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I'm afraid I have only just discovered that way back on 8 September an email arrived from you, and went into my spam folder. I don't know why that was: it doesn't look like spam to me. Right now I don't have time to check it, and if it's too late to do anything about it, I can only say I'm sorry. I'll look at it as soon as I can. The editor who uses the pseudonym " JamesBWatson" ( talk) 14:09, 2 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I am requesting a re-review because I feel the article does show the notability of the subject. I was hoping you could reference a live article on wikipedia "Michael Kitces" who is of a similar background/notability as my subject. That article was approved as notable. Thank you very much for your help.
Hello-
Thank you for the feedback on the Jeff Nicholson page. I am looking into making the suggested changes to the page. While I do that, I wanted to show you the old version of the page- it has been significantly revised already, I'm not sure if you were able to check it out. Here's a link: http://deletionpedia.org/en/Jeff_Nicholson Thank you for your time, Vance VanceJordan ( talk) 01:04, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Flat Out.
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Hi FlatOut, thanks for taking time to review Rentalcars.com draft. I think i have removed all lines of text that could be seen as a sales message. I will resubmit the amended draft version and look forward to feedback. If you can highlight which phrases sound most sales like it would be much appreciated. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by NutsAboutTravel ( talk • contribs) 08:19, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:David Cameron. Legobot ( talk) 00:01, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi -- Thanks for reviewing my draft article on the new DxO ONE. Can you give me any specifics on what you found objectionable in the article? I've worked to pattern it closely after the pages on many other current cameras. All data is from major published sources (WSJ, etc.) and both positive and negative reviews are cited. Thanks for any help & clarity on this, as I'd love to fix the article.
GeekPhotog (
talk) 01:33, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Dear Flat Out, for this page, I've already got OTRS license for a material that may cause copyright problem but is still rejected. Could you please specify which part of the article is not appropriate so that I can make improvements. Thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smartlife1992 ( talk • contribs) 03:49, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
The article is produced by my group and some of the content may appear at other sources. Could you please kindly point out the source so I can get a license and make a revision accordingly? Smartlife1992 ( talk) 03:58, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
I have added some content and reliable resources. Please, check. Karen Douglass ( talk) 14:31, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Flat Out,
Where would I find the "notes" you refer to in the October 9 decision?
aljmike — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aljmike ( talk • contribs) 16:20, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello I understand that I have made quite a few mistakes while creating the page that you have declined. I will edit the page and make it sound more neutral without any peacock terms and use more reliable sources. Could you help me with the bit where it needs to written in a formal tone expected of wikipedia articles. I am unable to understand what changes I need to make to be able to meet that guideline.
Many Thanks Theexpert001 ( talk) 09:10, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
Costumed performers from the 2006 Bristol Renaissance Faire
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I am the author of the text of the Ecusta Trail proposed entry. What are and where would I find the "notes" you refer to in the October 9 decision? Thanks. 17:49, 11 October 2015 (UTC) Aljmike ( talk)aljmike
Hi Flat Out, Last month you denied my submission on a page for 360 Finance on the grounds that it reads a lot like advertising. Thanks so much for the feedback, I've been going back over it since to try and improve it - I was wondering if it's possible if you have any more feedback or advice on how to better write it so it's not labelled as advertising? I welcome any and all feedback, and thanks again! Aconnellan ( talk) 21:40, 13 October 2015 (UTC)
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It is not appropriate to add a Facebook link for a specific group or organization being referenced, even when they do not have their own website? — Preceding unsigned comment added by TBrenen ( talk •
Dear Flat Out, Thanks so much for reviewing my draft:Asep_Kambali. Yeah, that is my first article :") I just learning wikipedia for develop my writing skill. Please help and advice me to write with better. I dont understand how wikipedia works, so I wish you will be my mentor ini here? Best regards, BallyYamismis — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ballyyamismis ( talk • contribs) 03:31, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
The Citation Barnstar | |
Thanks a lot Ballyyamismis ( talk) 04:23, 15 October 2015 (UTC) |
Ice hockey is an example of a
team sport. Pictured is an 1893 ice hockey match at Victoria Rink, Montreal.
