The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 12:27, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
... that Nihonga artist Yumeji Takehisa was associated with several people involved in the
High Treason Incident? Source: "In May and June of 1910, the authorities conducted a nation-wide round-up of socialists and anarchists in the brutal crackdown on dissent that became the first stage of the notorious High Treason Incident, which saw a total of twelve accused sentenced to death and another twelve imprisoned for life on trumped-up charges of plotting to assassinate the Meiji emperor. In the five years that elapsed between 1905 (when his work first appeared in print in a socialist journal) and the High Treason Incident of 1910, Takehisa had established himself as a respected illustrator for mainstream and generally conservative publishing houses, including industry heavyweight, Hakubunkan. Nevertheless, he himself was interned and questioned for two days. When a number of his former Heiminsha colleagues were among the eleven men and one woman (Kanno Suga) convicted of high treason and executed on 24 and 25 January 1911, Takehisa held a wake at his Higashigoken-chō home."
ALT1:... that Nihonga artist Yumeji Takehisa was arrested in relation to the
High Treason Incident? Source: "In May and June of 1910, the authorities conducted a nation-wide round-up of socialists and anarchists in the brutal crackdown on dissent that became the first stage of the notorious High Treason Incident, which saw a total of twelve accused sentenced to death and another twelve imprisoned for life on trumped-up charges of plotting to assassinate the Meiji emperor. In the five years that elapsed between 1905 (when his work first appeared in print in a socialist journal) and the High Treason Incident of 1910, Takehisa had established himself as a respected illustrator for mainstream and generally conservative publishing houses, including industry heavyweight, Hakubunkan. Nevertheless, he himself was interned and questioned for two days. When a number of his former Heiminsha colleagues were among the eleven men and one woman (Kanno Suga) convicted of high treason and executed on 24 and 25 January 1911, Takehisa held a wake at his Higashigoken-chō home."
Hi, I came by to promote but found that the
High Treason Incident does not sound very hooky to me...perhaps there needs to be more context since it is quite a major incident involving the Emperor so how about mentioning him in the hook?
Mccunicano Thank you for a great article btw!
VincentLUFan (
talk) (
Kenton!) 17:24, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
@
Vincent60030:, thanks! I wrote a comment regarding your concern about the High Treason Incident above shortly after nominating this. I think the link to the incident should remain, but refer to it rather as "
a plot to assassinate the Japanese Emperor Meiji". I think readers should find that digestible enough. ⑉⑉Mccunicano☕️ 00:12, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
Ah I must have missed out on that too. Thank you Mccunicano! That works perfectly well and is surely to hook me!
VincentLUFan (
talk) (
Kenton!) 06:19, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
@
Mccunicano: It would be helpful to provide an updated hook for the promoter. I assume this is it?
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 12:27, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
... that Nihonga artist Yumeji Takehisa was associated with several people involved in the
High Treason Incident? Source: "In May and June of 1910, the authorities conducted a nation-wide round-up of socialists and anarchists in the brutal crackdown on dissent that became the first stage of the notorious High Treason Incident, which saw a total of twelve accused sentenced to death and another twelve imprisoned for life on trumped-up charges of plotting to assassinate the Meiji emperor. In the five years that elapsed between 1905 (when his work first appeared in print in a socialist journal) and the High Treason Incident of 1910, Takehisa had established himself as a respected illustrator for mainstream and generally conservative publishing houses, including industry heavyweight, Hakubunkan. Nevertheless, he himself was interned and questioned for two days. When a number of his former Heiminsha colleagues were among the eleven men and one woman (Kanno Suga) convicted of high treason and executed on 24 and 25 January 1911, Takehisa held a wake at his Higashigoken-chō home."
ALT1:... that Nihonga artist Yumeji Takehisa was arrested in relation to the
High Treason Incident? Source: "In May and June of 1910, the authorities conducted a nation-wide round-up of socialists and anarchists in the brutal crackdown on dissent that became the first stage of the notorious High Treason Incident, which saw a total of twelve accused sentenced to death and another twelve imprisoned for life on trumped-up charges of plotting to assassinate the Meiji emperor. In the five years that elapsed between 1905 (when his work first appeared in print in a socialist journal) and the High Treason Incident of 1910, Takehisa had established himself as a respected illustrator for mainstream and generally conservative publishing houses, including industry heavyweight, Hakubunkan. Nevertheless, he himself was interned and questioned for two days. When a number of his former Heiminsha colleagues were among the eleven men and one woman (Kanno Suga) convicted of high treason and executed on 24 and 25 January 1911, Takehisa held a wake at his Higashigoken-chō home."
Hi, I came by to promote but found that the
High Treason Incident does not sound very hooky to me...perhaps there needs to be more context since it is quite a major incident involving the Emperor so how about mentioning him in the hook?
Mccunicano Thank you for a great article btw!
VincentLUFan (
talk) (
Kenton!) 17:24, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
@
Vincent60030:, thanks! I wrote a comment regarding your concern about the High Treason Incident above shortly after nominating this. I think the link to the incident should remain, but refer to it rather as "
a plot to assassinate the Japanese Emperor Meiji". I think readers should find that digestible enough. ⑉⑉Mccunicano☕️ 00:12, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
Ah I must have missed out on that too. Thank you Mccunicano! That works perfectly well and is surely to hook me!
VincentLUFan (
talk) (
Kenton!) 06:19, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
@
Mccunicano: It would be helpful to provide an updated hook for the promoter. I assume this is it?