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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:34, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
Hello Mtaradash. Thank you for your recent addition to our article about Galileo Galilei. I notice in a couple of places you have used “lead” as past tense of the verb “to lead”. In fact, the past tense of lead is “led”. (This contrasts with the verb “to read” because the past tense of “read” remains unchanged as “read”; it’s past tense isn’t “red”.) Happy editing. Dolphin ( t) 02:58, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
I have removed your edit because its a synopsis of the topic inserted in the middle of the section covering the topic and it is mostly redundant: Aristotelian point of view, Kepler's supernova, Jupiter's moons (incorrectly described), science contradicting scripture, Tommaso Caccini, interactions with Pope Urban VIII are all covered elsewhere in the article. I note it is well written and well sourced, you just need to work on integrating material in context instead of creating stand alone paragraphs. Noaccountaccount ( talk) 15:39, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
This user is a student editor in Muhlenberg_College/Science_Communication_(Fall_2019) . |
Hello, Mtaradash, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 18:34, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
Hello Mtaradash. Thank you for your recent addition to our article about Galileo Galilei. I notice in a couple of places you have used “lead” as past tense of the verb “to lead”. In fact, the past tense of lead is “led”. (This contrasts with the verb “to read” because the past tense of “read” remains unchanged as “read”; it’s past tense isn’t “red”.) Happy editing. Dolphin ( t) 02:58, 9 December 2019 (UTC)
I have removed your edit because its a synopsis of the topic inserted in the middle of the section covering the topic and it is mostly redundant: Aristotelian point of view, Kepler's supernova, Jupiter's moons (incorrectly described), science contradicting scripture, Tommaso Caccini, interactions with Pope Urban VIII are all covered elsewhere in the article. I note it is well written and well sourced, you just need to work on integrating material in context instead of creating stand alone paragraphs. Noaccountaccount ( talk) 15:39, 9 December 2019 (UTC)