The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 06:41, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
... that Nano Riantiarno wrote "operas" about white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?
Created by
Crisco 1492 (
talk). Self nom at 13:04, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Size/referencing/etc. look good. However, I'm a little iffy about the hook - are the Cockroach Opera and the Constipation Opera actually about these subjects? Isn't it just the titles?
Roscelese (
talk ⋅
contribs) 16:55, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Metaphorically, but the context is not in the article. How about ALT1 "... that Nano Riantiarno's "opera" titles include white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?"
Having Opera so many times seems pointless. How about ALT3 ... that Nano Riantiarno's works include the Cockroach, White Snake, and Constipation "operas"?
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 06:41, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
... that Nano Riantiarno wrote "operas" about white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?
Created by
Crisco 1492 (
talk). Self nom at 13:04, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Size/referencing/etc. look good. However, I'm a little iffy about the hook - are the Cockroach Opera and the Constipation Opera actually about these subjects? Isn't it just the titles?
Roscelese (
talk ⋅
contribs) 16:55, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Metaphorically, but the context is not in the article. How about ALT1 "... that Nano Riantiarno's "opera" titles include white snakes, cockroaches, and constipation?"
Having Opera so many times seems pointless. How about ALT3 ... that Nano Riantiarno's works include the Cockroach, White Snake, and Constipation "operas"?
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 04:26, 21 August 2011 (UTC)