The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Zanhe (
talk) 17:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Created by
Nvvchar (
talk). Self-nominated at 01:44, 24 March 2016 (UTC).
New at the time of nomination, long enough, QPQ done, no images, neutral and no possible copyvios. Hooks checks out in ref 3 and 2, but not in 1 and 4, which are cited. I guess you misplaced the refs. That needs to be fixed. Also, it might be confusing to people with poor global geographic knowledge. One sentence says she was born in Fiji and next says she studied at Bangalore University. One would assume the university is in Fiji! §§
Dharmadhyaksha§§ {
Talk /
Edits} 18:29, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
Dharmadhyaksha Thanks for the review. 'India' added after Bangalore University. Refs have been rearranged and as a result the numbers have changed. Pl see.Nvvchar. 01:04, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Did some minor copy editing. Good to go now... §§
Dharmadhyaksha§§ {
Talk /
Edits} 04:09, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Hook is way too wordy. I'm going to promote the hook, but shortening it to:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Zanhe (
talk) 17:24, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Created by
Nvvchar (
talk). Self-nominated at 01:44, 24 March 2016 (UTC).
New at the time of nomination, long enough, QPQ done, no images, neutral and no possible copyvios. Hooks checks out in ref 3 and 2, but not in 1 and 4, which are cited. I guess you misplaced the refs. That needs to be fixed. Also, it might be confusing to people with poor global geographic knowledge. One sentence says she was born in Fiji and next says she studied at Bangalore University. One would assume the university is in Fiji! §§
Dharmadhyaksha§§ {
Talk /
Edits} 18:29, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
Dharmadhyaksha Thanks for the review. 'India' added after Bangalore University. Refs have been rearranged and as a result the numbers have changed. Pl see.Nvvchar. 01:04, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Did some minor copy editing. Good to go now... §§
Dharmadhyaksha§§ {
Talk /
Edits} 04:09, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
Hook is way too wordy. I'm going to promote the hook, but shortening it to: