The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 07:10, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
... that the William Ulmer Brewery, the first brewery to become a New York City landmark, produced up to 3,200,000 U.S. gal (12,000,000 L) of beer per year? Source:
NY Times 2010
ALT1:... that the William Ulmer Brewery, the first brewery designated as a New York City landmark, produced up to 3,200,000 U.S. gal (12,000,000 L) of beer per year? Source: NY Times 2010
5x expansion verified, no close paraphrasing found, neutral and meets length requirements. The first two hooks are probably the most interesting; hook facts are cited inline and have been verified. A QPQ has been done. I'm not yet giving this the tick yet as there are two questions that I have: although there was no close paraphrasing, Earwigs gave a score of 35.9% to
this link, and reading through it, some words do appear to be copied (such as "sole proprietor"), although this might be allowed per
WP:LIMITED. Secondly, ALT0 and ALT1 would require metric conversions (like in the article text) for Wikipedia's non-American readers. Once these are resolved this will be good to go.
Narutolovehinata5tccsdnew 00:44, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
@
Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for the review. I think Earwig's detector gave this result because these lines were previously in the article. I have rephrased them, and added conversion to the hooks as well.
epicgenius (
talk) 00:52, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 07:10, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
... that the William Ulmer Brewery, the first brewery to become a New York City landmark, produced up to 3,200,000 U.S. gal (12,000,000 L) of beer per year? Source:
NY Times 2010
ALT1:... that the William Ulmer Brewery, the first brewery designated as a New York City landmark, produced up to 3,200,000 U.S. gal (12,000,000 L) of beer per year? Source: NY Times 2010
5x expansion verified, no close paraphrasing found, neutral and meets length requirements. The first two hooks are probably the most interesting; hook facts are cited inline and have been verified. A QPQ has been done. I'm not yet giving this the tick yet as there are two questions that I have: although there was no close paraphrasing, Earwigs gave a score of 35.9% to
this link, and reading through it, some words do appear to be copied (such as "sole proprietor"), although this might be allowed per
WP:LIMITED. Secondly, ALT0 and ALT1 would require metric conversions (like in the article text) for Wikipedia's non-American readers. Once these are resolved this will be good to go.
Narutolovehinata5tccsdnew 00:44, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
@
Narutolovehinata5: Thanks for the review. I think Earwig's detector gave this result because these lines were previously in the article. I have rephrased them, and added conversion to the hooks as well.
epicgenius (
talk) 00:52, 28 October 2019 (UTC)