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{{proposed deletion/dated}}
notice. IRIS is an organization which operates in south and south/east Asia, not only Cambodia. It's an incredibly important organization providing a vital support to some of the less fortunate living in the region. As the organization appears to suffer from a limited web presence, it is crucial that the organization continues to be listed in Wikipedia. Instead of deleting the article, I suggest that the one who added the {{proposed deletion/dated}}
notice in the first place, instead spends some time to develop the article. Many thanks for your understanding.
Griberg
12:25, 20 August 2012 (UTC)A discussion is taking place as to whether the article International Resources for the Improvement of Sight is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/International Resources for the Improvement of Sight until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion template from the top of the article. Stuartyeates ( talk) 20:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for your contributions to A General Theory of Violence. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability and it appears to be an original research essay. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. microbiologyMarcus ( petri dish) 18:22, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
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The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Insecurity Insight until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
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Goldsztajn ( talk) 10:07, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
Dear Griberg, there is no difference between revision 1183594493 where you were asked to address original research concerns and revision 1192459974, the revision where you moved it to mainspace yourself. You haven't addressed the issues of the AfC reviewer, namely that this is original research and needs to be cited by sources which verify the claims you make. If you believe this is the right title, then you need to cite multiple reliable, independent sources which specifically say "A General Theory of Violence". I also strongly recommend to go through the WP:AfC process again when you think the draft is ready to be reviewed again, as it will reduce the chance of being moved back to a draft again if approved. Darcyisverycute ( talk) 12:55, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
The Theory of Violence presented by Dr. Robin Coupland, Dr. Daniel Dobos, and Prof. Dr. Nathan Taback (University of Toronto) relates to any form of violence in any context.The Coupland citation you used in the draft is an offline source that I don't have access to, so it is impossible for me to verify this source. The Lucerne source then states
It is, therefore, a general theory of violence.-- implying that the original theory was not proposed under this name. At best, this is a primary source, as the Lucerne source is the only one that refers to it under this description. Due to lacking peer review or journal publication, I do not see the Lucerne video as a reliable source. In other words that means you would need to find two additional sources, published in peer reviwed journals, with independent authors and significant coverage of Lucerne's take on the theory and the specific name.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 19:23, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
The article International Resources for the Improvement of Sight has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:
While all contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, content or articles may be deleted for any of several reasons.
You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the {{proposed deletion/dated}}
notice, but please explain why in your
edit summary or on
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Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing {{proposed deletion/dated}}
will stop the
proposed deletion process, but other
deletion processes exist. In particular, the
speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and
articles for deletion allows discussion to reach
consensus for deletion.
Stuartyeates (
talk)
04:52, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
{{proposed deletion/dated}}
notice. IRIS is an organization which operates in south and south/east Asia, not only Cambodia. It's an incredibly important organization providing a vital support to some of the less fortunate living in the region. As the organization appears to suffer from a limited web presence, it is crucial that the organization continues to be listed in Wikipedia. Instead of deleting the article, I suggest that the one who added the {{proposed deletion/dated}}
notice in the first place, instead spends some time to develop the article. Many thanks for your understanding.
Griberg
12:25, 20 August 2012 (UTC)A discussion is taking place as to whether the article International Resources for the Improvement of Sight is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/International Resources for the Improvement of Sight until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion template from the top of the article. Stuartyeates ( talk) 20:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for your contributions to A General Theory of Violence. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it needs more sources to establish notability and it appears to be an original research essay. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. microbiologyMarcus ( petri dish) 18:22, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
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Hello, Griberg!
Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the
Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the
Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there!
Goldsztajn (
talk)
08:52, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
|
The article will be discussed at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Insecurity Insight until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.
Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article until the discussion has finished.
Goldsztajn ( talk) 10:07, 5 November 2023 (UTC)
Dear Griberg, there is no difference between revision 1183594493 where you were asked to address original research concerns and revision 1192459974, the revision where you moved it to mainspace yourself. You haven't addressed the issues of the AfC reviewer, namely that this is original research and needs to be cited by sources which verify the claims you make. If you believe this is the right title, then you need to cite multiple reliable, independent sources which specifically say "A General Theory of Violence". I also strongly recommend to go through the WP:AfC process again when you think the draft is ready to be reviewed again, as it will reduce the chance of being moved back to a draft again if approved. Darcyisverycute ( talk) 12:55, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
The Theory of Violence presented by Dr. Robin Coupland, Dr. Daniel Dobos, and Prof. Dr. Nathan Taback (University of Toronto) relates to any form of violence in any context.The Coupland citation you used in the draft is an offline source that I don't have access to, so it is impossible for me to verify this source. The Lucerne source then states
It is, therefore, a general theory of violence.-- implying that the original theory was not proposed under this name. At best, this is a primary source, as the Lucerne source is the only one that refers to it under this description. Due to lacking peer review or journal publication, I do not see the Lucerne video as a reliable source. In other words that means you would need to find two additional sources, published in peer reviwed journals, with independent authors and significant coverage of Lucerne's take on the theory and the specific name.
Hello, Griberg. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that
Draft:A General Theory of Violence, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months
may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please
edit it again or
request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot ( talk) 20:06, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Hello, Griberg. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, " A General Theory of Violence".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 19:23, 11 July 2024 (UTC)