The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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This looks mostly fine to me. New enough and long enough, well-written and laid out, and the article is reliably sourced. However, the key hook fact - that the piece is "arrangement for clarinet and orchestra of Johannes Brahms's Clarinet Sonata Op. 120, No. 1 by Italian composer Luciano Berio", to quote the lead - does not appear to be sourced. This needs to be fixed before I can approve this hook.
Prioryman (
talk) 11:22, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
It is sourced now in the lead.
Author: the lead should be a summary of sourced info from the body. Please do that formatting, - copy from lead to body with the references. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 11:36, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
This looks mostly fine to me. New enough and long enough, well-written and laid out, and the article is reliably sourced. However, the key hook fact - that the piece is "arrangement for clarinet and orchestra of Johannes Brahms's Clarinet Sonata Op. 120, No. 1 by Italian composer Luciano Berio", to quote the lead - does not appear to be sourced. This needs to be fixed before I can approve this hook.
Prioryman (
talk) 11:22, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
It is sourced now in the lead.
Author: the lead should be a summary of sourced info from the body. Please do that formatting, - copy from lead to body with the references. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 11:36, 8 May 2015 (UTC)