFORE. Schmidt, Michael Q. 09:51, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi
Im sorry to bother you and I dont know if im in the right place, but someone has just reviewed my submission it was Surfboy well you previously declined it because of my wording, I fixed all of that and now he has declined it for some other reason ?
I just dont understand how this can be correct, if you first of all said it was only the wording,
Can you please help ?
/info/en/?search=Draft:Nasty_P
Azura81 ( talk) 06:57, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
Ibid. ( t) Josve05a ( c) 16:24, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
Hello Primefac,
Thanks for taking the time to review my article on Patrick Joseph. It seems it was declined for notability reasons. I'm curious as to whether his notability is in question, or whether I just haven't cited things properly....or both? I think it may just be me not submitting the article to meet the guidelines, but a brief rundown would help. I added a citation and updated a few things and resubmitted. Hopefully this is better, if not, please let me know what I could do, as I feel the subject deserves an article. Thank you, SC — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sparklingcoffee ( talk • contribs) 10:21, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
amit (
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05:53, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
2015(UTC)
Hi , May i know on what basis u have put the AFD msg in the page of Nucleus Premium Properties Private ltd.,
LEts talk here , Nucleus Premium properties is a very prominent brand in construction field in Kerala. There are lot of news links available in their name in leading dailies . And it sounds strange to note some one has placed a quote like they didnt found relevant info about the brand in searching news etc.. Please respond to me asap.
Thanks and Best Regards.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Johnabraham1 ( talk • contribs) 13:31, 23 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac. I've been thinking about something recently. I see that you've become one of the more prolific AfC patrollers out there, and dare I say one of the better ones. That leads to where I'm going next: have you considered running for adminship? I would be willing to nominate you if you would like to run. As an AfC patroller, you clearly have a need for the tools, both to process G13s and block obvious spammers who try to use the process solely for promotion. Your work at WPAST leads me to trust your judgment on admin-related matters as well, and gives you some content experience, which I personally feel is vital for adminship.
I must say, though, that RfA is a grueling process, and can take a lot out of a candidate. Believe me, I would know :). I cannot guarantee that you will pass, either; it's difficult to tell which way an RfA will fall beforehand. That's why I'm coming here. Would you be interested in such a nomination, or would you prefer to hold off either for some period of time or indefinitely? StringTheory11 ( t • c) 04:35, 13 July 2015 (UTC)
It is my pleasure to present to you Primefac as an adminship candidate. Primefac has had an account since 2010 and has been consistently active since late 2013, racking up over 12000 edits since then. Lately, he has mostly been active in the articles for creation process, where I have noticed him to be one of the most level-headed reviewers there. For AfC reviewers, the tools are a large help in order to process G13s, remove obvious spam, and other tasks. At AfC, he is helpful to the newbies who don’t know our policies, giving them sound advice and teaching them our policies. AfC and G13s are always backlogged, and we could do with more admins to help out.
But don’t be fooled into thinking that Primefac does not have content experience of his own; quite the opposite, in fact. He has taken the article astronomical spectroscopy from a terrible initial state into a strong B-class article that could probably pass a GA review in the state it’s currently in. He is also an active member of WikiProject Astronomy, where I have found him to demonstrate consistently good judgment and reason in scenarios on which he has commented. Even when consensus does not agree with him on an issue, his arguments are always logical, and I believe that he would make a wonderful addition to the admin crew.
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Hi Primefac. I have have submitted the article on Ken LaZebnik several times and been rejected on notability grounds twice. I have just edited the article again adding a link to a Columbia Daily Tribune newspaper article from 2005 in which Ken is the primary subject. Also included are many of the accomplishments I mention in the Wikipedia article. Is this the missing piece for notability? I appreciate your help.
