The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:32, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
Comment: If this page history is a little funky, its because the first nomination was badly formatted to the point of breaking the code, so I deleted the page and recreated it as the fastest way of fixing the mess. Cheers,
Vanamonde (
talk) 06:44, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
Overall: Rephrase the line "...with close ties to the traditional merchant class and the clergy", as it appears in the
Britannica source. Exempt from QPQ, < 5 DYK credits.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 19:08, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
Comment The English needs a quick going-over from a native speaker, especially adding "the" at numerous points.
Johnbod (
talk) 17:55, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
Comment Want to mention that the assassin has
an article in English wikipedia. Also for the merchant class, you can link to
Bazaari.
AlmaBeta (
talk) 04:33, 18 November 2016 (UTC)
Good point,
AlmaBeta. Are you considering including a link to
Khalil Tahmasebi in the hook? Maybe in place of the link to
Fada'iyan-e Islam? Feel free to go ahead and include the link to
Bazaari, and rephrase the line if you like.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 17:44, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
Cleaned up, and should now be ready to go.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 00:57, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:32, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
Comment: If this page history is a little funky, its because the first nomination was badly formatted to the point of breaking the code, so I deleted the page and recreated it as the fastest way of fixing the mess. Cheers,
Vanamonde (
talk) 06:44, 14 October 2016 (UTC)
Overall: Rephrase the line "...with close ties to the traditional merchant class and the clergy", as it appears in the
Britannica source. Exempt from QPQ, < 5 DYK credits.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 19:08, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
Comment The English needs a quick going-over from a native speaker, especially adding "the" at numerous points.
Johnbod (
talk) 17:55, 17 November 2016 (UTC)
Comment Want to mention that the assassin has
an article in English wikipedia. Also for the merchant class, you can link to
Bazaari.
AlmaBeta (
talk) 04:33, 18 November 2016 (UTC)
Good point,
AlmaBeta. Are you considering including a link to
Khalil Tahmasebi in the hook? Maybe in place of the link to
Fada'iyan-e Islam? Feel free to go ahead and include the link to
Bazaari, and rephrase the line if you like.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 17:44, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
Cleaned up, and should now be ready to go.
AdventurousSquirrel (
talk) 00:57, 6 December 2016 (UTC)