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Hey, I am trying to be published this Draft: Cultural Education Centre, AMU Aligarh, but it has been declined many times. Plz approve this draft, for it is a notable institution. Or tell me how to improve this article in short. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mohd Sarim Ashrafi ( talk • contribs) 05:59, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I was the one who created the page SystemHouse33. This band has been around for more than 11 years, got reviews from top Indian newspapers, Rolling Stone magazine (India) wrote an article on them, and there are numerous online webzines and blogs that have interviewed the band members and written about them. I do not see why this page has been declined due to "not enough reliable resources". I have added over 2 dozen resources through links at the end of the article. I feel the reviewer was biased because this is an "Indian" band, so apparently it doesn't deserve a spot on Wikipedia. There are numerous other pages I have come across that barely have a couple of lines and yet they have been approved by a so-called reviewer. Please carry out some research yourself about SystemHouse33 before you decide to just take it down. I don't think an article I took all day to write and numerous weeks to research for should be rejected by ONE reviewer. How can I be sure that said reviewer is not biased?! Thanks, Komal Komalkimkevin ( talk) 03:34, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
what up with all the edits on Chris Whitey Sims page? the imdb link to "bring it on", the Heavy Blues link are all totally valid AFAIK also modified Leaving Trains page to include vocals and guitar to Chris Sims entry — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:BD1D:4370:2D1E:CDF0:C57E:B9D8 ( talk) 06:30, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello, I submit the mydiveo page for review and it was declined and I wanted to know what I should do or how I should edit it in order for it to be accepted. I also wanted to know if there was a way to fix the title of "mydiveo" to make all letters lowercase. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.103.145.168 ( talk) 20:25, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
With this ever dramatic world and winter coming, here's a cup of tea to alleviate your day! This e-tea's remains have been e- composted SwisterTwister talk 05:50, 22 October 2015 (UTC) |
The article which I created refers to the band which is emerging as a mainstream sensation now a days. Their music videos are now playing on different music channels not only in Pakistan but in India also. They have scored the OST for a well-known drama serial Ru Baru which was being played under the banner of Hum TV which is one of the biggest entertainment channels in Pakistan. they have also featured with Pakistan's top model Mathira. Their souncloud's plays are reaching at their peaks. They are going to be signed with Pakistan's biggest record label EMI. Are these things not notable as stated by you??? Please re-review the whole article and help me out to improve its contents. Thanks
I read your message on the draft. The thing is I am new on wikipedia. I made that article by looking at other articles. So my request to you is that iff you can do anything so as to improve the article then I would be really thankfull. Draft: Umer Jubapu. This is the only guy who is a singer, dancer and a stunt rider all at once from his place. He is famous in Dubai, Saudi Arabic and places in the middle east. People love him and wanna know about him. Thank you.
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Gun laws in the United States by state. Legobot ( talk) 00:04, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I was wondering why this page was declined? You have just written that it can be improved, but what exactly don't you like about it? Before it lacked references, but that has been updated. Unfortunately there wasn't a tone of media coverage for this series, so it is difficult to find any more articles (It is a real series ect, if that is what you are worried about?). And other pages that have gone through successfully were similar to this, so I don't understand why it hasn't gone through. If you could please let me know, then I can hopefully fix it so it can be successful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MovieJunkie52 ( talk • contribs) 06:37, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello- Thank you for your recent (and original) feedback, it made things clearer for me. I figured out how to put the web links right in the footnote section rather than duplicated in the external links section. That looks much cleaner, thanks. I think that and your original request for more references is covered (virtually every statement has a reference now). The other editor who declined it said it needed more verifiable news sources and less interviews. I would like to point out that most of the history referred to here is pre-internet, so it only seems logical that my seven news print references outnumbers my few web news references. With 20 references for five paragraphs, I think this is really solid article when I compare it to other similar wiki articles. Do you agree and can you release it now? Thank you for your time. VanceJordan ( talk) 23:43, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out, I'm not sure I understand the issue. LaMona requested more independent sources to establish notability. Those were added and now it's flagged for reading like an advertisement. Can you please be more specific about what you consider not being from a neutral point of view?
PinkBlueGreenPowder (
talk) 17:22, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi you recently declined to accept my article for Gridding saying there eneded to be independent evidence of it. I had included in my revised submissin a link to the Sunday Independant Newspaper including refernece to The group and what they do, including an interview with one of the founders. I also included a link to another newspaper that reported on the annual meeting of memebers of the group, including and interview and photographs. I am not entirely sure what else you require, could you offer soem guidance please. The group currently has 253 members from across the globe. Danny
Fannydin (
talk) 09:27, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out, I discovered you declined the post on 'Page Jump' because you feel it is not notable to be included in an encyclopedia such as Wikipedia. Well, I don't know how notable you would have wanted such a universal way of enhancing user experience on long content. I later had a chat with a member who advise I should move the books I referenced above a sign command so that it will be visible. I don't know how to do this. I was on a research work when I discovered 'Page Jump' (on web page) was not listed on Wikipedia so I decided to help in my little way. Please, I would like you to help in this if you can and then add necessary referencing that would make it verifiable. Thanks. Francistoke — Preceding unsigned comment added by Francistoke ( talk • contribs) 13:35, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out. Thanks for your comment regarding the article being way too long. I'm fairly new to wiki editing, but would the use of collapsible tables be a preferred alteration, at least for the larger tables, to reduce the length of the article? Open to any other ideas also. Cheers. Gricehead ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 09:40, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback on the first draft of the article. This is my first submission to Wikipedia, but I do not think it will be my last. I have made some changes to the article be more "neutral" in my description of the subject and have added additional quotes from credible sources.
Michael Sullivant (
talk) 16:22, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
I have added some referral link which prove my company existence please check that an let me know for farther information — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kutubuddinkhulna ( talk • contribs) 05:10, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
you have declined my a page here's the link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Way2Wealth_Brokers_Private_Limited You have mentioned it lacks references, i have provided many references as per my understanding. would appreciate if you can help me in identifying the areas for which you need references. Arundhatisingh ( talk) 04:50, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
your references aren't up to the standard required by wikipedia, notices, announcements, press releases etc are not reliable sources. Please also read WP:COI. Flat Out ( talk) 05:39, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
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The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Kim Davis (county clerk). Legobot ( talk) 00:00, 1 October 2015 (UTC)
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Wikipedia talk:Categorization of people. Legobot ( talk) 00:01, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
I'm afraid I have only just discovered that way back on 8 September an email arrived from you, and went into my spam folder. I don't know why that was: it doesn't look like spam to me. Right now I don't have time to check it, and if it's too late to do anything about it, I can only say I'm sorry. I'll look at it as soon as I can. The editor who uses the pseudonym " JamesBWatson" ( talk) 14:09, 2 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I am requesting a re-review because I feel the article does show the notability of the subject. I was hoping you could reference a live article on wikipedia "Michael Kitces" who is of a similar background/notability as my subject. That article was approved as notable. Thank you very much for your help.
Hello-
Thank you for the feedback on the Jeff Nicholson page. I am looking into making the suggested changes to the page. While I do that, I wanted to show you the old version of the page- it has been significantly revised already, I'm not sure if you were able to check it out. Here's a link: http://deletionpedia.org/en/Jeff_Nicholson Thank you for your time, Vance VanceJordan ( talk) 01:04, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello, Flat Out.
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Hi FlatOut, thanks for taking time to review Rentalcars.com draft. I think i have removed all lines of text that could be seen as a sales message. I will resubmit the amended draft version and look forward to feedback. If you can highlight which phrases sound most sales like it would be much appreciated. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by NutsAboutTravel ( talk • contribs) 08:19, 8 October 2015 (UTC)
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:David Cameron. Legobot ( talk) 00:01, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi -- Thanks for reviewing my draft article on the new DxO ONE. Can you give me any specifics on what you found objectionable in the article? I've worked to pattern it closely after the pages on many other current cameras. All data is from major published sources (WSJ, etc.) and both positive and negative reviews are cited. Thanks for any help & clarity on this, as I'd love to fix the article.
GeekPhotog (
talk) 01:33, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Dear Flat Out, for this page, I've already got OTRS license for a material that may cause copyright problem but is still rejected. Could you please specify which part of the article is not appropriate so that I can make improvements. Thanks, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smartlife1992 ( talk • contribs) 03:49, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
The article is produced by my group and some of the content may appear at other sources. Could you please kindly point out the source so I can get a license and make a revision accordingly? Smartlife1992 ( talk) 03:58, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
I have added some content and reliable resources. Please, check. Karen Douglass ( talk) 14:31, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Flat Out,
Where would I find the "notes" you refer to in the October 9 decision?
aljmike — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aljmike ( talk • contribs) 16:20, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello I understand that I have made quite a few mistakes while creating the page that you have declined. I will edit the page and make it sound more neutral without any peacock terms and use more reliable sources. Could you help me with the bit where it needs to written in a formal tone expected of wikipedia articles. I am unable to understand what changes I need to make to be able to meet that guideline.
