Good morning!-- Mandy573 ( talk) 15:03, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:40, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
Major Points It appears that the page on Alzheimer type II astrocytes has not been worked on in the sandbox; what is currently in the sandbox is identical to the original page so I am unable to give a proper review of what has been done. However, based off of what is available so far, the page on Alzheimer type II astrocytes needs more work. The article could benefit from a more in depth explanation of what Alzheimer type II astrocytes are, their significance, and their mechanisms of action. It might also be useful to explain how these astrocytes are pathological. Sections could also be made, such as for explaining how Alzheimer type II astrocytes are present in both hepatic encephalopathy and Wilson's disease. Because not much has been done, I am unable to see the direction of which the page is going.
Minor Points The citations are not formatted properly and need to be fixed. The reference section of the page is also missing. Yu.ste ( talk) 04:01, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
I am not sure a review would be very helpful at this point in your drafting, given that there are only a few sentences. Please let me know when you have expanded the article and I will review it then.
Dmirabito12 ( talk) 04:09, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
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Yu.ste ( talk) 05:43, 22 November 2015 (UTC)
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Good morning!-- Mandy573 ( talk) 15:03, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Guyana65, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please complete the student training, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) ( talk) 20:40, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
Major Points It appears that the page on Alzheimer type II astrocytes has not been worked on in the sandbox; what is currently in the sandbox is identical to the original page so I am unable to give a proper review of what has been done. However, based off of what is available so far, the page on Alzheimer type II astrocytes needs more work. The article could benefit from a more in depth explanation of what Alzheimer type II astrocytes are, their significance, and their mechanisms of action. It might also be useful to explain how these astrocytes are pathological. Sections could also be made, such as for explaining how Alzheimer type II astrocytes are present in both hepatic encephalopathy and Wilson's disease. Because not much has been done, I am unable to see the direction of which the page is going.
Minor Points The citations are not formatted properly and need to be fixed. The reference section of the page is also missing. Yu.ste ( talk) 04:01, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
I am not sure a review would be very helpful at this point in your drafting, given that there are only a few sentences. Please let me know when you have expanded the article and I will review it then.
Dmirabito12 ( talk) 04:09, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
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Yu.ste ( talk) 05:43, 22 November 2015 (UTC)
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