The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Allen3talk 22:00, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues
Date, length and hook all OK. I suggest maybe removing a few links (except the invested one) because it may deflect potential views away from the article, but not a major issue. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (
talk) 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
The article needs copyediting. Commas are missing and sentences are fragmented, e.g.: "Noel Ernest Money was born in
Montreal Canada on 17 March 1867. The eldest son of Captain Albert William Money of the
Royal Canadian Rifle Regiment." The last clause in the hook (after the comma) also seems to be hanging without making sense.
Yoninah (
talk) 01:28, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
It has been over two weeks without any response or action; the article and hook both still need copyediting, and the nominator hasn't edited on Wikipedia for ten days. It's time to close this nomination.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 15:21, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Allen3talk 22:00, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues
Date, length and hook all OK. I suggest maybe removing a few links (except the invested one) because it may deflect potential views away from the article, but not a major issue. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (
talk) 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
The article needs copyediting. Commas are missing and sentences are fragmented, e.g.: "Noel Ernest Money was born in
Montreal Canada on 17 March 1867. The eldest son of Captain Albert William Money of the
Royal Canadian Rifle Regiment." The last clause in the hook (after the comma) also seems to be hanging without making sense.
Yoninah (
talk) 01:28, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
It has been over two weeks without any response or action; the article and hook both still need copyediting, and the nominator hasn't edited on Wikipedia for ten days. It's time to close this nomination.
BlueMoonset (
talk) 15:21, 18 January 2014 (UTC)