Thanks, MikeBravo54 ( talk) 18:28, 24 July 2015 (UTC)MikeBravo54, July 24, 2015
Primefac please let me know if I corrected the issues that you noted in my earlier submission. I hope that the many references that were added will allow for the article to be posted. If not, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rtapscott ( talk • contribs) 18:34, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
I believe the issues mentioned have been addressed. Let me know if I should make additional changes.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Rtapscott ( talk • contribs) 22:20, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Dear sir/ madam Telangana movement is 60 years fight for a separate state in India many people died in this fight Now Telangana is 29th state in India Deccan TV working for Telangana people's aspirations and for their culture In this regard we require Wikipedia support thank u...Soon I will try to present this article in the prescribed format thank you vamsi— Preceding unsigned comment added by Vamsiglobal ( talk • contribs) 21:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac, thanks for your help. I must mention that I am new to wikipedia. I am seeing that you have nominated my pages to be removed, and I am struggling to understand how the biographical text can be changed more that I already have.. Alonhadas ( talk) 21:58, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac:
I started a new article for a Japan Prize winner (2012) Dr. Masato Sagawa, which is declined due to "references do not adequately show the subject's notability" I am trying to figure out what I should put for the reference. I checked the Wiki page for another Japan Prize Winner (also in 2012): /info/en/?search=Brian_Druker, which has only two references:
And I have 7 references as shown below, including his original work (his first published work) in 1984:
Please advise for what I should do to make the references are adequtely show the subject's notability?
Thank you, Christina— Preceding unsigned comment added by Christina.h.chen ( talk • contribs) 21:41, 22 July 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac,
How are you, I am sorry to hear about your adminiship. I supported you all the way. I wish you all the best in your time here on Wikipedia and please don't hesitate to talk to me on my talkpage, Regards -- EurovisionNim (talk to me) (see my edits) 12:01, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
Three quick points.
Hi! The Warner/Chappell Production Music article can not be merged into the Warner/Chappell article because they are two seperate companies. Though Warner/Chappell does own Warner/Chappell Production Music, they do two completely seperate things. Warner/Chappell Production Music is a production music company that produces music for T.V. news, film trailers, advertisements, and video games. They are located in a completely different building than Warner/Chappell. /info/en/?search=Draft:Warner/Chappell_Production_Music
Ashleighann93 ( talk) 01:59, 31 July 2015 (UTC)
Please stop your
disruptive editing, as you did at
WP:Articles for creation. Your edits have been
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Do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive until the dispute is resolved through consensus. Continuing to edit disruptively may result in your being blocked from editing. olowe2011 ( talk) 12:41, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks so much for a beautiful job reorganizing and cleaning up the James Lorin Richards article. I was obviously in way over my head and I really appreciate your work. Thanks again,
Jtlanghorne ( talk) 13:40, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac: Thank you for the feedback on my (first ever) draft for an article on the Cantiere del Pardo shipyard - Draft:Cantiere_del_Pardo_S.p.A.
You have left to me comment: There need to be references that talk about the company (I assume Cantier del Pardo is a company) specifically. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail. Primefac (talk) 17:33, 4 August 2015 (UTC)
I have changed my references links and I have add many other hyper links all around to reliable web site, could you please confirm me if I did well this time? if not what should I do next in order to have my article passed?
Thank you so much for your help, Kind regards; Maya Maybachcdp ( talk) 12:27, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
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Thank you for your helpful help! Maybachcdp ( talk) 16:27, 5 August 2015 (UTC) |
@ Primefac: I have noticed that you seem to be making a deliberate attempt to follow my edits and disrupt them since I opened a case for Edit warring against you on the administrators noticeboard. I recognize that you may be reverting my edits without consultation with me first in good faith however, at the same time it appears you may be deliberately following my contributions with an aim to disrupt them. This is against Wikipedia's clearly defined harassment policy. Given the fact I did open a case against you via the Administrators notice board it would be reasonable to assert that edits to contributions that I make are not maintaining a neutral point of view and may disrupt due process here on Wikipedia. I'd ask that you disengage from my further edits or contributions on Wikipedia and refer them onto a person with a NPOV on the subject matter. Thank you. olowe2011 ( talk) 18:58, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
When making accusation against another user for HOUNDING, please provide specific diff-links and examples where the user may have been "making a deliberate attempt to follow my edits and disrupt them". Unleass such can be provided, no action, nor discussion, can be held about this issue, where there is no issue to take actions or discuss about. i hope you all understand that. Thanks. ( t) Josve05a ( c) 19:48, 6 August 2015 (UTC)
193.62.69.1 ( talk) 08:59, 7 August 2015 (UTC)Hello Primefac, I just wanted to say thank you for reviewing and posting my article so quickly. I understand it needs some work and will look into that as well. Thanks again, Navaeeda Naeem 193.62.69.1 ( talk) 08:59, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Kindly delete this article.
