The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:24, 24 September 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Fitindia (
talk). Self-nominated at 20:02, 29 August 2017 (UTC).
@
Fitindia: New article, long enough, sourced, QPQ done, no copyvios seen. However,
the source says he spent nine months, not eleven, in jail. Which is it? --
Usernameunique (
talk) 19:27, 1 September 2017 (UTC)
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Usernameunique: yes I just corrected that and it was nine months not eleven. Thank you for getting that.
FITINDIA 19:41, 1 September 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I question the choice of hook for a BLP. Should the first line of the article say: Gilbert Mendonca is an Indian politician and convicted criminal? I don't think this hook fact belongs on the main page. BTW, a politician doesn't "fight" an election; he "contests" an election. 21:38, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
Hi,
Yoninah have changed fought to contested, thank you for pointing that out. Regarding the hook the only other interesting fact is that his wife and daughter were both elected mayors of
Mira-Bhayandar a municipality with a population of about 800,000.
FITINDIA 21:59, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
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Fitindia: well, people are notable for themselves, not their relatives' accomplishments – unless there's some way you could work it into a hooky hook, like about a "political family". Alternately, do you have any other information about his accomplishments while in office?
Yoninah (
talk) 22:12, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
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Yoninah: if you could give me a day I will do a bit of research and get back to you. Hope thats fine. Thank you
FITINDIA 22:23, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Yoninah: how does this sound?
FITINDIA 18:04, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Fitindia: thanks, but ALT1 isn't going to be so interesting to people who live outside
Mira-Bhayandar. I added some more sources to the article to get more material to work with. What do you think about:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:24, 24 September 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Fitindia (
talk). Self-nominated at 20:02, 29 August 2017 (UTC).
@
Fitindia: New article, long enough, sourced, QPQ done, no copyvios seen. However,
the source says he spent nine months, not eleven, in jail. Which is it? --
Usernameunique (
talk) 19:27, 1 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Usernameunique: yes I just corrected that and it was nine months not eleven. Thank you for getting that.
FITINDIA 19:41, 1 September 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I question the choice of hook for a BLP. Should the first line of the article say: Gilbert Mendonca is an Indian politician and convicted criminal? I don't think this hook fact belongs on the main page. BTW, a politician doesn't "fight" an election; he "contests" an election. 21:38, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
Hi,
Yoninah have changed fought to contested, thank you for pointing that out. Regarding the hook the only other interesting fact is that his wife and daughter were both elected mayors of
Mira-Bhayandar a municipality with a population of about 800,000.
FITINDIA 21:59, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Fitindia: well, people are notable for themselves, not their relatives' accomplishments – unless there's some way you could work it into a hooky hook, like about a "political family". Alternately, do you have any other information about his accomplishments while in office?
Yoninah (
talk) 22:12, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Yoninah: if you could give me a day I will do a bit of research and get back to you. Hope thats fine. Thank you
FITINDIA 22:23, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Yoninah: how does this sound?
FITINDIA 18:04, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
@
Fitindia: thanks, but ALT1 isn't going to be so interesting to people who live outside
Mira-Bhayandar. I added some more sources to the article to get more material to work with. What do you think about: