The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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The result was: promoted by
PFHLai (
talk) 20:05, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
Created by
SusunW (
talk). Self-nominated at 18:54, 10 December 2015 (UTC).
Interesting career with difficulties, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hook is sourced but reads a bit too harmless. Can you stress the tension of those 13 years a bit more. It would also not hurt to say that she was the first women ordained. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 23:36, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the review
Gerda Arendt I was trying to avoid using "first woman" as it seems to be used so often, but what about:
ALT1 ... that after 13 years of rejection, Lydia Emelie Gruchy, who had graduated with honors and her theological degree, became the first woman ordained by the
United Church of Canada in 1936? or
ALT2 ... that after 13 years of ignoring the requests of the Saskatchewan Council on behalf of Lydia Emelie Gruchy, she was finally ordained by the
United Church of Canada in 1936?
SusunW (
talk) 00:33, 13 December 2015 (UTC)
My wording of the same would be
ALT3 ... that 13 years after Lydia Emelie Gruchy graduated her theological studies with honors, she was finally ordained in 1936 as the first female minister of the
United Church of Canada? --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 07:53, 13 December 2015 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
PFHLai (
talk) 20:05, 26 December 2015 (UTC)
Created by
SusunW (
talk). Self-nominated at 18:54, 10 December 2015 (UTC).
Interesting career with difficulties, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hook is sourced but reads a bit too harmless. Can you stress the tension of those 13 years a bit more. It would also not hurt to say that she was the first women ordained. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 23:36, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the review
Gerda Arendt I was trying to avoid using "first woman" as it seems to be used so often, but what about:
ALT1 ... that after 13 years of rejection, Lydia Emelie Gruchy, who had graduated with honors and her theological degree, became the first woman ordained by the
United Church of Canada in 1936? or
ALT2 ... that after 13 years of ignoring the requests of the Saskatchewan Council on behalf of Lydia Emelie Gruchy, she was finally ordained by the
United Church of Canada in 1936?
SusunW (
talk) 00:33, 13 December 2015 (UTC)
My wording of the same would be
ALT3 ... that 13 years after Lydia Emelie Gruchy graduated her theological studies with honors, she was finally ordained in 1936 as the first female minister of the
United Church of Canada? --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 07:53, 13 December 2015 (UTC)