SyedAminul (
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15:10, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac, We have been in contact before and I refer to my talk about Draft:Wolfram_Wöß with you in May: Archive_6#11:13:32.2C_16_April_2015_review_of_submission_by_Laoswikiedit
You wrote: The main thing your draft needs is two or three independent reliable sources that talk about Wöß, and I don't see any reason why the draft shouldn't be accepted. If you want more help, stop by the Teahouse, the IRC channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 21:58, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
According to your suggestion, I added two reports from the Austrian television broadcasting service, two newspaper articles from different newspapers and a radio report, and added additional references of done research work, but apparently this is not enough. Now, as my article is declined again, I would like to ask you, which further steps do you suggest?
In addition, I don’t understand the claim that the page reads more like an advertisement, as the content is based on the information of a public University and not a private company website trying to attract possible customers.
Laoswikiedit ( talk) 12:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac,
Thanks for the comments on the draft of Janus Pannonius Grand Prize for Poetry. The article was indeed copied from an outside source but the user who copied it has the permission of the original author, Mr. Géza Szőcs, who sent an e-mail to permissions-en[at]wikimedia.org stating that he releases it under Creative Commons licence. Can you please help this article get approved? Thanks. – Alensha talk 16:02, 2 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac,
Thank you for your quick response to my latest submission. /info/en/?search=Draft:Roberta_Grossman
In reviewing another Wikipedia biography somewhat similar to Roberta Grossman's, I wondered why /info/en/?search=Aviva_Kempner is acceptable and published on Wikipedia when it seemingly has less references and filmography than Roberta Grossman?
The Aviva Kempner article also has a notice at the top:
This article has multiple issues. Please help improve it or discuss these issues on the talk page. This biographical article needs additional citations for verification. (August 2008) This article is an autobiography or has been extensively edited by the subject or by someone connected to the subject. (August 2008) This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (August 2008)
Can you please help me understand?
I appreciate your response and time.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 17:38, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
I quite expected that some changes would be asked for, but I do not know what to change. Can you be more specific. Also I think it would help if I sent a drawing but I do not know how to do this. Any help would be appreciated as I have had no computer training and I am aged 77. The 'Blackburn Cycle' appears on most searches but no one seems to take much notice. If this technology is used it would go a long way to solve the worldwide Global Warming problem and I thought that this article might reach the academic world. Thank you
Anthony Blackburn
Blackburn cycle (
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16:09, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
I think my article is ideal for Wikipedia and should be of huge public interest as it would lead to very large CO2 reductions. Details have been sent to the Car Makers several times but their Engineers cannot enter into any correspondence because correspondence in other instances have been cited as evidence that manufacturers have copied inventions. I should be able to answer any doubts about this technology without legal complications. I have drafted minor changes to my article which I will try to paste. I would also like to attach a drawing if you can advise how I might do this.
Regards
Anthony Blackburn
Anthony Blackburn (
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05:21, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
I think the challenge I face in writing Draft:Roberta Grossman is that the subject is not often the main feature of independent articles. Rather, her films are the main subjects. So I have attempted to put in film reviews, such as one from "The Hollywood Reporter" for "Above and Beyond" which also mentions Roberta Grossman, the Director of the film.
"Interviews with pilots who flew these missions is one of the highlights of the film."<ref>{{cite web |last1=Scheck|first1=Frank|title=Above and Beyond: Film Review|url=http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/review/beyond-film-review-763585/|website=The Hollywood Reporter|publisher=The Hollywood Reporter|accessdate=1 January 2015}}</ref>
Unfortunately, I cannot figure out how to format this addition. It links to an external website which I know is a violation of your policies. Perhaps you can correct it if you have time.
Thank you again.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 22:55, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
After I learned how to insert citations with templates, I corrected the in-body external link that had temporarily appeared in the body of the text.
Ahurvitz2 ( talk) 13:46, 8 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac,
Thanks so much for talking the time to review my draft and suggesting for reliable sources. Could you please let me know if "reliable sources" refer to a link(s) under Reference in particular? I'm working on it, but just want to be sure I understand the way of doing it.
Zoe 1001Bookworm ( talk) 00:10, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
Thanks so much for your helpful suggestions and information, Primefac. I've done another revision and will resubmit it. Please point out any problems that I need to work on. Your time is really appreciated. 1001Bookworm ( talk) 03:33, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Thanks for your reply and advice. If you feel my article is not suitable for Wiki then I would accept that. I thought my web page would have started testing and development but I cannot trace any benefit and the same may be true here. It is difficult and expensive to test the ‘Blackburn Cycle’ properly. A new cylinder head casting is needed which is beyond the ability of Universities. You would like external confirmation and while I have replies from academics and others no one has actually seen or tested this concept other than myself, so they are not much help. Experts say things like it is the same as, or should be combined with, cylinder de-activation or there will be more friction with 8 strokes in the cycle, which is simply not true. You question notability – wow – what else is there which can reduce the CO2 emissions from cars worldwide by 30-50%. You think it may be too soon. My first ‘Blackburn Cycle’ patent was in 1991, so you can see there has not been much progress. I have excluded figures for efficiency gains because you or others might see them as exaggerated but these were reliable and accurate results. Please feel free to edit or alter my article. Whatever you or anyone else does cannot be worse than zero, which is the present status of this concept. I plan to delete the previous copy and paste the new. Best regards
Anthony Blackburn (
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08:16, 10 August 2015 (UTC)
158.69.146.202 ( talk) 01:52, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
Alright, we want to make sure whats the issue with Nethking's wikipedia? why is it getting declined tell us what we can do to make the article Valid?
Sir, I believe that Detox need to get accepted because fans may have a hard time finding Detox. I did before, so this page is perfect for Detox. They can know why it was cancelled & what songs where released from the album. Fans can also find out why it was delayed so many times.
Nastradumas 2001 (
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19:35, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
I am sorry to say that I find your site complicated and difficult to use. Am I in the correct space here? You seem to have 2 concerns. First I can confirm that I have no business and I am selling nothing. I want to get this new technology known and I would even welcome unauthorised use of my patents initially and hope to get some Royalties later. If you do not like a link to my web page you can delete it, but this would stop easy access to more detailed information for anyone who is interested.
Secondly you seem concerned with notability. Although this technology has been known to me for many years it is still unknown and untested by the academic community. Opinions without tests are of little value. If you can encourage independent tests this would be most welcome. I think your users should know that there is a more fuel efficient and lower CO2 alternative to the usual 4 stroke Otto Cycle engine. Please advise if more information or changes are required. Regards Anthony Blackburn ( talk) 08:44, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Anthony Blackburn (
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08:44, 15 August 2015 (UTC)
Never mind. Another user answered my question.
Jfleach ( talk) 21:34, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for your comments on my draft. I have added 6 published references at different positions in the text. I have also removed the unnecessary detail which you mentioned. I hope that the draft now meets the Wikipedia criteria. Davidwit ( talk) 15:31, 17 August 2015 (UTC) DavidWit
I saw your review of the Draft:Eduar Canizalez BLP. See the previously created Eduar Mafla Canizalez, which I have prodded as it is un-sourced. Couldn't find much in the way of sources either. 220 of Borg 10:11, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks for your help with Begunahi article!! Begunahi ( talk) 15:48, 18 August 2015 (UTC) |
Imasku ( talk) 15:53, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
There are no significant documents to prove the importance this band contributed to the blues music scene due to the time period. I am still trying to get access to pay per use information, finding third party resources is next to non - existent.. It is one reason the documentary film is being made. But this band is one of the fore runners to bringing the genre of blues music to Ontario. Imasku ( talk) 15:53, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
I have tried - I have spent days in archives. Its not there is what I am finding, even with Mr. Kendall's help trying to locate magazines. the time period just did not record what these fore runner bands did... they did not care. sadly Imasku ( talk) 15:59, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for your feedback on my submission of the page Jean Stevens. I have made several changes and I hope the page now meets the requirements for submission. I have re-saved the changes. I have also added to my user page to state that I am the editor/webmaster of Jean Stevens' website - she is my mother.
