The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 19:04, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Ominae (
talk). Self-nominated at 06:03, 1 February 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. I have struck ALT0 as it contains too many acronyms. I am approving the ALT1 hook which is cited inline, the article is neutral, Earwig was clear and I detected no close paraphrasing issues.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 11:31, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
I suggest trimming the hook so it's more hooky, making the reader want to click on the article rather than just read the hook and move on:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 19:04, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
Created by
Ominae (
talk). Self-nominated at 06:03, 1 February 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. I have struck ALT0 as it contains too many acronyms. I am approving the ALT1 hook which is cited inline, the article is neutral, Earwig was clear and I detected no close paraphrasing issues.
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 11:31, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
I suggest trimming the hook so it's more hooky, making the reader want to click on the article rather than just read the hook and move on: