The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 16:26, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Hooks all Ok for length, article is new enough, long enough, properly sourced, neutral and so on. I personally like ALT1 the best, but you have to correct some typos there ("pictured" not "picture") and perhaps wikilink to an appropriate
women's rights article? You also have room in the character count to replace "new" with " post-
Arab Spring" which I think is more informative to the reader. (I'm not going to propose ALT2 because then someone else has to review the DYK, but if you want to incorporate my suggestions into your own ALT 2 as a variation on ALT1, that's OK).
Montanabw(talk) 22:50, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
Montanabw Thanks for the review. I think I have made the appropriate corrections.
SusunW (
talk) 22:59, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
Good to go with ALT2.
Montanabw(talk) 23:14, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 16:26, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
Hooks all Ok for length, article is new enough, long enough, properly sourced, neutral and so on. I personally like ALT1 the best, but you have to correct some typos there ("pictured" not "picture") and perhaps wikilink to an appropriate
women's rights article? You also have room in the character count to replace "new" with " post-
Arab Spring" which I think is more informative to the reader. (I'm not going to propose ALT2 because then someone else has to review the DYK, but if you want to incorporate my suggestions into your own ALT 2 as a variation on ALT1, that's OK).
Montanabw(talk) 22:50, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
Montanabw Thanks for the review. I think I have made the appropriate corrections.
SusunW (
talk) 22:59, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
Good to go with ALT2.
Montanabw(talk) 23:14, 15 December 2015 (UTC)