The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:36, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
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5x expanded by Lee Vilenski ( talk). Self-nominated at 12:20, 9 January 2019 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: None required. |
Overall:
Article is long enough and new enough. This is the second of four outstanding DYK nominations for this user with no DYK credits yet, therefore QPQ is not required. The name's pronunciation needs to be converted into an {{
IPA}} template. Birthplace and citation need to be moved out of the opening sentence as per
MOS:LEADBIO. The citation as a club owner from the lead section should be moved to the similar sentence in the Personal Life section. The first paragraph of the career section needs a citation at its end, instead of in the middle of a sentence. Each line in the achievement section should have a citation, even if it's the same citation as in the main text. In the Mosconi Cup section the word "aggreved" appears, and I am unsure if it should be aggrieved or aggravated. No plagiarism issues found. ALT0 is correct as per the cited hook, but it is not directly mentioned in the article. ALT1 cannot be verified as the link does not go to the target.
Flibirigit (
talk) 23:31, 31 January 2019 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Cwmhiraeth (
talk) 06:36, 4 February 2019 (UTC)
DYK toolbox |
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5x expanded by Lee Vilenski ( talk). Self-nominated at 12:20, 9 January 2019 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: None required. |
Overall:
Article is long enough and new enough. This is the second of four outstanding DYK nominations for this user with no DYK credits yet, therefore QPQ is not required. The name's pronunciation needs to be converted into an {{
IPA}} template. Birthplace and citation need to be moved out of the opening sentence as per
MOS:LEADBIO. The citation as a club owner from the lead section should be moved to the similar sentence in the Personal Life section. The first paragraph of the career section needs a citation at its end, instead of in the middle of a sentence. Each line in the achievement section should have a citation, even if it's the same citation as in the main text. In the Mosconi Cup section the word "aggreved" appears, and I am unsure if it should be aggrieved or aggravated. No plagiarism issues found. ALT0 is correct as per the cited hook, but it is not directly mentioned in the article. ALT1 cannot be verified as the link does not go to the target.
Flibirigit (
talk) 23:31, 31 January 2019 (UTC)