The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 01:44, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
Created by
P199 (
talk). Self-nominated at 15:49, 10 September 2021 (UTC).
Interesting park, on fine sources, offline source accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I am not happy with the hook. I believe if you want to pursue the fact, you need to say where on Earth that is because in Egypt or China, the dating would not be remarkable. Also I wonder if it really is here, where nothing much remains of that history. Your choice: reword or say something else. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 14:14, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Good point. I added the location. For good measure, I added an alternative hook. Now it's your choice again. ;-) P 1 9 9✉ 17:58, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Thank you. Next time, please don't change a hook which has been discussed, but word an ALT, - easier to follow the conversation. Both hooks are too wordy for my taste. Would you agree for simpler versions:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk) 01:44, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
Created by
P199 (
talk). Self-nominated at 15:49, 10 September 2021 (UTC).
Interesting park, on fine sources, offline source accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I am not happy with the hook. I believe if you want to pursue the fact, you need to say where on Earth that is because in Egypt or China, the dating would not be remarkable. Also I wonder if it really is here, where nothing much remains of that history. Your choice: reword or say something else. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 14:14, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Good point. I added the location. For good measure, I added an alternative hook. Now it's your choice again. ;-) P 1 9 9✉ 17:58, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
Thank you. Next time, please don't change a hook which has been discussed, but word an ALT, - easier to follow the conversation. Both hooks are too wordy for my taste. Would you agree for simpler versions: