The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 00:28, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
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Created by Philafrenzy ( talk) and Whispyhistory ( talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy ( talk) at 22:55, 4 May 2018 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Hook eligibility:
QPQ: - Nominator is
Philafrenzy, whereas QPQ provided was completed by co-author
Whispyhistory.
Overall:
Article created 2 May 2018, nominated 4 May 2018. 2045 characters, start class. Cited and neutral. Per Earwig's Copyvio Detector, 29.1%, with no apparent copyvio upon manual inspection. Wording of hook implies that the double tracheotomy tube invented by the subject is still popular, whereas the article states that the tube "appeared to have been much used [popular] at one time," and isn't necessarily still popular today. Recommend rewording. The surgeon's invention is an interesting fact, though I'm hesitant because I'm not sure if a broad audience knows what a tracheotomy tube is. Still, it's wikilinked, so they could always find out. No picture is used (too bad we don't have a picture of an original tracheotomy tube!). QPQ performed by co-author, not nominator; is
Whispyhistory willing to take over the nomination? ―
Biochemistry🙴⤠01:47, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
ALT1..that the once popular double tracheotomy tube was invented by Georgian surgeon Ralph Smith O’bré?
ALT2..18th century Irish surgeon Ralph Smith O’bré invented a one time popular tracheotomy tube?
It is ok for me to have done QPQ. Whispyhistory ( talk) 06:05, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 00:28, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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Created by Philafrenzy ( talk) and Whispyhistory ( talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy ( talk) at 22:55, 4 May 2018 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook eligibility:
QPQ: - Nominator is
Philafrenzy, whereas QPQ provided was completed by co-author
Whispyhistory.
Overall:
Article created 2 May 2018, nominated 4 May 2018. 2045 characters, start class. Cited and neutral. Per Earwig's Copyvio Detector, 29.1%, with no apparent copyvio upon manual inspection. Wording of hook implies that the double tracheotomy tube invented by the subject is still popular, whereas the article states that the tube "appeared to have been much used [popular] at one time," and isn't necessarily still popular today. Recommend rewording. The surgeon's invention is an interesting fact, though I'm hesitant because I'm not sure if a broad audience knows what a tracheotomy tube is. Still, it's wikilinked, so they could always find out. No picture is used (too bad we don't have a picture of an original tracheotomy tube!). QPQ performed by co-author, not nominator; is
Whispyhistory willing to take over the nomination? ―
Biochemistry🙴⤠01:47, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
ALT1..that the once popular double tracheotomy tube was invented by Georgian surgeon Ralph Smith O’bré?
ALT2..18th century Irish surgeon Ralph Smith O’bré invented a one time popular tracheotomy tube?
It is ok for me to have done QPQ. Whispyhistory ( talk) 06:05, 11 May 2018 (UTC)