The following is an archived discussion of Seattle riot of 1886's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
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The result was: rejected by —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:47, 30 April 2013 (UTC).
The information in the hook is disputed. Some say 150 immigrants, others say 200. You can take care of the issue by adding the words "up to" before 200. Also, here are some close paraphrasing concerns goin on here (ref 9, ref 8, ref 5d, ref 5c). At 5b, there's a claim concerning martial law that is not backed up by the sources. 5a makes a claim about $150,000. That is not backed up by the source either. There's probably more. Please rewrite this article. In some spots it needs citations, in others it engages in close paraphrasing.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:44, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of Seattle riot of 1886's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
(talk) page, the nominated article's
(talk) page, or the Did you know(talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page.See the talk page guidelines for
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The result was: rejected by —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:47, 30 April 2013 (UTC).
The information in the hook is disputed. Some say 150 immigrants, others say 200. You can take care of the issue by adding the words "up to" before 200. Also, here are some close paraphrasing concerns goin on here (ref 9, ref 8, ref 5d, ref 5c). At 5b, there's a claim concerning martial law that is not backed up by the sources. 5a makes a claim about $150,000. That is not backed up by the source either. There's probably more. Please rewrite this article. In some spots it needs citations, in others it engages in close paraphrasing.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:44, 30 April 2013 (UTC)