The result was: promoted by —
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 23:45, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Allecher (
talk) 3:04 pm, Yesterday (UTC−7)
...And umpromoted by
Fram (
talk) 2:11 am, Today (UTC−7)
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5x expanded by Colonel Warden ( talk). Self nominated at 12:39, 29 April 2013 (UTC).
I have undone the promotion of this article, and removed it from the queue. The hook is not supported by the article; the hook discusses the wages of an apprentice, the article the wages of a journeyman (which is the stage you reach after you have been an apprentice). (The article should also be edited to make clear which of the Young 1999 sources is meant, as there are two different ones from the same author in that year, but that is a more minor point). Fram ( talk) 09:11, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
The source given indicates that the import ceased also in part due to the popularity of English creamware, not just the collusion of chinamen. Perhaps the hook can be rewritten to make this more clear? Fram ( talk) 08:05, 27 May 2013 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by —
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 23:45, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Allecher (
talk) 3:04 pm, Yesterday (UTC−7)
...And umpromoted by
Fram (
talk) 2:11 am, Today (UTC−7)
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5x expanded by Colonel Warden ( talk). Self nominated at 12:39, 29 April 2013 (UTC).
I have undone the promotion of this article, and removed it from the queue. The hook is not supported by the article; the hook discusses the wages of an apprentice, the article the wages of a journeyman (which is the stage you reach after you have been an apprentice). (The article should also be edited to make clear which of the Young 1999 sources is meant, as there are two different ones from the same author in that year, but that is a more minor point). Fram ( talk) 09:11, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
The source given indicates that the import ceased also in part due to the popularity of English creamware, not just the collusion of chinamen. Perhaps the hook can be rewritten to make this more clear? Fram ( talk) 08:05, 27 May 2013 (UTC)