Many Thanks Theexpert001 ( talk) 09:10, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
Costumed performers from the 2006 Bristol Renaissance Faire
The following is WikiProject Today's articles for improvement's weekly selection: Please be bold and help to improve this article! Previous selections: Musical composition • Personal finance Get involved with the TAFI project. You can: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: EuroCarGT ( talk) 00:17, 12 October 2015 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) on behalf of WikiProject TAFI • |
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I am the author of the text of the Ecusta Trail proposed entry. What are and where would I find the "notes" you refer to in the October 9 decision? Thanks. 17:49, 11 October 2015 (UTC) Aljmike ( talk)aljmike
Hi Flat Out, Last month you denied my submission on a page for 360 Finance on the grounds that it reads a lot like advertising. Thanks so much for the feedback, I've been going back over it since to try and improve it - I was wondering if it's possible if you have any more feedback or advice on how to better write it so it's not labelled as advertising? I welcome any and all feedback, and thanks again! Aconnellan ( talk) 21:40, 13 October 2015 (UTC)
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Volkswagen emissions violations. Legobot ( talk) 00:01, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
It is not appropriate to add a Facebook link for a specific group or organization being referenced, even when they do not have their own website? — Preceding unsigned comment added by TBrenen ( talk •
Dear Flat Out, Thanks so much for reviewing my draft:Asep_Kambali. Yeah, that is my first article :") I just learning wikipedia for develop my writing skill. Please help and advice me to write with better. I dont understand how wikipedia works, so I wish you will be my mentor ini here? Best regards, BallyYamismis — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ballyyamismis ( talk • contribs) 03:31, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
The Citation Barnstar | |
Thanks a lot Ballyyamismis ( talk) 04:23, 15 October 2015 (UTC) |
Ice hockey is an example of a
team sport. Pictured is an 1893 ice hockey match at Victoria Rink, Montreal.
The following is WikiProject Today's articles for improvement's weekly selection: Please be bold and help to improve this article! Previous selections: Costume • Musical composition Get involved with the TAFI project. You can: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: EuroCarGT ( talk) 00:06, 19 October 2015 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) on behalf of WikiProject TAFI • |
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Hey, I am trying to be published this Draft: Cultural Education Centre, AMU Aligarh, but it has been declined many times. Plz approve this draft, for it is a notable institution. Or tell me how to improve this article in short. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mohd Sarim Ashrafi ( talk • contribs) 05:59, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I was the one who created the page SystemHouse33. This band has been around for more than 11 years, got reviews from top Indian newspapers, Rolling Stone magazine (India) wrote an article on them, and there are numerous online webzines and blogs that have interviewed the band members and written about them. I do not see why this page has been declined due to "not enough reliable resources". I have added over 2 dozen resources through links at the end of the article. I feel the reviewer was biased because this is an "Indian" band, so apparently it doesn't deserve a spot on Wikipedia. There are numerous other pages I have come across that barely have a couple of lines and yet they have been approved by a so-called reviewer. Please carry out some research yourself about SystemHouse33 before you decide to just take it down. I don't think an article I took all day to write and numerous weeks to research for should be rejected by ONE reviewer. How can I be sure that said reviewer is not biased?! Thanks, Komal Komalkimkevin ( talk) 03:34, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
what up with all the edits on Chris Whitey Sims page? the imdb link to "bring it on", the Heavy Blues link are all totally valid AFAIK also modified Leaving Trains page to include vocals and guitar to Chris Sims entry — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:BD1D:4370:2D1E:CDF0:C57E:B9D8 ( talk) 06:30, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello, I submit the mydiveo page for review and it was declined and I wanted to know what I should do or how I should edit it in order for it to be accepted. I also wanted to know if there was a way to fix the title of "mydiveo" to make all letters lowercase. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.103.145.168 ( talk) 20:25, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
With this ever dramatic world and winter coming, here's a cup of tea to alleviate your day! This e-tea's remains have been e- composted SwisterTwister talk 05:50, 22 October 2015 (UTC) |
The article which I created refers to the band which is emerging as a mainstream sensation now a days. Their music videos are now playing on different music channels not only in Pakistan but in India also. They have scored the OST for a well-known drama serial Ru Baru which was being played under the banner of Hum TV which is one of the biggest entertainment channels in Pakistan. they have also featured with Pakistan's top model Mathira. Their souncloud's plays are reaching at their peaks. They are going to be signed with Pakistan's biggest record label EMI. Are these things not notable as stated by you??? Please re-review the whole article and help me out to improve its contents. Thanks
I read your message on the draft. The thing is I am new on wikipedia. I made that article by looking at other articles. So my request to you is that iff you can do anything so as to improve the article then I would be really thankfull. Draft: Umer Jubapu. This is the only guy who is a singer, dancer and a stunt rider all at once from his place. He is famous in Dubai, Saudi Arabic and places in the middle east. People love him and wanna know about him. Thank you.
The feedback request service is asking for participation in this request for comment on Talk:Gun laws in the United States by state. Legobot ( talk) 00:04, 27 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I was wondering why this page was declined? You have just written that it can be improved, but what exactly don't you like about it? Before it lacked references, but that has been updated. Unfortunately there wasn't a tone of media coverage for this series, so it is difficult to find any more articles (It is a real series ect, if that is what you are worried about?). And other pages that have gone through successfully were similar to this, so I don't understand why it hasn't gone through. If you could please let me know, then I can hopefully fix it so it can be successful. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MovieJunkie52 ( talk • contribs) 06:37, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hello- Thank you for your recent (and original) feedback, it made things clearer for me. I figured out how to put the web links right in the footnote section rather than duplicated in the external links section. That looks much cleaner, thanks. I think that and your original request for more references is covered (virtually every statement has a reference now). The other editor who declined it said it needed more verifiable news sources and less interviews. I would like to point out that most of the history referred to here is pre-internet, so it only seems logical that my seven news print references outnumbers my few web news references. With 20 references for five paragraphs, I think this is really solid article when I compare it to other similar wiki articles. Do you agree and can you release it now? Thank you for your time. VanceJordan ( talk) 23:43, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out, I'm not sure I understand the issue. LaMona requested more independent sources to establish notability. Those were added and now it's flagged for reading like an advertisement. Can you please be more specific about what you consider not being from a neutral point of view?
PinkBlueGreenPowder (
talk) 17:22, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi you recently declined to accept my article for Gridding saying there eneded to be independent evidence of it. I had included in my revised submissin a link to the Sunday Independant Newspaper including refernece to The group and what they do, including an interview with one of the founders. I also included a link to another newspaper that reported on the annual meeting of memebers of the group, including and interview and photographs. I am not entirely sure what else you require, could you offer soem guidance please. The group currently has 253 members from across the globe. Danny
Fannydin (
talk) 09:27, 24 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out, I discovered you declined the post on 'Page Jump' because you feel it is not notable to be included in an encyclopedia such as Wikipedia. Well, I don't know how notable you would have wanted such a universal way of enhancing user experience on long content. I later had a chat with a member who advise I should move the books I referenced above a sign command so that it will be visible. I don't know how to do this. I was on a research work when I discovered 'Page Jump' (on web page) was not listed on Wikipedia so I decided to help in my little way. Please, I would like you to help in this if you can and then add necessary referencing that would make it verifiable. Thanks. Francistoke — Preceding unsigned comment added by Francistoke ( talk • contribs) 13:35, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
Hi Flat Out. Thanks for your comment regarding the article being way too long. I'm fairly new to wiki editing, but would the use of collapsible tables be a preferred alteration, at least for the larger tables, to reduce the length of the article? Open to any other ideas also. Cheers. Gricehead ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 09:40, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback on the first draft of the article. This is my first submission to Wikipedia, but I do not think it will be my last. I have made some changes to the article be more "neutral" in my description of the subject and have added additional quotes from credible sources.
Michael Sullivant (
talk) 16:22, 28 October 2015 (UTC)
I have added some referral link which prove my company existence please check that an let me know for farther information — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kutubuddinkhulna ( talk • contribs) 05:10, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
you have declined my a page here's the link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Way2Wealth_Brokers_Private_Limited You have mentioned it lacks references, i have provided many references as per my understanding. would appreciate if you can help me in identifying the areas for which you need references. Arundhatisingh ( talk) 04:50, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
your references aren't up to the standard required by wikipedia, notices, announcements, press releases etc are not reliable sources. Please also read WP:COI. Flat Out ( talk) 05:39, 30 October 2015 (UTC)