The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article is new enough, long enough, and appears to have no major issues. QPQ is done. The hook is interesting and cited, the only issue I have is that the fact comes from an interview with the artist. Are there other sources mentioning or showing this fact? Or could the hook be changed so it is clear the artist said this? Not influencing this review: I would recommend grouping some of source references at the end of a sentence instead of placing them after commas. – Editør (
talk) 20:16, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
It was my understanding that a claim like that is acceptable without attribution per
WP:ABOUTSELF; it is neither self-serving nor
WP:EXCEPTIONAL, although perhaps it should say 'trampolining in her bed' to better reflect the source.
ALT2: ... that Coupdekat's 2022 eight-track EP Imaginary Girls is less than fifteen and a half minutes long?--Launchballer 04:27, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
I don't think ALT1 and ALT2 are as interesting for DYK. Adding 'on her bed' would make the claim less exceptional and the interview not so much of an issue, so I suggest changing the hook to:
ALT3 ... that Coupdekat recorded the vocals for "It's Not You" while trampolining on her bed?
Do you agree? – Editør (
talk) 10:50, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Fine by me. Now I think about it, the hook should probably contain some context as to who Coupdekat is, so I propose:
ALT4: ... that the British musician Coupdekat recorded the vocals for "It's Not You" while trampolining on her bed?--Launchballer 10:59, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
I think
vocals already explains she is a musician and the quotation marks indicate it is a song title, so I will pass the hook ALT3. – Editør (
talk) 11:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article is new enough, long enough, and appears to have no major issues. QPQ is done. The hook is interesting and cited, the only issue I have is that the fact comes from an interview with the artist. Are there other sources mentioning or showing this fact? Or could the hook be changed so it is clear the artist said this? Not influencing this review: I would recommend grouping some of source references at the end of a sentence instead of placing them after commas. – Editør (
talk) 20:16, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
It was my understanding that a claim like that is acceptable without attribution per
WP:ABOUTSELF; it is neither self-serving nor
WP:EXCEPTIONAL, although perhaps it should say 'trampolining in her bed' to better reflect the source.
ALT2: ... that Coupdekat's 2022 eight-track EP Imaginary Girls is less than fifteen and a half minutes long?--Launchballer 04:27, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
I don't think ALT1 and ALT2 are as interesting for DYK. Adding 'on her bed' would make the claim less exceptional and the interview not so much of an issue, so I suggest changing the hook to:
ALT3 ... that Coupdekat recorded the vocals for "It's Not You" while trampolining on her bed?
Do you agree? – Editør (
talk) 10:50, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Fine by me. Now I think about it, the hook should probably contain some context as to who Coupdekat is, so I propose:
ALT4: ... that the British musician Coupdekat recorded the vocals for "It's Not You" while trampolining on her bed?--Launchballer 10:59, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
I think
vocals already explains she is a musician and the quotation marks indicate it is a song title, so I will pass the hook ALT3. – Editør (
talk) 11:03, 26 December 2023 (UTC)