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The sentencePhyllis Marie Jensen (14 December 2015). Artist Emily Carr and the Spirit of the Land: A Jungian Portrait. Routledge. pp. 97–100. ISBN 978-1-317-51886-0. At this stage, several paintings are best described as transitional as they blend her First nation Art with her later focus on the land. Indian Church (1929) is a prime example of this transition. Lawren Harris praised it, bought it, hung it in his dining room, sent it to exhibitions and bequeathed it to the Art Gallery of Ontario. [...] Emily tells of seeing her painting Indian Church (1929) in Harris's Toronto home and thinking "The house must have bewitched this thing! It was better than I thought." Yet, she found herself unable to look at it because people were saying kind things and she was unused to praise and felt embarrassed.
Davis remarks "The flat front of the building and the geometric crispness of its shape contrast markedly with the organic volume of the tree boughs and the shallow recession into the forest...is a direct quote from the Ann Davis book and the Ann Davis reference is at the end of the paragraph. All sentences in the Ann Davis paragraph are verified by the Davis reference at the end of that paragraph. I chose not to clutter the Davis paragraph, or any other paragraph, by adding the same reference at the end of each sentence, within the same paragraph. Also a sentence in the article mentions that Carr in her autobiography "felt the subject deeply" and the autobiography is reference [4] page 304 at the end of the sentence:
In her autobiography, Carr wrote that she "felt the subject deeply". She painted it at Friendly Cove, near a lighthouse.[4]. I included ref [8] because it includes reference to Davis's "new interpretation" evaluation of the painting. In any case, I have added citations closely to the descriptions you mentioned and made other small adjustments. Please let me know if you have any further concerns. Dr. K. 18:10, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
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Created by Dr.K. ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:33, 25 January 2017 (UTC).
The sentencePhyllis Marie Jensen (14 December 2015). Artist Emily Carr and the Spirit of the Land: A Jungian Portrait. Routledge. pp. 97–100. ISBN 978-1-317-51886-0. At this stage, several paintings are best described as transitional as they blend her First nation Art with her later focus on the land. Indian Church (1929) is a prime example of this transition. Lawren Harris praised it, bought it, hung it in his dining room, sent it to exhibitions and bequeathed it to the Art Gallery of Ontario. [...] Emily tells of seeing her painting Indian Church (1929) in Harris's Toronto home and thinking "The house must have bewitched this thing! It was better than I thought." Yet, she found herself unable to look at it because people were saying kind things and she was unused to praise and felt embarrassed.
Davis remarks "The flat front of the building and the geometric crispness of its shape contrast markedly with the organic volume of the tree boughs and the shallow recession into the forest...is a direct quote from the Ann Davis book and the Ann Davis reference is at the end of the paragraph. All sentences in the Ann Davis paragraph are verified by the Davis reference at the end of that paragraph. I chose not to clutter the Davis paragraph, or any other paragraph, by adding the same reference at the end of each sentence, within the same paragraph. Also a sentence in the article mentions that Carr in her autobiography "felt the subject deeply" and the autobiography is reference [4] page 304 at the end of the sentence:
In her autobiography, Carr wrote that she "felt the subject deeply". She painted it at Friendly Cove, near a lighthouse.[4]. I included ref [8] because it includes reference to Davis's "new interpretation" evaluation of the painting. In any case, I have added citations closely to the descriptions you mentioned and made other small adjustments. Please let me know if you have any further concerns. Dr. K. 18:10, 3 February 2017 (UTC)