The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa (
talk) 19:51, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
ALT2, though it is long, it is eventually clearer and more specific.
OccultZone (
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Don't you think that you have used a long quotation and it is not very specific to the event? One that begins from "it is not true..." and ends with "..forbidden for us to enter".
OccultZone (
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Full review needed, including length, newness, and all the other DYK criteria.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 13:57, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
New enough (as expanded), long enough, QPQ done, no copyvios found. I don't like ALT0 (second battle of what?), ALT1's a bit boring and although ALT2 is a bit long, is the best of a bad bunch. If you could condense it down slightly, that would be great.--Launchballer 13:49, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
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Launchballer: What do you have to say about the use of quotations? Our editors are obviously capable of paraphrasing and using a quote that is more specific to the event.
OccultZone (
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Quotes of more than 40 words have to be placed in a quote box per
WP:QUOTE, which I've done. Other than that, absolutely nothing.--Launchballer 15:36, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
Copy edited original and ALT2 hooks.
George Ho (
talk) 05:33, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
This nomination has been present long enough. This doesn't matter much, although it helps fit in with other hooks in one set.
George Ho (
talk) 18:52, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa (
talk) 19:51, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
ALT2, though it is long, it is eventually clearer and more specific.
OccultZone (
Talk •
Contributions •
Log) 07:56, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
Don't you think that you have used a long quotation and it is not very specific to the event? One that begins from "it is not true..." and ends with "..forbidden for us to enter".
OccultZone (
Talk •
Contributions •
Log) 08:01, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
Full review needed, including length, newness, and all the other DYK criteria.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 13:57, 9 May 2015 (UTC)
New enough (as expanded), long enough, QPQ done, no copyvios found. I don't like ALT0 (second battle of what?), ALT1's a bit boring and although ALT2 is a bit long, is the best of a bad bunch. If you could condense it down slightly, that would be great.--Launchballer 13:49, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
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Launchballer: What do you have to say about the use of quotations? Our editors are obviously capable of paraphrasing and using a quote that is more specific to the event.
OccultZone (
Talk •
Contributions •
Log) 13:58, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
Quotes of more than 40 words have to be placed in a quote box per
WP:QUOTE, which I've done. Other than that, absolutely nothing.--Launchballer 15:36, 12 May 2015 (UTC)
Copy edited original and ALT2 hooks.
George Ho (
talk) 05:33, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
This nomination has been present long enough. This doesn't matter much, although it helps fit in with other hooks in one set.
George Ho (
talk) 18:52, 13 May 2015 (UTC)