The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 22:38, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
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Created by Ayakanaa ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:31, 29 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Ryokuoushoku Shakai; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook eligibility:
QPQ: None required. |
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Ayakanaa: Thank you for this submission! The article and the hook both look alright, but the former likely needs to be copy-edited a little more (did you translate it directly from the ja.wiki page?), while the latter is slightly unclear, so I think you should re-word it by "name-dropping" the band directly and trying to make the hook sound simpler. Also, I need to know if this is your first DYK entry, since users who have nominated at least 5 articles need to submit a
QPQ review, as well.
Oltrepier (
talk) 15:38, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 22:38, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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Created by Ayakanaa ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:31, 29 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Ryokuoushoku Shakai; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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|
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: None required. |
Overall:
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Ayakanaa: Thank you for this submission! The article and the hook both look alright, but the former likely needs to be copy-edited a little more (did you translate it directly from the ja.wiki page?), while the latter is slightly unclear, so I think you should re-word it by "name-dropping" the band directly and trying to make the hook sound simpler. Also, I need to know if this is your first DYK entry, since users who have nominated at least 5 articles need to submit a
QPQ review, as well.
Oltrepier (
talk) 15:38, 1 January 2024 (UTC)