The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Lightburst (
talk) 02:58, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
... that
Michael Morpurgo said that the inspiration for the plot of Private Peaceful came from the story of Sergeant John Thomas Wall, a man executed for desertion? Source: Abrams, Rebecca (27 September 2003). "Anthem for Doomed Youth". The Daily Telegraph. p. 10.
Important article about a heartbreaking story. Nominated within four days of achieving GA, long enough, well-sourced, neutral (though sad). Earwig says copyvio unlikely. QPQ is done. Re: hooks, ALT0 checks out and is fine. ALT1 could be great, but it repeats "Peaceful" 3 times and seems like too much telling (i.e., no lingering question that makes you want to click). Is there a way to reword and simplify? Maybe it just came from a (mysterious) gravestone? @
Onegreatjoke:Cielquiparle (
talk) 20:01, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
Request new reviewer to review ALT2 and ALT3. And now ALT1b and ALT1c below!
ALT1b: ... that the name of the book Private Peaceful came from a gravestone that later turned out to be misspelled?
ALT1c: ... that the name of the book Private Peaceful came from a misspelled gravestone?
Cielquiparle (
talk) 04:08, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
QPQ is done. The copyvio detector picks up a mirror site, but the article appears to be free of violations. The article has been improved to good article status and was nominated within the time constraint. The article is well written and neutral with the correct inline citations. ALT1c is interesting, cited and in the article.
Bruxton (
talk) 16:17, 13 February 2023 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Lightburst (
talk) 02:58, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
... that
Michael Morpurgo said that the inspiration for the plot of Private Peaceful came from the story of Sergeant John Thomas Wall, a man executed for desertion? Source: Abrams, Rebecca (27 September 2003). "Anthem for Doomed Youth". The Daily Telegraph. p. 10.
Important article about a heartbreaking story. Nominated within four days of achieving GA, long enough, well-sourced, neutral (though sad). Earwig says copyvio unlikely. QPQ is done. Re: hooks, ALT0 checks out and is fine. ALT1 could be great, but it repeats "Peaceful" 3 times and seems like too much telling (i.e., no lingering question that makes you want to click). Is there a way to reword and simplify? Maybe it just came from a (mysterious) gravestone? @
Onegreatjoke:Cielquiparle (
talk) 20:01, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
Request new reviewer to review ALT2 and ALT3. And now ALT1b and ALT1c below!
ALT1b: ... that the name of the book Private Peaceful came from a gravestone that later turned out to be misspelled?
ALT1c: ... that the name of the book Private Peaceful came from a misspelled gravestone?
Cielquiparle (
talk) 04:08, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
QPQ is done. The copyvio detector picks up a mirror site, but the article appears to be free of violations. The article has been improved to good article status and was nominated within the time constraint. The article is well written and neutral with the correct inline citations. ALT1c is interesting, cited and in the article.
Bruxton (
talk) 16:17, 13 February 2023 (UTC)