The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Created by
Santoshdts (
talk). Self-nominated at 08:27, 5 July 2020 (UTC).
I think there is some confusion here. The following are all currently separate articles. Even the bold text in both of your hooks link to different articles.
Please check.
DTM (
talk) 09:52, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you @
DiplomatTesterMan: for pointing out the error. Auto-correct on my iPad did the trick and even I didn't notice it. I have corrected the title now. Hope this is good. Thanks again.
Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 10:03, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
@
DiplomatTesterMan: Why is the page name in Hindi instead of English? This is the English Wikipedia after all.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:08, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
Oh, brother. That would be quite a job. Well, at least pipe the link in this hook, please. Or use its English name.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:32, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:I've made some minor alterations to the hooks, hope these are more relevant to international readers:
The ALTs are great, thanks. I tweaked the language a bit and prefer ALT2a. Review to come.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:51, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I have added "clarification needed" tags to the article where you're using the word crore; please write these figures in English terms. I have also added a "citation needed" tag to the claim that it is the largest in the world. If you don't have a solid reference for that, you could just write one of the largest in the world, but it still needs a cite.
ALT2a looks like the most interesting hook because it provides some details. I would suggest writing it like this:
No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
Yoninah (
talk) 19:09, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you
Yoninah for reviewing the article and DYK nomination. I have edited the article and have cleared the maintanance tags placed. The ALT2b suggestion looks much better and interesting. Thanks again.
Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 19:25, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, everything looks good now. ALT2b hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2b good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:17, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Created by
Santoshdts (
talk). Self-nominated at 08:27, 5 July 2020 (UTC).
I think there is some confusion here. The following are all currently separate articles. Even the bold text in both of your hooks link to different articles.
Please check.
DTM (
talk) 09:52, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you @
DiplomatTesterMan: for pointing out the error. Auto-correct on my iPad did the trick and even I didn't notice it. I have corrected the title now. Hope this is good. Thanks again.
Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 10:03, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
@
DiplomatTesterMan: Why is the page name in Hindi instead of English? This is the English Wikipedia after all.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:08, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
Oh, brother. That would be quite a job. Well, at least pipe the link in this hook, please. Or use its English name.
Yoninah (
talk) 14:32, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
@
Yoninah:I've made some minor alterations to the hooks, hope these are more relevant to international readers:
The ALTs are great, thanks. I tweaked the language a bit and prefer ALT2a. Review to come.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:51, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I have added "clarification needed" tags to the article where you're using the word crore; please write these figures in English terms. I have also added a "citation needed" tag to the claim that it is the largest in the world. If you don't have a solid reference for that, you could just write one of the largest in the world, but it still needs a cite.
ALT2a looks like the most interesting hook because it provides some details. I would suggest writing it like this:
No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits.
Yoninah (
talk) 19:09, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you
Yoninah for reviewing the article and DYK nomination. I have edited the article and have cleared the maintanance tags placed. The ALT2b suggestion looks much better and interesting. Thanks again.
Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 19:25, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, everything looks good now. ALT2b hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2b good to go.
Yoninah (
talk) 18:17, 30 July 2020 (UTC)