The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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the article's talk page or
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The result was: promoted by
TheAwesomeHwyh (
talk) 17:13, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
Created by
CAPTAIN MEDUSA (
talk). Self-nominated at 14:28, 2 June 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. However, you submitted this after the campaign was closed, so you can't speak of it in the present tense in the hook. The hook is also not so interesting. Wasn't the Yeti used by the Russian Olympics? Since the campaign has ended, it's fine to mention some of the criticism it received; some of those quotes are pretty funny. QPQ done.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:19, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
OK. I still think you're missing an opportunity to expand the article with more about the negative feedback they received. Let's formulate the hook this way:
ALT2a: ... that for its 2020 tourism campaign, the Government of Nepal proposed building 108 sculptures of the
Yeti painted by 108 different artists?
ALT2a hook ref verified and cited inline. Good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 19:24, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
TheAwesomeHwyh (
talk) 17:13, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
Created by
CAPTAIN MEDUSA (
talk). Self-nominated at 14:28, 2 June 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. However, you submitted this after the campaign was closed, so you can't speak of it in the present tense in the hook. The hook is also not so interesting. Wasn't the Yeti used by the Russian Olympics? Since the campaign has ended, it's fine to mention some of the criticism it received; some of those quotes are pretty funny. QPQ done.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:19, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
OK. I still think you're missing an opportunity to expand the article with more about the negative feedback they received. Let's formulate the hook this way:
ALT2a: ... that for its 2020 tourism campaign, the Government of Nepal proposed building 108 sculptures of the
Yeti painted by 108 different artists?
ALT2a hook ref verified and cited inline. Good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 19:24, 6 July 2020 (UTC)