Nick Stevens (
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18:13, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Ellacomm (
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20:49, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
My article has been rejected and the reasons why do not make any sense. A lot of my work is in the middle east and is not documented on this site so it is difficult to reference it. The TV show I was on for over 2 years in Australia is also not listed as a reference so I could not attach it either. I have put the only show that was documented for reference on the wikipedia site.
Kindest regards Amira Celon
My article has been rejected and the reasons why do not make any sense. A lot of my work is in the middle east and is not documented on this site so it is difficult to reference it. The TV show I was on for over 2 years in Australia is also not listed as a reference so I could not reference it either. I have put the only show that was documented for reference on the wikipedia site. Kindly review it and see what is needed. It is also not a sales page - I have not selling anything there about myself - just documented the only reference I could find listed. Kindest regards Amira Celon — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ellacomm ( talk • contribs) 20:55, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
IT Enthusiast ( talk) 13:28, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for taking the time and reviewing the article, and for directing my attention to the username policy. The name was chosen in a haste and it has since been changed.
Once again thank you for your input, and please let me know if this resolves all the issues or if there are other details that i should work on before resubmitting the article.— Preceding unsigned comment added by IT Enthusiast ( talk • contribs) 14:28, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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so that people know who it was that made the comment.
Primefac (
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14:25, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
Dear Primefac
I refer to your review of my submission of the Draft:Oom Gielie se Dipbak. Thank you very much for your valuable feedback. I have sought to rectify the draft according to your recommendations and await your re-review of the draft. In particular, I have attempted to change the draft's layout and tone away from sounding and looking like an advertisement towards a more neutral encyclopedic statement and layout whilst trying not to dilute the subject content too much. Please feel free to advise me further on this. I have also reduced the draft's reliance on references to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed, again not trying to dilute the content and quality too much and I have also added one more independant source. I appreciate any comment in this regard. Please also advise if you feel that the draft article needs to be shortened even further in its entirety.
Kind Regards Pmf29 ( talk) 22:00, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
Kindly suggest if any further changes needed @ Draft:Sumaira Abdulali-- . Shlok talk . 08:12, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac
I have had my PA look at the formula to submit the article and I have tried to understand it myself. Neither of us can actually do it or understand anything. I need help other than - read the instructions - because we can't do it after reading everything. It is a limitation of our intelligence or the fact that we don't have a phd in Wikipedia matter. Kindly refer me to some who I can actually hire to submit my article in the correct way.
Many thanks Amira — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.189.189.116 ( talk) 23:18, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
I'm working on an article for a foundation of which I'm a board member, and I have that relationship disclosed on my user page. Do you think I should continue, or rather hand it off to a seasoned editor like you? I need advice - THANKS! Article is -- Draft: Begunahi Foundation USA Wenderfully ( talk) 17:00, 19 August 2015 (UTC)
Truly sorry, but I was editing my own post that someone had added to about their own issue. Never happen again. Wenderfully ( talk) 14:49, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi - I've deleted the submission under EWWDC and left the one under Selinaw53. These are two different versions of the draft and the one under Selina53 is the most recent. Please review that one instead. Thanks! ---- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Selinaw53 ( talk • contribs) 15:59, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, I am particularly new to Wikipedia stuff, just started making some pages. I need to know what CAN be reliable sources instead of STEAM? Review pages? Official Game pages? Please reply. Thanks anyways — Preceding unsigned comment added by Raibatsu ( talk • contribs) 11:51, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Mrinal Razdan (
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09:53, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac: Your explanation was very clear and accurate. I had to muddle through the page to find the location you indicated and it worked! The link has now been corrected to the Tanz/Wired article referenced in the wiki article.
Thank you for my edification on the procedure. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WikiSnickety ( talk • contribs) 20:34, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Good Morning,
In it's current 'edited' state, our page is missing the links to all local schools, institutions, and transit options. It is also missing all the images we uploaded. Can you please revert this back to its original state so that we can make the appropriate changes? Thank you in advance.
Miamicd11 ( talk) 13:46, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
You are invited to join the discussion at
Draft:Sumaira Abdulali. Thanks.
. Shlok
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14:10, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac - can you please give me an example how to correct what ever is wrong with this article? Is it not allowed to have links to a website ourside or wiki?
Best regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ottcla ( talk • contribs) 13:11, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Regarding your decline of this draft, there is actually a worse problem than the "unsourced" aspect you mentioned in the decline. It's a duplicate of the topic (and some is actually just cut'n'paste) of the existing Field-effect transistor article. Not sure what the AfC workflow is for this situation. But there's no point in leading the editor on in thinking the draft can become viable, but also to invite that editor to work on the existing article. DMacks ( talk) 04:47, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
. Shlok talk . 07:01, 22 August 2015 (UTC)
I want to forgive me, but not worth it, you are annoying me I understand. If you give me one last chance, I will be grateful, and maybe I can presume good faith, I have to go to the chapel or cathedral has been praying.
However, I have a reason to give:
I want you to forgive me.
I can not go back to Wikipedia for more than 20 weeks, until I refleccione
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:17, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
Bye — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk • contribs) 20:42, 23 August 2015 (UTC) }
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:51, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
I'm sorry
Thank you SineBot -- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 20:51, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac, You're a great person
Mikelief Artsymaine 21:03, 23 August 2015 (UTC)
I've addressed your concerns. It should be accepted. Cheers. 7&6=thirteen ( ☎) 16:17, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
if you agree and want to come back fine, but I must go
if you agree and want to come back fine, but I must go, God bless you, but you can not deny that I made some contributions
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( Talk) 19:56, 24 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk • contribs)
Thank you
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 23:14, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
I want to learn how to create my very firm, to avoid problems when go to any library.
Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 23:14, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for the feedback and overview Primefac. I removed, changed and added more independent sources as requested, as well as the addition of non-primary sources. I wasn't sure how many resubmissions are allowed which is why I'm writing through here, or shall I just hit the resubmit button?
121.223.187.37 ( talk) 05:06, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
Primefac - I made the modifications you suggested (adding independent reliable sources) and resubmit the article, I hope that's enough to provide indication of notability. Quick question, since there is another article with the same name, what would be the process to define whether a disambiguation page is needed? and if now, what article takes priority?
OS ( talk) 21:57, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
I request a re-review of the list as your reason why this list is unnecessary is that
List of PC games is "more than satisfactory for someone looking for highly-ranked games". I find that page un-satisfactory as I would need to go through each alphabetized page to see all of the games AND sort each list by it's MetaScore. This seems like too much hassle and it is much easier for acclaimed PC games to be stored in one page rather than twenty-seven.
GregorGuy (
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21:13, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
primefac you decide you want to re-edit wikipedia or better I hope that everything is resolved. If I must be presumed good faith by Obias reasons.
Well, so, no problem
-- Mikelief Artsymaine ( talk) 15:21, 25 August 2015 (UTC)
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Primefac, you starred really you, congratulations, leave good comments are quite valid
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this is my first article i even don't know how to write the wiki article in proper way kindly do help me & edit anything you want cite the source accordingly..please do not delete the page
Legacy2015 ( talk) 09:22, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
There are many additional secondary sources establishing notability, which I could potentially provide, but it seemed awkward to force reference to them into the article? Please let me know what you think needs to be added and how. Thanks. -- CamEngTeacher ( talk) 09:41, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
CamEngTeacher ( talk) 09:41, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi there,
You mentioned in your comment that wiki page has to be about what others also say about the company. When I had put that, the other reviewers rejected it saying that it looked like an ad. For eg., based on the below link (one such media that carried Dalal Times story) I had written 'Dalal Times is being recognized as a knowledge platform for investors' However, this also got rejected on the grounds that it looks like an ad. So is it okay to use other media quotes and put on wiki page? Should i change it back? http://www.moneycontrol.com/news/business/dalal-times-a-platform-to-spread-knowledge-among-investors_1368590.html — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sonalkumbhat ( talk • contribs) 09:34, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Draft:Twist with the Ventures - This is my first article submitted; I have added some additional references as requested. I am going to re-submit it. If it is inadequate, please assist and be specific. I have read the "referencing" page before and again today. I am wary of over-referencing such a short article. Frankzappatwin ( talk) 12:49, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
Frankzappatwin, Wikipedia can't be used as a reference, because it's user-generated content. You've properly resubmitted the draft, though. You're not a pest, you're learning, there's a difference! Primefac ( talk) 19:06, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
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I was editing the page from one window and hadn't opened up another Wikipedia window between when I started doing that and when you posted on the talk page. You absolutely can change the maps back if you'd like. I feel pretty bad about the whole thing. Immortal Z ( talk) 17:46, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
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Yongsheng Gao ( talk) 23:04, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
Thanks for revising my page. I have improved that page according to your comments. Could you please have a look that is Okay or not. Thanks for valuable time and looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards.
Yongsheng.
Thanks for the feedback on my Shoppertainment post.
I think I can wrangle enough independent references to show that Shoppertainment is now a "term of art" ...
What is the ebst way to supply these references to you?
Willg2763 ( talk) 00:12, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi, and thanks for the comment Primefac. You are quite right, and indeed I will delete the extra information. I only keep it in the draft, for the time being, as an example to help me build the article (I am still learning). When finished with the draft (first 4 chapters), I will delete the example article. Thanks for the heads up. Cheers Celdomi ( talk) 17:47, 9 September 2015 (UTC) prefix:User talk:Primefac/
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Thank you for your help Primefac....I would not have known how to handle my situation without your help. InterestedCanadian ( talk) 17:50, 10 September 2015 (UTC) |
Hi,
These two Wikipedia entries are on two different subjects. The Clan Irvine entry is focused on the Irvines of Drum, David Irvine of Drum is 26th Baron, who are the Irvines in the Highlands. Clan Irving are in the Borders and the Wikipedia entry has a paragraph clearly stating the differences between the two. This is also reflected in the Clan Irvine entry. Can you please re-review the article with these differences in mind?
Many Thanks
ClanIrving (
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16:31, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
This article was denied because of what were judged as inadequate references. I would like to discuss this decision as I believe that all references used in this article are supporting:
1. The notability of Richard Wilcox in his field of activity. In this regard, it is important to realize that the there is limited distinction between Richard Wilcox and its projects for food security such as African Risk Capacity.
2. Statements are made in the articles in terms of past, present and future activities link to Richard Wilcox. These references are especially relevant since there is, for example, no wikipage on African Risk Capacity. When such a page is created, it will be natural to reduce the amount of references on Richard Wilcox and simply refer to it.
Please re-review as the sourcing is not as general as described by Lamona, it is instead extremely relevant to the global understanding Mr Wilcox's activities that made him a notable diplomat.
Davidmaslo (
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10:32, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi Primefac and thanks for the replay. As already agreed with Sam my list could be considered as a WP:SALAT. You can find similar approach on List of large sailing vessels, List of schooners and List of clipper ships. Tell me what you think and if for you is ok to re-re-submit. Thanks! The Weatherman ( talk) 18:02, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
Hello! I have addressed the concerns expressed by the reviewer, and have added citations to my submission.
74.136.225.42 ( talk) 03:22, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
74.136.225.42 ( talk) 03:22, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
There isn't much information available for this player other than the CFL.ca profile page, the Team player profile page and
one article
http://cfl.ca/roster/show/id/8305
http://ticats.ca/player/jay-langa
Dwj7738 (
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11:05, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
http://thechronicleherald.ca/sports/1253896-jonathan-langa-locks-up-cis-honour
Dwj7738 ( talk) 11:05, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
Please discuss with your colleagues whether you're expecting too much from countries of the South, where newspaper articles show prominence and are all that can be reasonably expected in the case of many prominent people who would be covered more amply in the affluent North, where book publication is far more common and cost-effective. Jzsj ( talk) 15:30, 16 September 2015 (UTC)